Here are my hints. Note that these are NOT IN ORDER OF RANK. They follow a different order that I think y'all should be able to figure out.... (But maybe not after seeing the confusion over Jackson's scores
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1 – I really love the way the title works in the song.
2 – But still, the chorus is so important and I felt like this one wasn’t as strong as it could be and I don’t even understand what it’s saying tbh.
3 – Some of the word choices were awkward or redundant or maybe there were just typos/words missing?
4 – I like the message of the song, and thought some lines were cool while others were kind of clunky.
5 – ... I feel like I should ignore those parts and judge the rest. The rest is fine.
6 – I like some of the chorus here and think the song worked as a duet, but the message is muddled to me.
7 – Some of your word choices/phrases get lost in the poeticism and sacrifice meaning in that move.
8 – Were you really clamoring to post THESE lyrics in the thread?
9 – This song reads like it could be an actual club/radio hit and I think the premise is simple but effective.
10 – You had an interesting take on the challenge.
11 – Maybe it’s just my personal preference, but lyrics this explicit aren’t all that captivating to me.
12 – The structure of the song is a little messy at times.
13 – This song feels like how Nicki described PnP before it came out, and that mood/message is captivating, but I think it doesn’t work for me on a structural level.
14 – This song is successful in one key way that other songs aren’t: a cohesive narrative that compels the song forward.
15 – Is this even a duet?
16 – Some of these lyrics definitely made me laugh and I thought some of the prolonged rhyming was impressive.
17 – The chorus, which should be one of the strongest parts of the song, is sort of a non-event.
18 – The rhythm was kind of all over the place here.
19 – You’re an early contestant to watch…
20 – A lot of the lyrics are really familiar.
