Originally posted by GotSkill
This was almost overly simplistic. I had to look up what styx meant too . The second half of the verse redeems the first half though. In the end it made me smile.
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Originally posted by feelsikeadream
I don’t know where you’re going with the fiery styx, but I liked the short lines followed by a long one and like your AVI.
I knew you guys weren't going to understand what I meant by "the first time we rode down the fiery styx"
Since styx is the river to the underworld or hell, I used it as to mean the path/road of sin which is what some people consider premarital sex to be. If that makes any sense.
I've forgotten how much I love this game tbh. When are we getting the results?
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Originally posted by Hugamari
I will have comments next week, methinks. Be prepared for my Paula like comments because I don't have it in me to be mean.
Aw, I'm guessing peeslikeastream will be the Nait Phoenix Simon Cowell of this judging panel then with GString as the token 'bad bitch' who actually whips these shrimps into shape with love and affection.
Originally posted by GotSkill
Most of your chorus was pretty uninspiring. Still, one of your lines stood out to me as one of the best single lines I received this week and that was “the ocean between us, call it a galaxy”. I don’t know why I loved it but it boosted your points by a lot.
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Originally posted by feelsikeadream
Some of the phrases/images were a little odd to me, but I liked the mood and the end of the chorus.
Not one good line in the chorus saving my ass.
I acknowledge my phrasing was weird - I was trying to write about looking forward to the person coming back, I guess - and the chorus was supposed to be like wanting to share a dream with the person and I'd go to sleep in sunlight while they were at night, etc. I see co-writing is not my strong point.
So Hugamari is like the Britney of Platinum Hit? Just sits there pretty and quiet and murmurs the well-placed "definitely" or "no" from a distance?
OT: Hey I guess my comments weren't too bad. I'm glad you guys seen the "Cops" reference/sample in the song. I thought you wouldn't understand me
I wanted to comment on your song, actually - I felt like the song would end up being a really catchy song if it sampled the 'Bad Boys' part of that song, kind of like Anaconda in a way? Just modernize the sample and work around it, it'd end up being a really catchy radio song.
Yeah, yours and BeyonceHatesMe's are messed up. Just quote the post to read them, I can't figure it out
You little bitch, I told you it's because there are apostrophes in the collapse tag. Take those out and it'll work (although you'll need to name them differently)
This chorus is basically exactly what I’d expect from the verse you were given. It wasn’t bad, but it wasn’t anything special either.
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Originally posted by feelsikeadream
Since most of the lines are repeated in the chorus, we really only have a few lines to judge here, and these lines use pretty familiar language in talking about the subject matter. I like the way the lines are divided into two until the “The darkness” line.
I wanted to comment on your song, actually - I felt like the song would end up being a really catchy song if it sampled the 'Bad Boys' part of that song, kind of like Anaconda in a way? Just modernize the sample and work around it, it'd end up being a really catchy radio song.
Thanks babe!
And here I was thinking none of you would understand that part
I actually kind of laughed when I read the lyrics the first time to be honest. They were kind of overly sexual. When I write sexual songs I like to leave a lot to the imagination and instead focus on the feelings and emotions rather than the actual sexual acts. I gotta commend your honesty I guess
Umm, why did you compare our songwriting just to bring my song down?
It's not about how you write a song since everybody does it different, but whatever.
. The second half of the verse redeems the first half though. In the end it made me smile.
When are we getting the results? 
