[feelslikeadream]

Out of Huga's, I can be: 2, 9, 10.

9 and 10 could be anybody though

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

Out of Huga's, I can be: 2, 9, 10.

9 and 10 could be anybody though

[PeopleLikeUs]

8 is definitely me

[Tymps.]

I think I'm 9 or 10 I can't really be any other ones.

Welp, what if I got eliminated.

[The Original High]

4. I'm disappointed in you, sis. I also saw your avi before you fixed it.

This has gotta be me.

[Hugamari]

Everybody except one person has guessed right so far!

[Jackson]

I have a feeling I'm 9 just because Huga never seems to like my songs as much as the other judges. I could be wrong though

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by GotSkill

I have a feeling I'm 9 just because Huga never seems to like my songs as much as the other judges. I could be wrong though

[Nait Phoenix]

Nait's Hints :

1. Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger
2. One More Time
3. Get Lucky
4. Television Rules the Nation
5. Digital Love
6. Lose Yourself to Dance
7. Aerodynamic
8. Instant Crush
9. Technologic
10. Doin' It Right

[Jackson]

2 is the only one I think could be possible?

[feelslikeadream]

6 maybe? Or none.

Anyway, I assume we're just waiting for Jack! now and therefore should have results soon!

[Jack!]

My hints!

1. A bit basic and awkward.
2. They’re the type of lyrics that would actually touch other people.
3. Very weak chorus.
4. There was a distinct lack of flow.
5. You’re still missing crucial parts to your song like a structure.
6. I liked some of the images you were painting with the lyrics.
7. It was really cute in a love song way.
8. Really tugged on my heartstrings.
9. You have a fantastic outlook on provoking imagery.
10. The lyrical substance is really sweet and enjoyable to read.

[Prometheus.]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Hints~

1. Only person to get a max score from me. You literally blew me away with this! I see the improvement you were talking about.

2. Wow. I'm sorry that happened.

3. One of the most unique writers in the game.

4. I'm disappointed in you, sis. I also saw your avi before you fixed it.

5. Like...literally!

6. Touch me, touch me, please retweet.

7. Gaga's proud of you, sis.

8. 7 Minutes in Heaven teas.

9. Don't let my comments deter you this round. Maybe I just don't get it.

10. You're better than this...

Probably me

[UFO]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Hints~

1. Only person to get a max score from me. You literally blew me away with this! I see the improvement you were talking about.

2. Wow. I'm sorry that happened.

3. One of the most unique writers in the game.

4. I'm disappointed in you, sis. I also saw your avi before you fixed it.

5. Like...literally!

6. Touch me, touch me, please retweet.

7. Gaga's proud of you, sis.

8. 7 Minutes in Heaven teas.

9. Don't let my comments deter you this round. Maybe I just don't get it.

10. You're better than this...

1. I recently talked about improvement
2. Nope.
3. Imagery plays a huge role in my writing but I'm iffy about this one.
4. Lol nope.
5. Highly possible, like my song is title At a Standstill so..
6. Uh uh.
7. Not this one either.
8. I seriously doubt it.
9. Hmm, sounds a little personal and I don't have any problems with Huga's comments.
10. It literally could be anybody

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Nait's Hints :

1. Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger
2. One More Time
3. Get Lucky
4. Television Rules the Nation
5. Digital Love
6. Lose Yourself to Dance
7. Aerodynamic
8. Instant Crush
9. Technologic
10. Doin' It Right

ffffff I don't even know where to start with these cryptic ass hints

Originally posted by Jack!

My hints!

1. A bit basic and awkward.
2. They’re the type of lyrics that would actually touch other people.
3. Very weak chorus.
4. There was a distinct lack of flow.
5. You’re still missing crucial parts to your song like a structure.
6. I liked some of the images you were painting with the lyrics.
7. It was really cute in a love song way.
8. Really tugged on my heartstrings.
9. You have a fantastic outlook on provoking imagery.
10. The lyrical substance is really sweet and enjoyable to read.

1. There's a possibility, however, I feel like this one's not mine.
2. My song isn't particularly touching unless you're kinda like K. Michelle
3. Yep, most probably.
4. Not sure about this one so yup
5. I have a structure, thank you very much.
6. Lol my song is kinda about love but it's really not about love.
8. Hmmm K. Michelle again
9. Now see I think this hint is DEFINITELY mine.
10. Kinda

[Nait Phoenix]

Five minutes…

[UFO]

BITCH

[Nait Phoenix]

THE BOYS ARE BACK IN TOWN!!!

PeopleLikeUs - Seven Minutes

Originally posted by Jack Lees

OK. I think that you’ve had some great weeks and I’ve always been routing for you, but I feel this is too safe and basic. I know the task was hard, but you’re still missing crucial parts to your song like a structure. I hope you’re around next week so you get another chance.

Originally posted by Hugamari

All I can get from this is someone managing to fall in love and be life-shatteringly heart- broken all in the span of one game of 7 Minutes in Heaven. While that seems like an interesting concept, I don’t think that’s what you were going for.
Bar the emphasis on 7 minutes, this did the challenge requirements well.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

This challenge got the better of you. There was little need for "seven minutes" since all it meant in this song was "a unit of time". But, how you told the tale wasn't bad, just not memorable.

GotSkill - One Last Lullaby

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Really sweet! You did a good job with the flow, reading it felt smooth and the lyrical substance is really sweet and enjoyable to read. One of my favourite entires from you, so well done, keep it up!

Originally posted by Hugamari

Let me start off by apologizing to you. I have little-to-no faith in your ability when you submitted for the first challenge. I expected you to be gone within the first 3 rounds…so thank you for proving me wrong. I definitely see major improvement with this entry. I like how you referenced lullabies in the song, and the song itself is short enough to be one. The words are gentle enough to be one, too.

Brilliant. I hope you continue to grow through this competition – I’d love to see how far you can go.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Pretty cool that you got right under 140 words without having to use a [Repeat] section. Very in-depth, very gripping, very depressing… Lately, you've been improving so much, so you've gotta be doing something right!

Prometheus. - Again Someday

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Really nice man! It’s obviously a sad song and so much of the imagery in your lyrics really tugged on my heartstrings. I know the feeling you’re portraying in your lyrics and it touched me a bit. Good work!

Originally posted by Hugamari

You like keeping things literal, huh? That’s really my only problem with this. Well that, and the obnoxious numbers at the end of every line. Adam did it at the end of every part of the song, and it worked out well.

I think you fulfilled the requirements of the challenge well.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

The song was missing some sort of dynamic. Not bad, but I feel like it doesn't grasp me as well as I wish it would've. When I tried singing it, some of the lines didn't feel natural; I mean it's full on depressing from the get go, but it's too passive in the chorus and "finale" so the emotion doesn't strike me as well as it should've.

feelslikeadream - Bring Him Back

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Another sad song this week. This is a personal issue of course and it shows, but I really like your lyrics. They are meaning and I can tell reading them, they’re the type of lyrics that would actually be almost universal and probably touch other people. Great work, I liked these lyrics!

Originally posted by Hugamari

Now bitch, did you really need to unapologetically slap us in the face with reality for this entry. I’m legit depressed now. This kind of reminds me of Unconditionally if Katy wasn’t singing a beautiful love song, but singing about a tragedy.

One of your best entries so far, imo.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I hate you for this. Got me tearing up and s#!t! A real shame about your friend, though. Really man, I was literally crushed by this… it's so beautiful.

Alesus - Rush

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Not bad! Some really nice imagery in there and I think this is one of your stronger weeks. I liked some of the images you were painting with the lyrics, it made them much more enjoyable. Great work!

Originally posted by Hugamari

That antidepressants line stuck out like a sore thumb. I’d like to think anything that makes someone happy is an antidepressant, so this makes it sound like you want to be depressed…and what’s with the hate of being young? I wouldn’t say adolescence is a curse…being old is the curse. I guess you have your own thoughts, though. Don’t change that just because some uglee judge on a forum game didn’t “get it”.

The structure was okay…I mean, I got it – it exists. Kudos on that.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

That first pre-chorus really brought the whole song down! Without it, this would've been my favorite song of the bunch! I mean, I get it was suppose to fantastical, but it was so far out, the logic was gone…

Tymps. - Picture Perfect

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Very weak chorus. I’m not sure if that’s the point, but it almost came off as sloppy-weak. The verses have their highlights, but even then they’re not as good as your previous work. You had some nice imagery in there like the camera effects like greyscale and sepia, but overall not your best. Sorry, man.

Originally posted by Hugamari

I wasn’t counting the words (I’m sure Nait’s got that covered), but thanks for the word count.

Now onto the entry…it’s still you. If Nait were to send me all of the entries anonymously and tell me to just guess who is who, your entry would be the easiest to pick out. You have a clear style in everything you write, which I really like.

This, I think, exemplified the challenge requirements best. We get exactly what’s going on, and you did it in under 100 words.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I wouldn't say this because the challenge was "less is more", but seeing as you weren't even near the word limit, this seems appropriate to say: Dood, I wanted more… Your verses were great, but they outshined the most important parts of a song! The chorus was WAY too short and the bridge looked unfinished. You, yourself, said you had 42 words you could've added to this song; those could've probably helped!

Scorpio King - Fix Me

Originally posted by Jack Lees

A nice song, it was really cute in a love song way. Not the best lyrics this week, not your best overall, but they’re sweet and nice to read. Well done!

Originally posted by Hugamari

Reading this depressed me…Not because of the content of the song, but because this seems like a fall from grace for you. I didn’t like this nearly as much as I usually do. You’re usually one of the contestants I look forward to reading every week. It’s still nice and all, but I’m just left with this huge…”meh” feeling.

The “old/gone” part in the second verse was the worst part. It’s just so abrupt. I was expecting a rhyme. Like ‘told’, or ‘sold’…but gone popped up. I mean, it’s cute that you linked it to the end of verse one like that, but it didn’t really work well imo.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I want to love this, I really do, but this is a huge downfall from last week. It feels like I've heard this song before; the originality is this song is somewhat lacking. While I won't say this is a bad song, because in no way is it, but it's just so obvious that it's boring.

EatmeZayn - Injections

Originally posted by Jack Lees

You have a fantastic outlook on provoking imagery. Your songs are very much imagery based anyway, but whatever you do you seem to pull it out so vividly, it’s amazing. A controversial topic, but an important one too. Reminded me of a type of song Lana Del Rey would sing, I guess. The lyrics are great though, well done!

Originally posted by Hugamari

That escalated quickly…lol jk I get there’s a challenge to do. The chorus was great! It’s definitely the stand-out part of the song to me. Only thing that gets me is the 2 line/3 line thing. I get not everything is 4/4, but the chorus seems like it’s 4/4, as does the bridge, so the verses confuse me in that sense.

There could also be instrumental breaks (which I know I have said plenty of times is ugly to see [instrumental break] jammed into lyrics, and that’d probably send you over the word limit (I didn’t count), so you wouldn’t do that…So, I guess I’m just saying the verses threw me off.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Pretty good, not bad at all; in fact, it kinda rules. I really do enjoy the "fall from grace" stories, but this one pretty much revealed from the get-go that she isn't this perfect little girl. This actually inspired me to write a song, so good on you for that! (No, I'm not stealing your idea, that would be rude and improper of me as a host and judge…) Long story short, great job!

EuphorianSea - At a Standstill

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Eh. This was weird. The chorus was really basic, and while your verse lyrics were actually good, there was a distinct lack of flow. You would jump from several short lines to one big line which is really crammed and made it hard to read with a rhythm in my head. Could have been better, the chorus really goes nowhere. Sorry, man.

Originally posted by Hugamari

The boy who cried wolf who won’t have enough grains of salt to mask his tears”…Gaga would be proud. I do not see any reference to salt anywhere else in your song…or wolves…and I can’t even tell how the bridge would go. Seems like you’d either realllllly draw out the first 3 lines, or you’d have one of those disclaimer people from radio/tv ads fill in the last part of the bridge.

Sidenote: Is this song about crippling debt? Interesting thing to write about.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

This was suppose to mean something, right!? I was suppose to understand this, right? Seriously, it was like I was reading a whole bunch of really good lines mashed together in a weird potluck of a song. I only understood the whole thing around the bridge. For the most part, I was just lost. FYI, you probably wouldn't have hit the 140 mark if you got rid of five "yeahs"…

Lucky#17 - discus

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Not bad, could have been worse for sure. I feel like the lyrics were a bit basic and awkward though. It had it’s high points, like the chorus (I think the bit I’m thinking of is the chorus) but it certainly wasn’t your best. Wasn’t the worst this week, though.

Originally posted by Hugamari

Pardon me, young gent, but how were the pictures of the silver screen referred to as discuses? I see you said ‘think’, which is good, because never in my days have I’d seen the moving picture referred to as a discus.

I also don’t get the structure here. 2 lines, then 3 lines, then 5 lines…it’s a pretty zany setup you got there. I’m trying to find a melody here, but no dice. I hope you improve from this.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I don't even know where to begin with this. It was easy to understand, but you made it so exaggerated that it didn't really make much sense why. Plus, I think you're misinformed about the "discus"… I guess it's okay, but only because you're lucky I understand the concept and idea behind this…

[UFO]

Okay I'm gone sistrens, bye it was nice while it lasted

Ahh I knew I should've done a sultry concept instead but I was really struggling with all the creative control you guys gave me this episode, alright I'll stop making excuses for myself.. THE ABSOLUTE DECAY from last week though

[UFO]

Rooting for ya, GotSkill, darling

[Jackson]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

Rooting for ya, GotSkill, darling

Thanks and the gif is perfect


Also, EatMeZayn's Huga comment is from last week