[KitKat]

Okay, finally sent. It's good to be back

[KitKat]

Seriously. I can't wait for the new people to experience my judging style. This is so exciting

[Retro]

And so it begins.

[Matty]

Originally posted by Katie

Okay, finally sent. It's good to be back

Wooooooo! Copying and Pasting now!!

Can I say how much I love Excel.
I am relearning so many new functions that I forgot how to use.

[KitKat]

Yeah. Mine involves math which I did in my head so none of it is guaranteed to be accurate. Actually, probably most of it is inaccurate.

[Remmy]

Oooh, yas. Mother has sent, let's get things rolling.

[Citrus]

Imma just keep refreshing

[Energy]

But seriously.

[Matty]

---

EPISODE 1: AVATARS

Guest Judge: Energy



THE COMMENTS

RETRO

Originally posted by Red

First of all, random side note: Love that the title of the song from the video in your avatar is "Contrail". Do you know what a contrail is? Thanks to one of my personal favorite videos ever, I do. They're the long clouds that can form behind an aircraft. I have not listened to the song or watched the video, so I'm not sure how this fits into that definition, but I'm just rambling now. Let's get to what's actually important: Your avatar entry. I don't necessarily agree that it has potential as its own gif, because, really, it's just your standard "Happy" music video scene. Having said that, I think the avatar itself is one of the better made avatars of the week, and I also like how you mentioned how it connects to you. Solid entry.

Originally posted by Kitt

I remember this avatar, I've always loved it so I'm glad you chose this one. Very pretty. I loved that the first ATRL avatar you've made is still one of your favorites and that you're able to connect with it so well. Now as for your entry as a whole, as much as it states glamour, fierce, color and life, your entry doesn't match up. Confession: You were my instant shoe-in choice for the Top 13. You've got so much potential, and I really think you've not only got what it takes to go far or win, but you deserve it as well. You took Matty's "a few sentences" to heart, and that's absolutely okay, but just know that as soon as someone steps up their game, you'll be one of the first to be overshadowed. Good luck, Retro

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 10
Biased opinion: 10
Usability: 8

Great job. It just would have been a triple play if it was of someone relevant.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

This was an avatar that I was not expecting from you. In fact, I don’t think I remember you ever wearing this avi. When I think of you, I always think of your S&S Britney avi, beautiful, powerful and fierce, just like you. In any case, I appreciate the fact that you chose an avi that meant something more personal to you. As you’ve stated, it is bright and vibrant but I’m not seeing the allure of it otherwise. It’s neither particularly funny nor shady but I can see this avi working in friendly/general posts; functioning but forgettable. I only say this because your brand on ATRL doesn’t really encompass and reinforce Namie Amuro and I’m sorry to say that this avi isn’t memorable to me nor does it fully represent you as a member. I also say this because I am not fully convinced by your entry. You seem to tell me you’re bright and vibrant like your avi but I would have like to see some of that personality shine through in your entry; some examples could have be advantageous or even a light hearted joke. Always remember that a convincing argument has evidence/receipts to back up whatever point you’re trying to prove.

Originally posted by Energy

Basic and forgettable. Seeing you around the forum, I know you are full of character and personality. This entry gave me none of that. It didn’t catch or hold my attention one bit. What the entry described and what I actual saw where polar opposites. I expect better from you Apollo.

Originally posted by Matty

I get the message behind the avatar and you explained yourself well. You also managed to explain yourself well without having to write a novel, which I enjoy. My only issue is, you said it fits you with your “bright, vibrant, and catches your attention but with not in a shocking put off manner” personality; I failed to see that and wanted to see that. I read it, I got the message, but that was it. It didn’t capture my attention and draw me in to every word. Message = great; showing off the message = work on it.

E

Originally posted by Red

One thing worth noting is that still avatars are actually still worth a damn, even on a gif-dominated site like ATRL. There are plenty of mods who have or even still do have still avatars. There are plenty of well-known members that have or have had still avatars. I used to be one of the kings of the still avatar until I learned how to make a gif. It's definitely an eye-catcher, too, and that's important for a still avatar. I'll be keeping my eye on you to see if you live up to the comments you're making, though, because I really hope to see this beautiful and artistic side from you as the cycle moves forward.

Originally posted by Kitt

What the hell is this? I know you did not just sprint to Xanga circa 2003 and resized the first photo you found. Forgettable avatar. Forgettable entry.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 8
Biased opinion: 6
Usability: 3

It would probably never get used but I feel bad giving 0s unless the question is asking me to rate how much I like Edge.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

So the avi is artistic. So what? Everything in the avi has its own place. So what? How does that avi represent you? Why should I believe you? You claim you like to see the artistic side of things but do your posts around the forum and your entry reflect that? Do you often have unpopular opinions that are misunderstood because you look at topics from a different standpoint? You answered the question without really providing much substance to your reasoning and all I’m left with are more questions. Short entries are great to read but in this instance, I’m left wanting more explanations, more conviction behind your words and more top member quality overall. If you’re new and have not yet established a reputation forum, a little more work in being descriptive will paint a better picture of who you are and what you’re capable of bringing to the competition. This goes for all of the contestants.

Originally posted by Energy

No. You can do much better. I’m not saying incorporating flaming hoops or flying pigs but your entry gave me BRAN AND BLAND. Nothing is wrong with simplicity, but at least if that, have better presentation. My first impression after reading that entry was that you are boring. You could be the complete opposite, but I would never know from what you submitted.

Originally posted by Matty

Not every avatar has to be used as a gif, it was just an explanation I gave on its ability to do so when it captures people’s attention. Your avatar is beautiful, but it doesn’t stand out. I also feel like it really doesn’t show who you really are, especially when you said “kinda represents me”. I’ve seen your posts around ATRL, you’re not black and white; you have some color to you. As an avatar, I would have liked to see more.

DANNY

Originally posted by Red

First of all, I'm glad that you shamelessly pointed out the "Rude Boy" shirt in the avatar. Because of course. As I pointed out with Dan, there is a place for still avatars here still. In fact, because this forum is so gif-dominated, it has more of a potential to stand out. However, even though I enjoyed learning certain things about you (like the fact that you're 1/4 Japanese), I didn't seem to get to know more of you just based on the avatar alone. It might have been somewhat of a tough sell, but I thought I learned more about you in your app than in this entry, honestly.

Originally posted by Kitt

I'm actually really surprised you decided to use this one besides one of your Colton ones Isn't this your primary avatar? But I'm glad you felt confident enough to take the 'risk' and use a still image. And no, I don't consider it a downfall if an avatar doesn't have much reaction post use. If it happens to, that's just the icing on the cake. Honestly, I probably wouldn't have ever thought much of this avatar and would've just wrote it off as another avi someone thought looked 'cool' since it had the male models or whatever. I had no idea it had so many genuine connections. However, entry-wise, I do think you couldn't elaborated more (Why he is your favorite male model, why you've taken a bigger interest into static avatars, etc) and not in a list/literary form. SIDENOTE: I genuinely believe you have a lot of Top Member qualities and potential in you, so don't get lost in the crowd again or I swear to God Danny.

Originally posted by Katie

5 ImARudeBoy
Avatar itself: 8
Biased opinion: 8
Usability: 9

It could be really shady because of their expressions. Where is the flaw?

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

First off, this is an improvement from your entry last season. Much more details and much less disinterest on your part. I like. I enjoyed all the parallels you made between your personal life and avi. By teasing interesting tidbits from your life, you left the audience wanting more (in a positive way) and that sets you up nicely for the rest of the competition. However, I did feel like your descriptions were a bit elementary and that you didn’t really go much deeper than scratching the surface, though maybe the sparseness is part of your plan for future rounds? Regardless, the connections you drew were superficial and failed to relate back to why you think your avi is top member worthy. Also, your entry could have benefitted from self-filtering. Under point 4, you should have left out “I didn’t even notice…” and elaborated more on your heritage and how seeing the discovery of a tattoo in Japanese made you feel. Same with your last sentence. “I hope that isn’t considered a downfall” reeks of uncertainty and nonchalance. That sort of defeatist attitude doesn’t convince me that you have what it takes to become ATRL Next Top Member. You should have been more assertive and stated WHY you not having a traditional gif avi is out of the usual and HOW it is advantageous instead of it being a downfall.

Originally posted by Energy

Thank you for the thorough explanation. I felt some parts were added in because you had nothing else to say. However you showed who you are and what you like, so kudos for that.

Originally posted by Matty

While no, it is not a motion avatar; it still stands out. With the ATRL population comprised of mostly gay men, you already got their attention with the two handsome men. I also love the fact that on the boy’s shirt it says “Rude Boy”, a sense of identification and makes it much easier for people to identify you without even looking at the user name. It’s different, it works; I really like it!

DOMINO

Originally posted by Red

Out of everyone in this entry, I was looking forward to your entry the most. Why? Because I didn't get ANYTHING out of you from your application. Not a god damn thing. Any opportunity to learn more about you would be a good one. You didn't even have to do much and it would have been an improvement over your application. As it stands, you did much more than needed, and that's a good thing. The format of the entry is great. I especially loved the little touch of the "RÉSUMÉ", which serves as a little of a summary of the entry. I learned a lot more about you here than I did in your app, that's a very good thing. The only thing I would suggest is to not stick to a format for your entries over the course of the cycle. This is refreshing, certainly, but it can become boring quickly if you overuse it. Great, great entry overall, a marked improvement over your application.

Originally posted by Kitt

I didn't even notice the ironic connection of her playing dominoes Did you really not notice that until you began editing it? That's a bit too good to be true. I do like this avatar for you since I've always recognized you as solely one of the Navy, but I never really got to know you as a member, so it's nice to see you in an avatar of your fave that captures your exact personality. However, "sassy and classy" does tend to fit Rih's persona quite well as well, so you're lucky there. Very good job. My only advice would be to not give too much fluff in your entries. Stick to your points and sell yourself.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 9
Biased opinion: 7
Usability: 9
Forehead deduction: -2

What kind of sadistic cameraman would allow dat angle on Rih? It's very usable for shade.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

I have absolutely no reason to believe anything you wrote with no proof to support your thoughts and yet, I’m a biT captivated by the overall tone of this entry. It’s very innocent, very cute, very unexpected coming from a Rihanna stan. I only say this cuz of my interactions with other Navy members, both online and off, have been very different, meaning more aggressive and messier. I enjoyed the relation of the avi to your life but I do wish you delved a little bit deeper into your ATRL persona a little bit more. I wanted to read why you thought your avi stood out, why everyone should think you’re sassy yet classy and how you balance out your confidence while being insecure at times. I can see the attributes you’re describing in the avi itself but I needed that focus to come back to you and not stay on Rihanna. I appreciate the banner and the addition of the resume section. It will be interesting to see how that evolves. I could have done without “My entry” above the avi; it’s redundant and I don’t think the placement particularly made sense.

Originally posted by Energy

Rihanna is so adorable in this gif. I love the quality and the explanation helped me get to know you more. I loved that you were not afraid to “go there” and be personal.

Originally posted by Matty

I didn’t realize she was holding dominos in her hand until you mentioned it. Your overall layout to display your avatar and the meaning is reminding me quite a bit like Kitt’s. Especially when she started doing the whole three word descriptions I use in my signature for the top call out. No it’s not a bad thing; it’s actually a good thing. Everything just works; the explanation, the avatar, the shadiness, I just love it. You did a great job!

JAD

Originally posted by Red

SHELDOR. The Conqueror. I'm, honestly, going to avoid trying to make every entry involving you a BBT reference-athon. We'll see how long that lasts. I think that your avatar was always going to be a tough sell, because it's really self-explanatory. That's not necessarily a bad thing. It's easy to understand and it's fun. I think that you did a better job of explaining the avatar compared to how it applies to you beyond the obvious, but it's a fine enough first entry, given what you were working with.

Originally posted by Kitt

You've pretty much stuck with the same avatar for as long as I can remember, so that's admirable in it's own way. Although, as much as I value one not changing their avatar for the sake of the challenge, I'm a bit bummed you chose to use a promotional avatar. Promotion avatars are like a dime a dozen at the dollar store, so it felt cheap. This avatar just says I'm another Little Monster following the crowd. Where is the uniqueness? The innovation? The originality? Yes, you were to elaborate on the meaning behind the 125x125 image you donned, but you were also expected to have an understanding of how your avi showed top member qualities, and unfortunately, I see very little here

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 8
Biased opinion: 7
Usability: 6

There are just way too many Applause gifs going around.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

I know you and can vouch for your general optimism, but how about the newbies who have no idea who you are? Will they have to take you for your word or can you prove this positive demeanor? Having said that, your usage of exclamation points and the “” is almost perfect and conveys your positivity well. I can tell the shortness of your entry wasn’t due to laziness but I do want to see some more writing with substance, meaning I want you to open up a little bit more and not be too shy about sharing who you are and what you are capable of bringing to this competition. It goes unsaid that I want all that extra information to be demonstrated for me through your posts and your entries. I don’t want to sit here and read off a list of why you’re this and that. As for the avi itself, the Sheldon frame is very much memorable. I almost would have liked the original avi to have been used but I can appreciate you wanting to support your fav and on a music forum, it makes total sense. One final thing: read over your entry before submitting. It may not seem like much but at certain times, when things get close between competitors, a well thought out, coherent entry will be favored over a well thought out but poorly executed entry.

Originally posted by Energy

From this entry I get that you are a dedicated Little Monster and excited for ARTPOP. But isn’t over half of ATRL? I didn’t really connect with you as an individual with this entry.

Originally posted by Matty

Haha, I love Sheldon. There is humor and there is promotion in this avatar. It really sets you a part from not only every other member, but also every monster that once had this avatar when ARTPOP was first initially announced. I can’t get over Sheldon’s creepy ass excited smile; it makes me laugh. I think once ARTPOP is released, you should roll with the Sheldon avatars. It can become your thing and make you unique and stand out.

DOM

Originally posted by Red

And now, it's time for "Why This Entry Is A Good One, Even If I Could Not Care Less About Miley Cyrus"! Okay, I'm going to fill you in on a little secret: Miley Cyrus is not getting the desired reaction out of me, either to shock me or to get me horny or to even get me to enjoy her new music style. I just see an immature young adult trying to adjust to adulthood and failing, but the fact that she's failing so miserably at it is what keeps driving people to her and to her music. Having said ALL of that, I do think that the haters that go out of their way to bash Miley are a BIT much. She's not doing anything that many other singers have tried to do in the past. Miley's actually succeeding where many others failed, so that's a huge plus for her. Not only that, but I could totally see this being my reaction (oh, who am I kidding, it IS my reaction) when someone compares Muse to Radiohead in 2013. It's tired, just like the Miley hate is quickly becoming tired. When your entry can inspire this long of a blurb, you're doing something right.

Originally posted by Kitt

I was impressed with your entry, Dom. It was a very simple and consistent explanation in a very simple and elegant format. Nothing too much, just enough. I do think you could have delved a bit deeper in your commentary, made it a bit more personal, about Domantas and not Miley, however I do appreciate how you took a different direction in comparison to your competitors. Instead of nitpicking around and finding specific traits about the person in the avatar that relate to you, instead you connected exclusively what you felt with the avatar. Good job.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 10
Biased opinion: 10
Usability: 10

Slay.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

I loved the intro paragraph. The sense of urgency with which you pleaded for consideration was tastefully and professionally done. This is obviously a new avi so it hasn’t built up much steam but I can see this being used in circulation, mostly to deflect while shading, but used nonetheless. As for your description of your connection to the avi and how it stands out, it was unexpected. When favs get dragged, the typical reaction is to get defensive/angry/annoyed but you used the word “proud.” That choice of word was interesting and I’m glad you followed up with an explanation as to what you thought Miley was portraying when she made that face and how that relates not only to your personal life but also to your attitude on ATRL as well. Be sure not to forget the bigger picture (the Top Member crown) when you submit your entries. Coming full circle with how being “proud” can be/is a trait of a Top Member would have been the frosting on the cake.

Originally posted by Energy

Well done. Your entry shed more light on your entry as I continued reading. It enticed me and showed your personality. Lovely.

Originally posted by Matty

I will be admit, I’m not a fan of Miley the persona. I am a fan of Miley’s music, that cannot be mistaken. I see where you are going with this and explained yourself well. I can see it being used as a temporary gif, cause it has some shading components to it. I don’t know though, I really miss the up-close avatar of Miley from the Wrecking Ball. That stood out from all the rest, just because of how up front it was. This works

SORBET

Originally posted by Red

Three of my closest friends love Pokemon. Two of them LOOOOOVE Pokemon, to the point that they are actively shunning GTA 5 for the latest installments of the franchise. I've also never really been a fan of the franchise. The only point when I could honestly say I cared about Pokemon was back in middle school, when Pokemon trading cards were a HUGE craze. That's the only time I cared. It is nice, though, when something so innocent and charming like Pokemon can inspire the fan reaction it does. In that sense, I enjoyed this entry. I feel, though, that there was potential to equate the actions in the avatar to your life outside of Pokemon that you missed out on.

Originally posted by Kitt

I loved this avatar! Glad you chose it. However, "it's just so hella dramatic and perfect for a lot of situations to use in your posts." This is the best explanation you could give on how it connects to you and why it stands out? This is literally all you put. Tell me more. Why is it your favorite scene from the anime? Does this particular scene in the avatar represents you in any way as a member or person? It's such an interesting scene, but you didn't even explain it. Turn up the ember or you will faint. You did show a part of yourself, but just barely. RandomFunFact: The avatar I most remember you by is the Nicki Minaj one of her bouncing around on the big ball from the 'The Boys' vid.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 9
Biased opinion: 6
Usability: 5
The feels: -2

Too sad. Pokemon are similar to animals so my vegan side weeps at the separation.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

I’m sort of left hanging here with this bare bones entry. All I gathered from your entry is that you’re a long time Pokemon fan and you chose an avi because you like it for the dramatic statement it makes and cuz you’ve used it the most frequently. I still don’t know anything about you or why you love Pokemon so much. I need you to spend a little more time developing your entries to show us why you’re better, why you’re different and why you deserve to win over everyone else. What you gave us is an entry that took no more effort than a tweet. As for you avi being appropriate for “a lot of situations,” I find that comment challenging to establish. I can only fathom two viable times your avi would be suitable and both situations involve someone leaving/getting eliminated from a game. If you make it to the next round, I hope you offer something the other contestants have not in order to secure your position in the game. If not, I’m afraid we’ll be the Misty to your Togetic.

Originally posted by Energy

Togetic is such a doll. I love it. However, this entry was very plain. You didn’t do the most or BS your way through an essay but I expect more from a top member.

Originally posted by Matty

It’s so cute! I like the fact that chose an avatar that you have used for a long time on this forum. Sometimes you just become so associated with a certain avatar, that when you change it to anything slightly different, you become a different person. One way to make yourself to stand out and be noticed is to keep your avatar the same. I can see what you mean that it works for different situations. Especially with the whole ‘Goodbye’ posts. I also like who it runs together so smoothly for the repeat.

PART 2 coming, let this simmah




Fierce and Love
- Matty

[Remmy]

Oh I'm not in this part.

*goes back to watching Youtube videos*

but adfuisuifsh at Katie and deducting points for Rih's forehead + Pokemon feels

[Citrus]

Matty I have a physics test in five hours

[Red]

Forehead deduction: -2

Not even three contestants down and tears of laughter are already rolling down my face. God damn, Katie.

[Retro]

Thank you to the judges for all the advice in my comments! I think that what made this challenge a bit, well, challenging for me was a combination of not yet taking the competition as seriously with also being a bit nervous. I do feel like it represents me, and I know I don't always show that as much as I could. But I'm working on it! And I know that I have more potential than I've so far lived up to, which seems to be a pretty common theme among the comments for me.

Once again, a big thanks to all of you! This will help me a lot, with both this sort of competition and with my endless search for that "perfect" avatar for me. Back to waiting for more results.

But Katie, sis:

It just would have been a triple play if it was of someone relevant.

[Matty]

---

EPISODE 1: AVATARS

Guest Judge: Energy



THE COMMENTS

XALRIC

Originally posted by Red

I wish you had explained in which case this avatar would be used as a gif in a post, even if it is that obvious just from looking at the avatar. Self-explanatory avatars can work, but you still need to point out its uses for those who don't browse the forum that often (ie: posters like myself). I do enjoy the avatar, though, and I especially enjoyed how you equated the avatar to yourself.

Originally posted by Kitt

Your entry was tightly summed up into a simple explanation of: I chose an avatar of my favorite KPop rapper who was acting like me in it. That's all. Nothing grabs my attention. I mean out of 14 other contestants, your entry got pretty lost in the bunch. I did like the little information you gave us and insight you gave us, it made your avatar make much more sense.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 6
Biased opinion: 5
Usability: 9

Moves kinda too fast. Homeboy needs to give Miley back ha crackpipe since he's done.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

A Frenchman liking K-Pop? To be honest, I can never differentiate the Asian avis from one another and I didn’t particularly find your explanation (or lack of) of your avi to be convincing. In fact, there was none and I was told that I was supposed to know what the avi meant. I don’t. Never assume the judges will have your point of view or have the same thought process as you when we read your entries. It is your mission to completely immerse us in your thought so we get the full effect of what your entry means to you. Your entry was a mixture of you describing your personality through your username and how your avi (that I’m still confused by) can be used as a gif. There is a disconnect between what you thought you put out and what I actually read. The challenge asked for you to explain why your avi stands out and how it captures your essence but you basically told us that we should figure that out for ourselves. Please read the prompt carefully to avoid submitting an entry that goes off on a tangent.

Originally posted by Energy

The quality of this avatar is distracting and unacceptable. Before finishing the entry I had pondered at least 3 times if I should open Photoshop and reduce the noise, etc. Top Members put their best foot forward and you did not with the avatar. Pretty standard description though. Do better.

Originally posted by Matty

It’s so full of many different emotions; it’s so bipolar. I can see what you mean how it works as an avatar and I can see what you mean that it works with your personality. You’re so crazy and your everywhere but in the same place all at once. I will say that I still associate you with your Zac Efron shirtless avatar. One thing that stands out in your avatars is that you make them not square. You have a distinct rounded corners, which makes it already stand out. One thing that bothers me though is the quality. I know if Doc were a guest judge this round, he’d be cracking the whip on your ass for the quality.

AVERY

Originally posted by Red

First of all, I refuse to watch that video out of principle. Refuse. I can already tell that it does not appeal to me in the slightest based on your description of what Funky Dineva does. What I will not refuse is praise for a job well done on the entry as a whole. You more than adequately explained who the person in your avatar was, why they matter in the context of your entry, and, most importantly, how this odd and weird person waving around a ***** can equate to you personally. You really went above and beyond the call of duty for this one. It got a little too wordy at times, but that's something that can be refined over the course of the cycle.

Originally posted by Kitt

Had no idea your username came from him, interesting! I love that you seem to have this surefire and unapologetic awareness and direction for yourself as a fun-loving, messy, yet intimately closed off member, but that also leaves me no room to see anything else (say like, your potential). Not to mention it seems you're pretty dead-set in your ways (as stated in the last paragraph), that it'd be a waste to even try to give constructive criticism here So with that said, I'll just give it to you straight:

I was a bit bummed to see that you had changed it from the Miley one you were using. I thought that one was gold, but carry on, nothing against you changing it. But the entry is an eye-sore to read and the avatar is a try hard mess. "Do you see any ATRLer with an avatar of someone waving around a vibrator?" No but I've seen avatars on ATRL with someone swinging their dick, dry humping pillows, glamorized serial killers, shady divas and the like. Read the beginning of my comments for Citrus' entry to see where I'm going with this. Your avatar is a bit on the risky side, so it may get you attention, but for the wrong reasons and from the wrong people. As for the long narrative, you want to keep us wanting to read more so try to tone it down and say only the important stuff. A Top Member is someone who's consistent, but isn't one dimensional or could easily be labeled and boxed in with any other sheep members (Remember, this is ATRL, as much as you'd think you're original for being outrageous, you're not). I know there's definitely more to you and that you provide something interesting.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 4
Biased opinion: 3
Usability: 9 since it's GayTRL

I'm not even sure why it's allowed but get down, girl.

[img]removed[/img]

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

I like that you started off with a mini synopsis of who the person is in your avi. I would have been so clueless otherwise. I also like that you separated your entry into three segments, which made the entry flow and easy to follow. Indeed, your avi does stand out (almost for the wrong reasons) mixing the perfect amount of comedy with a touch of sex to drive home the humor. What made me enjoy your avi more were your descriptions in your final paragraph. You constantly tied together how the avi represented you and how you represented the avi. It was seamless. However, the best part of your entry was nothing that I already touched on. In fact, the part I loved the most was when you simultaneously clammed up/opened up about how you don’t like showing your serious side. That was alluring in so many ways. You have a solid grasp on whom you are and how you want to be portrayed as on ATRL and that mystery opens up so many questions as to who you are beneath the silliness and how you’re going to use that to your advantage in the coming rounds.

Originally posted by Energy

A bit much on the description. The avatar is very questionable due to ATRL’s rules. It’s a cute gif though and did catch my attention a bit the first time I saw it. I feel as though I know you better after reading this entry.

Originally posted by Matty

Your avatar… your avatar… your avatar. It does stand out, but I still feel bothered by the fact that he is purposely swinging around the vibrator. I’m still on the fence of whether I should tell you to change it or not. Maybe Katie will bring some insight with it. Your entry was very humorous as is the avatar, but it was very LONG. You could have easily shortened and still made that impact. I won’t lie, your avatar does stand out and captures attention. I just feel like it could have been done without the vibrator, despite the thirstness that is ATRL.

CITRUS

Originally posted by Red

This was, easily, one of the funniest avatars even when taken out of context. The terrible green screen effects, the image of a fat drag queen surfing in front of a terrible green screen effect, the...questionable fashion choice of the drag queen, it's just perfect. I liked the backstory behind you first watching Rupaul's Drag Race, I liked the fact that you openly admitted that one of your best attributes is being "campy", and I definitely liked the last two sentences of the entry. Just great stuff.

Originally posted by Kitt

You and Avery's entries are very similar to me. You both say that your avatars are different from the norm of ATRL (mainly because it doesn't display a popstar), but I find that hardly true. With the mounds and mounds of flaming gays who will attempt to show out for whatever inanimate object or pop culture icon they love, I fail to see the difference. So, using an avatar with someone being over exaggerant, diva-like or shady just looks like a dime a dozen to me. And Citrus, sis, those white borders in your avi are killing me. Now, with all that out of the way, I've actually come to respect the fact that you use the same person consistently in the lot of your avatars. It just holds more weight whenever you speak of how much you admire Latrice and continue to be inspired by her. Entry-wise, it's a bit scattered and you teeter totter a bit here and there, which kind of goes in line with your avi so all in all I'd suggest just try to maintain a consistent approach to what you want to say.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 7
Biased opinion: 5
Usability: 7

Yeah, sure.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

Solid job on formatting and content. I enjoyed how you made a distinction between what Latrice represents, what Latrice means to you and how the avi is representative of who you are as a person/poster now and in the future. I could have done without the slight shade to those who have a normal avi of their fav pop star. No need to put others’ tastes down when you should only be focusing on yourself. In any case, your avi does catch my eye when I scroll through threads and it is usually tied to a sassy post and as you’ve stated, very ATRL. One thing I’ll point out is the flow of the content. I’m a little puzzled by the timing of your 4th paragraph; the flashback to your first time was a little awkward after talking about how your avi represents you and your style. It just went a little too dark for me after you were just done talking about how you might be a drag queen. Just be wary of having a cohesive story line and making chronological sense.

Originally posted by Energy

This reminds me of Queen Janelle Monae’s concept in Tightrope. The task of struggling to find a balance of being not to high and arrogant and not to low in depression on the journey of finding who you really are. Loves the explanation and it helped me connect with who you are as a person in addition to being a member. Cute avatar.

Originally posted by Matty

Your entry was very intriguing and I enjoyed myself reading it. Could it have been shorter and without all the multiple copies of your avatar ala Avery? Yes it could have been. However there was personality and humor that made it worth reading. Your avatar already stands out because it isn’t the essential 125x125 pixel s, it is off. However, it is humorous and can bring joy to people who see it. I could see it being used in shady ways as well.

NICKI

Originally posted by Red

I will admit that I wasn't sure what to expect from you before I saw your entry. I saw glimpses of something interesting in your app, but they were just that: glimpses. This, on the other hand, is that something interesting roaring to life. I wish you had chosen to include Monster as part of the gif, though, because THAT is when her star really began to took off. Moment 4 Life followed, and the rest is history. But I digress. The format is quite nice, though, just like I stressed to Domino, you would be wise not to overuse it. I don't really have much negative to say about this entry, really. While I can't say for certain whether or not you have truly created a "Brand", I will say that you talked up the idea quite nicely.

Originally posted by Kitt

Oh man. I'm going to enjoy seeing your entry creations this cycle, I just KNOW IT I love that you made a compilation avatar which displayed a chronological timeline of Nicki, in which you used to illustrate your growth here as a member. But you know, I mean obviously you were going to use a Nicki avi being that you're her stan and well.... your username is even her name verbatim. But when I got to the "People started to see the ATRL member, Nicki Minaj, as the person, and not just 'another user.'" It was kind of funny because it got me wondering, will I ever actually see Melvin or Nicki Minaj NICKIMINAJ, the uber stan? But then I got to the "In closing you see the logo for Nickis' new clothing line, which I will leave with saying that I have officially created a Brand." And then I realized... This is your brand, and you wear it well. And for that, I have to respect that.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 8
Biased opinion: 9
Usability: 5

Can't really be used but slay a little.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

One of the best avis I’ve seen so far. The theme is cohesive, if reductive…but nonetheless, I like the avi. I like the concept of evolution and how you managed to relate your story of your personal growth on ATRL to Nicki’s commercial successes and how you utilized her as a model to develop your own “unique” trademark. Your wordplay throughout the entry was quite clever and that last line left me impressed. At first glance, I was overwhelmed by the effect of the background, the huge bubble lettered title and the row of avis but after understanding where you come from with your avi, this burst of color suits you. Great presentation overall.

Originally posted by Energy

Great entry Nicki. I remember the new wave of members and people like you who browsed the forum in search of a voice. Seeing you around and how you finally filled you ATRL niche is such a real story to tell and documents your progression to that “Top Member” status. You really embodied this challenge.

Originally posted by Matty

Your entry was very inspirational and I can see why the avatar means a lot for you. The avatar itself stands out because of the different Nicki scenes and her evolution. No one would think about that meaning behind it, besides that it fits with your ATRL name. Now my critique; I am a fan of formatting to make things look presentable… but the gradient background, to me, was too much. Sometimes over formatting can take away from the beauty that is your simple entry.

CONNOR

Originally posted by Red

You're another one who I really wanted to know more about going into this first challenge, and you're another contestant who did not disappoint. First, a couple of things I'm not sure that I agree with. I don't necessarily find Rihanna "approachable". Easygoing and vulnerable? Absolutely. Approachable? She seems much more closed than approachable, but I will also readily admit that I don't avidly follow Rihanna like many people here do, so I could very well be wrong. And I'm anticipating someone in this thread trying to prove me wrong, too. Also, it's totally okay to change your avatar before doing this entry, because your current avatar may not mean much of anything or may not be worthy of doing an entry on. Beyond that, though, I quite enjoyed how you connected Rihanna and your own life into one neat and tidy package.

Originally posted by Kitt

I really appreciate you sticking with the avatar you were already donning. Gives a bit more authenticity, and I'm actually surprised you and Jad were the only ones who kept theirs the same Beautiful avatar and damn near perfect entry. The ironic link I found is how the main trait connections you entitled, "Simple. Easygoing. Driven", was also the vibe I got from your entry. The simple formatting, the fluid and concise writing and the very driven tone— just perfect. Great job, Connor.

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 10
Biased opinion: 10
Usability: 8
Smoking hot bonus: +2
Making me miss Rihanna: -3

Sorry.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

What sort of comprehensive five-paragraph essay boiled down to a perfect paragraph? I like how you establish what an avi means to you before describing your actual avi. It just meant that much more when you started to list off qualities that you value in Rihanna cuz you see them in you as well. You said so much in such details in a short and concise manner and I can see that becoming a dangerous tool against the other contestants.

Originally posted by Energy

This entry bored me honestly, don’t take it personal. You nailed the task of establishing who you are as a person and member of the forum. Try to jazz is up a bit with presentation next time. Decent for the first round, but step it up.

Originally posted by Matty

The avatar is extremely simple, yet beautiful, and it works. I haven’t been able to associate that this avatar is you or other ones for that fact, but it works with the meaning. I can see the meaning, but some others may not think that way because of ATRL stan laws. From the red/pink hues to simply just Rihanna at one of her most beautiful states, it stands out. As the function for an avatar, it’s just an avatar with a meaning people may or may not get. It is one that can simple fade into the background from all the others. I’m not saying it’s bad, but can easily get lost in the sea of ATRL avatars.

SCENE

Originally posted by Red

Something else you don't often hear about: Ke$ha is a bonafide genius. A real genius, not someone who pretends that they are a genius but really doesn't know jack ****. Out of all of the current top pop girls, I think she's the PERSON I'm interested in the most. I found that there were times where I was wondering if you were referring to me or not, especially the line "some ratchet GIF from a music video". I'm sure you weren't, though, because the last thing you'd want to do is annoy one of the judges. Seriously, though, I like how, like Connor, you took a favorite artist and your own life and tied them neatly into one little package. And any time you can find a way to reference "Lifetime Movie specials", you're doing it right.

Originally posted by Kitt

I really love how you used a more simplistic and softer capture of Kesha, who is known to the general public to be the opposite, as an avatar to kind of counter and balance your similar on-screen/stage persona as a member (even though you have a softer side that doesn't get showcased much here either). You clearly understood this challenge to a T. Your presentation was simple, yet effective. Great job!

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 9
Biased opinion: 9
Usability: 6

At least she looks good.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

Abridged version:
- Layout is aesthetically pleasing
- Self-observation with respect to Ke$ha was effectively done. That already demonstrates how true to your words you are.
- Haven’t seen the avi around too much but when I do, the color contrast really helps it stick out

Originally posted by Energy

Love it. The first thought when seeing this avatar was how gorgeous Ke$ha looked. It’s a great contrast on how she’s viewed and how she really is. It ties into your personally because you are known for being a sassy bitch, but it’s all in fun. You are a sweetheart and it shines through your post and interactions with other members.

Originally posted by Matty

I couldn’t help but feel part of the entry was aimed towards me. I know we’ve had some spats based on me thinking you are full of yourself. However, after reading this I understand more now than I ever knew before. With your avatar, it is unconventional in the sense of it is a still picture and not a gif. It’s also showing Ke$ha not looking straight into the camera, but away from the audience. The vulnerability stands out more than anything. I think it fits perfectly with your explanation, but as an avatar seen around ATRL it can easily fade.

REM

Originally posted by Red

I've been waiting for this one, I'll admit. Rem, having known you for longer than anyone else in this cycle, I know that you have the ability to do something special within this cycle. Of course, that also means that I'm going to be much more aware of your exploits and DOUBLY critical of your efforts, because I know what you're capable of. I like how, immediately, you established that it doesn't explain who you are. I think you could have found a way to establish how this fits within your personality, but I digress. What you did do was explain in the most thorough way possible how this avatar could work on ATRL as its own entity. Giving examples of how it could be used was a really nice touch, something you don't really see outside of the gif challenge, and I especially liked the multiple reasons for why your avatar matters. It's a good start, and I hope to see this level of entry from you every time out.

Originally posted by Kitt

Surprisingly, I kinda like that you used an avatar that albeit didn't exactly connect to you personally at the moment, but thought it still had a lot of redeeming qualities to be used as an ATRL avatar. I actually think this is one of my favorite entries. I loved the concluding connection you made with Pooh and you as a member— the nostalgic and memorable character which is kind of similar to you being one of the old-timeys () who made a mark in their time here, yet can still find your footing even after a now that you're back after a 18 month ban. Your entry did feel like you were riding on the "I was iconic, this is me" wagon a bit, but you brought it back with that last concluding sentence, showing a bit of vulnerability and hopes for the future and that my dear is what tied this up all nicely. Great job, Rem!

Originally posted by Katie

Avatar itself: 9
Biased opinion: 8
Usability: 9

At least it's original.

Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction

Abridged version:
- Always notice the avi; the cartoon effect and “nostalgia” effect really make it stand out
- Love the examples. Nothing like a good demonstration to illustrate the uses of the avi to the full extent
- There was a sense of dedication to this entry that the other entries didn’t quite match. This meticulously compiled entry shows that you’re ready for the finale

Originally posted by Energy

Absolutely adorable. Nothing was sugarcoated or exaggerated. Nice explinations for it’s usage. Just remember, Top Member is for you to establish yourself as a member. We need to know more about you.

Originally posted by Matty

Honestly, while reading this, it felt more like a gif entry than an actual avatar entry. Yes, I said an avatar can be used as a gif when seen as popular, but that shouldn’t be the main focus of an avatar entry. In the parts you mentioned about the avatar, I agree with; it stands out. I don’t necessarily agree with the nostalgia, but I can kind of see it. Now about wanting to be iconic like Pooh. There is nothing wrong with wanting people to know your name, but if you main goal is to be iconic, you’re thinking wrong. Being a top member doesn’t automatically mean iconic. I won and I’m not iconic and I don’t want to be. Being a top member is being the best you on this forum as you can be that people like to see posts from and be friendly with. They sound similar, but a top member and iconic are two different things.

In some minutes, we will find out who has been eliminated from the competition!




Fierce and Love
- Matty

[Matty]

Originally posted by Citrus

Matty I have a physics test in five hours

"Go The **** To Sleep"

It'll be here afterwards

[Remmy]

Dad, you overread my entry way too much. But these comments are great, thanks for the input and opinions.

Not to mention I was rushing due to slightly being close to the deadline, so this was only whipped up in 30 minutes or so.

[Red]

Originally posted by Matty

"Go The **** To Sleep"

As read to ATRL by Satellites. Dutch version read by Kworb.

[KitKat]

I love how you can always tell which are my comments in each batch.

[Retro]

Originally posted by Red

As read to ATRL by Satellites. Dutch version read by Kworb.

This sounds like something I might actually pay to hear. I can only imagine.

[KitKat]

Originally posted by Remember

Oh I'm not in this part.

*goes back to watching Youtube videos*

but adfuisuifsh at Katie and deducting points for Rih's forehead + Pokemon feels

Originally posted by Red

Not even three contestants down and tears of laughter are already rolling down my face. God damn, Katie.

This was done on the fly. Imagine what I'll have for next time.