Midnight's Comment
(nnn sorry Nait, I probably should've said something sooner if I didn't like the quotes
)
I don't know what definition of "indulgent" you read, but you described the WRONG city.
This was very interesting to read, mostly because I would've never thought to use Catwoman as the focal point of any song. Try to avoid this in the future, because I like it when your songs are wholly original. Here, you basically take everything you know about the Gotham Universe and the character and copy and paste it in the song; in a way, a form of plagiarism without really stealing anything but the idea. And I also like your second part of the second verse; that's poetic and it fits snugly into the rest of the song.
However, the delivery looks like someone trying to be smarter than they need to be. We don't need dozens of synonyms splattered over the entire piece to convey such a simple idea. Build into it, don't try to overdo it. And the focal point: she's a sexy female character and you, in no way, described her like someone enticed by her would; instead, you literally interpreted her as a plain cat...
And like I said in the beginning, you used indulgent incorrectly. Half the world knows what Gotham City is, and half of that world would rightfully argue that "indulgent" is not a word to describe that city. Unless you meant it in a mocking way, which, if you did, I didn't catch it or understand how.
This was just not enough for me. Very awkward to read.
:negativeman:
for that.
Yea the "isles" was on purpose 
Maybe I was indeed #4.
