Verse one:
We fight almost all the time
If not us then who?
(Your mommas mommas mom)
We might not be perfect
After all we're just two... yea
(Look)
I know sometimes I screw up
(But)
I do it all for you
Trust me and come get on, are you ready for, roller, coaster, can you feel the rush?
Chorus:
Now you're stuck here with me
There's no way of getting off
We are getting dizzy
Fall in fall in fall in love
Up and down we go
Side to side you never know
Am i really, thinking, we can become more
Feel the air and the breeze
I can hardly feel my knees
I look at you and
I'm in I'm in I'm in love
Up and down we go
Side to side you never know
This is really, a jet coaster kind of love, and more...
Verse one:
We fight almost all the time
If not us then who?
(Your mommas mommas mom)
We might not be perfect
After all we're just two... yea
(Look)
I know sometimes I screw up
(But)
I do it all for you
Trust me and come get on, are you ready for, roller, coaster, can you feel the rush?
Chorus:
Now you're stuck here with me
There's no way of getting off
We are getting dizzy
Fall in fall in fall in love
Up and down we go
Side to side you never know
Am i really, thinking, we can become more
Feel the air and the breeze
I can hardly feel my knees
I look at you and
I'm in I'm in I'm in love
Up and down we go
Side to side you never know
This is really, a jet coaster kind of love, and more...
I didn't get those lines in v1 tho but I like the idea of the hook nd that rollercoaster theme but it could be shorter imo
I didn't get those lines in v1 tho but I like the idea of the hook nd that rollercoaster theme but it could be shorter imo
Lol yea I just made it up. The chorus came out of nowhere n I wrote it like in 2 min. The verse was just whatever, I've got to edit it. thanks for ur opinion
Lol yea I just made it up. The chorus came out of nowhere n I wrote it like in 2 min. The verse was just whatever, I've got to edit it. thanks for ur opinion
Here's another. It's a rap/pop king of song. It follows the traditional verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus.
Bad Boy
Hey..
Baby Come back…
Ey yo bass
Drop it on me
I'm sorry girl for that one night
Didn't think you'll leave me well that's alright
the words, “I’m sorry”, isn't that enough?
Songs, cards and flowers isn’t that enough?
We fight over stupid **** every hour of the ****en day
I still cannot believe you stood around me almost all this way
you take off crying, I look around
‘She’ll come back tomorrow. ‘
Like a lost and found
Baby, I can’t I’m
So bad that I want
To be good to you
But it’s hard
Cuz every day and night I’m so mean yeah I'm so real
I’m sorry (but I can’t change)
I’m the one you love but sorry you know I’m a bad boy
go on just leave me, good bye, yeah you’re a good girl
The more time passes, the more you get to know me,
Only disappointments with me
Baby don’t leave me, I know you still love me
Why, yes, I’m lonely, cuz You are my only
you are My lay lay lay lay lady
My lay lay lay lay lady
You say that I’m different
Is that why you’re intrigued
you’re like a young girl with a soft heart
You're the kind of girl I call sweet tart
With the excuse that I’m busy almost every date
I’m sorry, I don't know, now as I turn my head
The bride in my dreams is just a friend
****, shes just a friend
Baby, I can’t I’m
So bad that I want
To be good to you
But it’s hard
Cuz every day and night I’m so mean cuz I’m so mean
I’m sorry (but I can’t change)
Chorus
(Don’t you say a thing)
I act tough but I’m not inside
(Don’t you say a thing)
I’m not sure if you’ll ever be mine
You,
You know there’s no one
who understands me like you do,
Oh baby
come back to me
Ye ye yea..
Here's another. It's a rap/pop king of song. It follows the traditional verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus.
Bad Boy
Hey..
Baby Come back…
Ey yo bass
Drop it on me
I'm sorry girl for that one night
Didn't think you'll leave me well that's alright
the words, “I’m sorry”, isn't that enough?
Songs, cards and flowers isn’t that enough?
We fight over stupid **** every hour of the ****en day
I still cannot believe you stood around me almost all this way
you take off crying, I look around
‘She’ll come back tomorrow. ‘
Like a lost and found
Baby, I can’t I’m
So bad that I want
To be good to you
But it’s hard
Cuz every day and night I’m so mean yeah I'm so real
I’m sorry (but I can’t change)
I’m the one you love but sorry you know I’m a bad boy
go on just leave me, good bye, yeah you’re a good girl
The more time passes, the more you get to know me,
Only disappointments with me
Baby don’t leave me, I know you still love me
Why, yes, I’m lonely, cuz You are my only
you are My lay lay lay lay lady
My lay lay lay lay lady
You say that I’m different
Is that why you’re intrigued
you’re like a young girl with a soft heart
You're the kind of girl I call sweet tart
With the excuse that I’m busy almost every date
I’m sorry, I don't know, now as I turn my head
The bride in my dreams is just a friend
****, shes just a friend
Baby, I can’t I’m
So bad that I want
To be good to you
But it’s hard
Cuz every day and night I’m so mean cuz I’m so mean
I’m sorry (but I can’t change)
Chorus
(Don’t you say a thing)
I act tough but I’m not inside
(Don’t you say a thing)
I’m not sure if you’ll ever be mine
You,
You know there’s no one
who understands me like you do,
Oh baby
come back to me
Ye ye yea..
I feel the hook needs some more work. I haven't found that OMG part!
Anywhere
First Verse:
Remember butterflies
How they felt like inside
Why can’t we have those like we used to?
Now that we think we’re grown
Those butterflies have flown
But not the feelings lost inside you
Pre-Chorus 1:
It’s you that I want
It’s you that I need
It’s always been that way
Between you and me
For once in this love
Can you be on my side?
Tell me that you’ll be down for the ride
Chorus:
Where we go, I don’t care
As long as you are there
Right by my side, I’ll go anywhere
Go ahead, point the way
Just promise that you’ll stay
Till we get somewhere
Hook:
Anywhere but here (Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
Anywhere but here (Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
Anywhere but here...
Second Verse:
Remember nights of blue
I know you do
Those were the times when our love blossomed
Now nights are turning red
Our words remain unsaid
Don’t let those moments be forgotten
Pre-Chorus 2:
It’s me that you want
It’s me that you need
It’s always been how it was suppose to be
Can’t change how you feel
Won’t change what is real
Tell me that you’ll be mine ever still
Chorus:
Where we go, I don’t care
As long as you are there
Right by my side, I’ll go anywhere
Go ahead, point the way
Just promise that you’ll stay
Till we get somewhere
Hook:
Anywhere but here (Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
Anywhere but here (Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
Anywhere... (Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
(Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
Anywhere but here (Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
Anywhere but here (Can we go, can we go, can we go...?)
Anywhere but here...
The beat is giving me Kylie "WOW" teas.
Your voice sounds it's best when it goes higher like in the chorus tbh but the song is pretty good.
Verse one:
We fight almost all the time
If not us then who?
(Your mommas mommas mom)
We might not be perfect
After all we're just two... yea
(Look)
I know sometimes I screw up
(But)
I do it all for you
Trust me and come get on, are you ready for, roller, coaster, can you feel the rush?
Chorus:
Now you're stuck here with me
There's no way of getting off
We are getting dizzy
Fall in fall in fall in love
Up and down we go
Side to side you never know
Am i really, thinking, we can become more
Feel the air and the breeze
I can hardly feel my knees
I look at you and
I'm in I'm in I'm in love
Up and down we go
Side to side you never know
This is really, a jet coaster kind of love, and more...
I like it but the momma's momma line gotta go tbh.
I liked Anywhere too! The beat was great and I loved the chorus I found it difficult to hear what you were singing in the verses so I'd work on your diction. But as already said you're a great producer
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I see you.
Anyhow since I last posted here I've made a lot of different instrumentals but no new songs with vocals, I never have the time to record vocals since I need to be alone to do them well
I wrote this a couple years ago. It's probably pretty rusty but I thought I'd share it. I didn't really write with the intention of me singing it though.
Flying
Do you know how it feels to be an outcast?
The one always pushed in the crowd.
Or the one that doesn’t have much to say?
The one that’s ignored and can’t speak their mind
You’re a light in the dark
I can see it
But I won’t push you away because you’re different
We’re all the same inside
With a desire for acceptance
I can help you out so take my hand and maybe we can
Fly away!
Away from here
Away from the pain
Away from the hurt
To a place where people are accepted for their differences
Even though it doesn’t exist
We can make it happen in time
You see how everyone seems so happy now?
Well it’s all a lie because in truth
We all have a personal struggle
Within ourselves but we’re too scared to face these feelings
Things will and can’t ever be
The same forever
It just can’t happen
We all want something
But are too afraid of flying
I can help you so take my hand and maybe we can
Fly away!
Away from here
Away from the pain
Away from the hurt
To a place where people are accepted for their differences
Even though it doesn’t exist
We can make it happen in time
Flying is for the strong of will
Fighting is for the tough at heart
We all know what we feel inside
I just can’t tell you how much it’s true
Everything can change (X3)
Fly away!
Away from here
Away from the pain
Away from the hurt
To a place where people are accepted for their differences
Even though it doesn’t exist
We can make it happen in time
Anyhow since I last posted here I've made a lot of different instrumentals but no new songs with vocals, I never have the time to record vocals since I need to be alone to do them well
I can understand you boo always record my vocals when no ones home
it says "Oops,looks like we couldn't find that page"
but I like the idea of the hook nd that rollercoaster theme but it could be shorter 
imo
Anywhere
