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Tournament: ATRL's Platinum Hit | Season 1 | | EP7: Final Day
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New round Monday.
If I don't get it by Tuesday night, I will start the new round. 
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Member Since: 4/19/2012
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Thankyou ImARudeBoy that means so much, I struggled with it at the beginning! and Hugamari that was also an awesome thing to say, thanks guys!
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Member Since: 9/6/2012
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Congrats to the winners 
Rude boy, it would be good if you could post the winner's lyrics.. (if he wants to share, of course)
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Member Since: 11/16/2011
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 Seven
We start with lust, in his body I will trust,
take him into me and never stop to breathe.
I'm on gluttony, nothing's ever enough,
never too much until I beg you to set me free.
I can't hold this in, I won't hold it in.
We've got the seven deadly sins,
I'm letting them out from within.
If you can't handle what I'm giving,
then you can run out the back door with him.
He's about the greed, wants every bit of me,
let him take me apart piece by piece.
Maybe we'll skip sloth, lazy is not what I want,
and if you wanna take a break, you lose me.
I can't hold this in, I won't hold it in.
We've got the seven deadly sins,
I'm letting them out from within.
If you can't handle what I'm giving,
then you can run out the back door with him.
The wrath of a hungry man, hit me till I can't stand,
bring me back around, tie me up see how I react.
Envy is what they've got, begging to get in on our plot,
we're burning up and I swear this aint no act.
Pride is all I've got left, I knew you could do it baby,
so swallow your pride, throw me left to right and let's get crazy.
I didn't post the complete lyrics for possible copyright reasons, but these are the gist of it.
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Member Since: 5/1/2012
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Quote:
Originally posted by ImARudeBoy
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yeah sometimes i can write the best chorus and fall flat on the verses and then visa versa
but tbh i struggled HARD so yay
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Member Since: 9/6/2012
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Quote:
Originally posted by ImARudeBoy
Seven
We start with lust, in his body I will trust,
take him into me and never stop to breathe.
I'm on gluttony, nothing's ever enough,
never too much until I beg you to set me free.
I can't hold this in, I won't hold it in.
We've got the seven deadly sins,
I'm letting them out from within.
If you can't handle what I'm giving,
then you can run out the back door with him.
He's about the greed, wants every bit of me,
let him take me apart piece by piece.
Maybe we'll skip sloth, lazy is not what I want,
and if you wanna take a break, you lose me.
I can't hold this in, I won't hold it in.
We've got the seven deadly sins,
I'm letting them out from within.
If you can't handle what I'm giving,
then you can run out the back door with him.
The wrath of a hungry man, hit me till I can't stand,
bring me back around, tie me up see how I react.
Envy is what they've got, begging to get in on our plot,
we're burning up and I swear this aint no act.
Pride is all I've got left, I knew you could do it baby,
so swallow your pride, throw me left to right and let's get crazy.
I didn't post the complete lyrics for possible copyright reasons, but these are the gist of it. |
Awesome .. Love it !! 
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Member Since: 4/19/2012
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Quote:
Originally posted by Kavish
Awesome .. Love it !! |
Thank you!
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Member Since: 9/6/2012
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Quote:
Originally posted by funnellegs
Thank you!
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Welcome 
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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24 owuhs since last post.  I wonder if this theme will be drastically different from the last theme 
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Member Since: 11/16/2011
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Week 4:
How Well Do You Really Know Your Fave?
The theme this week is all about stepping into your faves shoes. You have to write a song while channeling your faves. You have to write a song your fave would sing. Submit me who your fave is with your song.
Need help? PM me.
DEADLINE: Friday @ 11:59 PM PST.
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Oh **** this will be fun.  Stepping into my faves shoes.
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Member Since: 9/15/2012
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This seems like a fun challenge
 I should have signed up for this competition
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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The best part: 3 sex songs in a row. How flawless?
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Member Since: 11/16/2011
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Originally posted by Hugamari
The best part: 3 sex songs in a row. How flawless? |
It's highly suggested you show variety.
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When will my fave show variety? 
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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OMG, I don't know which fave to choose, and the one I really wanna do, nobody but my J-Poppers know... 
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Wow, it was amazing how I was stumped for a while, but I just wrote the word "so" and it just came to me from there I really liked this one!
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Final-freaking-ly, I cave in and go with my girl. Maybe next time I can do my J-Pop princess... 
BTW, you might wanna change the name of the title, ImARudeBoy, some people may have gotten the wrong idea that we're still on EP 3.
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Member Since: 11/16/2011
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1) Title updated.
2) Still waiting for Elliot's lyrics
3) I have everyone's current critiques.
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Did Elliot ever send?
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