The riverbed line signifies how change is something tangible but not always easy to accept. Hence why the river part represents water which could suggest drowning and the bed part represents the attachment to something you've known for your whole life i.e. struggling with anxiety in my case. You seek shelter FROM your riverbed and not IN your riverbed because the riverbed isn't something literal and is instead an external part of your internal being. Therefore, it makes more sense to seek shelter FROM your riverbed rather than IN your riverbed due to your riverbed not actually existing in the first place and so there is legitimately no possible way you could ever seek shelter INSIDE your riverbed when everything's just a placebo effect. It doesn't make sense literally because there's nothing literal about it since it's a metaphor darling. If someone were to seek shelter IN their riverbed, then that would be classed as attempted suicide. Want me to explain what the placebo effect is boo boo?
I would not take issue in seeking shelter in a riverbed. It's not a great line, but it makes sense, both literally and metaphorically. And metaphorically it makes sense to seek shelter from words, to seek shelter from emotional pain, etc., not only literal things so don't act like I can't wrap my head around figurative language. "I seek shelter from a plateau"; "I seek shelter from a tree stump": these, like riverbed, don't make sense and if you can't see why, there's no point explaining it anymore.
It's silly talking about this so much when it didn't even really hurt your score (unlike your lack of rhythm). I'm trying to explain how it's awkward because I feel like as a judge, I should do that, but it's pointless if you're gonna just be defensive. You used an idiom incorrectly and instead of acknowledging that, you take several posts to argue about it. Good luck growing as a writer with that attitude towards your feedback.
This needs to be the intro for the PH album. Sam Jay, are you a good singer??
I thought the intro would be a 10-second harmony with me doing falsetto, you doing belting, GotSkill doing a low note and EuphorianSea making Bjork inspired jungle noises. Don't betray me like that
I thought the intro would be a 10-second harmony with me doing falsetto, you doing belting, GotSkill doing a low note and EuphorianSea making Bjork inspired jungle noises. Don't betray me like that
I thought the intro would be a 10-second harmony with me doing falsetto, you doing belting, GotSkill doing a low note and EuphorianSea making Bjork inspired jungle noises. Don't betray me like that
I hate Bonnie though
And she didn't write Firework or Dark Horse, just that Brave remix.
I'm not trying to diss you or anything. Usually I love your writing. But your song this week was the worst one I've read since like round 3
I gathered from your post in the Bonnie McKee Christmas song thread.
No shade but Firework and Dark Horse were kinda local. Roar is still ha biggest hit WW.
And yeah I know my song this week was extremely safe and basic so I don't care about the criticism, that's what you're here for.
And whoa at you shading Easy like that. My Thinking of You. My Crazy Kids. My G.U.Y. My Your Body. My Perfume. My You're Mine (Eternal). My The Story Of Us.
This needs to be the intro for the PH album. Sam Jay, are you a good singer??
Will results be up before 2pm CT? (I'm getting on a plane then.)
