[Lucky#17]

I won't be able to submit by Friday because I have a ton of school work and I have not written a complete song yet, I have snippets here and there and a concept so I know I can get done on Saturday. Thanks

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

^It'd be cool if whoever wins gets their entire collection in this game recorded, for realzies.

I will never have enough time ever again to record more than one song every three months

[Auris]

My third verse is a mess this round

Originally posted by AdamAL4

I will never have enough time ever again to record more than one song every three months

Maybe Nait and/or I/other producers could produce for the winner?

[Remmy]

Finally gonna send.

[Remmy]

Sent.

I have a feeling I might get dragged again, though this song is a lot more personal and emotional. I don't wanna be a trite bitch.

[VDK]

I have to take my hat off for IAmARudeBoy...dude killed it.

[doodledot13]

Sent mine.

[Hustler]

Sent mine too. Followed a different route than the usual, we'll see how it goes

[Hugamari]

For those yet to send, I am extending the deadline until the end of Saturday, so don't worry about rushing to get it in by the end of today.

[VDK]

Sent mine. My songs just have to tell a story it's the way I am.

[Disco_Blisters]

Originally posted by Hugamari

For those yet to send, I am extending the deadline until the end of Saturday, so don't worry about rushing to get it in by the end of today.

YAS thank you

[Hugamari]

So, I wanted to do this challenge with you guys (plot twist, I plan on doing every challenge that gets assigned in this game), but obviously that's kinda hard since I didn't get assigned a word...so, I instead took one of the words from my vocabulary test this week, ameliorate, as it was a word that I was unfamiliar with, but it looked like a really nice word to use in a song.

The title of the song I wrote using the word was...well...Ameliorate. If you guys want to see how I tackled this challenge, you can look at the little collapse tag.

Ameliorate

[V1]
I grasped shooting stars
I prayed a miracle
Though dreams made of gold
Red bled through my scars

Believe in destiny
I’ve seen with my eyes
I came to surmise
Love’d come finding me

[H]
It was when you arrived
Embers soared the skies
Scars that were marking me
Fade away in the light as we…

[C]
Ameliorate
Our hearts dance in figure-eights
Whether chance or whether fate
Have found us today

Illuminate
The wind whispers both our names
When the embers turn to flames
Of first love today

[V2]
With wealth down a well
You prayed a sweet release
Though dreams made of peace
Chaos reigns in Hell

Believe in a second chance
Betrayed every time
Learned to draw the line
‘fore the final dance

[H]
All the pain in your eyes
Flew with ember skies
All the lies and misery
Fade away in the light as we…

[C]
Ameliorate
Our hearts dance in figure-eights
Whether chance or whether fate
Have found us today

Illuminate
The wind whispers both our names
When the embers turn to flames
Of first love today

[B]
Together, we’ll ameliorate
Since we both have been through pain
Tears have cleared up with the rain
Ameliorate…

[C]
Ameliorate
Our hearts dance in figure-eights
Whether chance or whether fate
Have found us today

Illuminate
The wind whispers both our names
When the embers turn to flames
Of first love today

Ameliorate
Our hearts dance in figure-eights
Whether chance or whether fate
Have found us today

Illuminate
The wind whispers both our names
When the embers turn to flames
Of first love today

Ameliorate…
Ameliorate…
Whether chance or whether fate…
Ameliorate

(If this was a Platinum Hit entry, it would probably be my favorite. I really like it, even if it seems choppy. )

[seanoh]

Sent mine!

[Tymps.]

(If this was a Platinum Hit entry, it would probably be my favorite.)

HUGA

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by AdamAL4

HUGA

I meant out of the ones I've wrote. Gurl. I am not talking about the contestants' entries.

[Disco_Blisters]

Just sent my song

[doodledot13]

How many have submitted?

[Hustler]

HUGA ...
You make me feel like I was some D-List songwriter

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Hustler

HUGA ...
You make me feel like I was some D-List songwriter

Gorl I did NOT mean my favorite for this round. I meant my favorites out of the songs I personally have wrote for Platinum Hit challenges.

Obviously, the one I wrote was not an entry as I am not a contestant. Some people are taking it the wrong way.

[Legend E]

Guys, it's obvious that this is one of Huga's favorite songs that he ever wrote (or as he said for PH) ffs