I'm working on an essay (its a persuasive essay about gay rights)

I had so much to think about & now that I start writing I go brain dead.


I'm stuck on my body paragraph & I need to think about what gay people do that straight people do.


Not stuff like taking showers, Things like paying taxes OR something ... I'm so lost

Sex

EDIT: Oh, I though you said "like". Well don't we do everything the same?

What you're asking is really vague, and I'm not sure what you're trying to get at, but read this: http://www.nytimes.com/2009/06/28/fa...pagewanted=all

Everything

Live, breathe, pee, ****, eat.

That's what I always thought.

Everything, we do thesame stuff like them, we're all humans. And that's what your essay has to prove

Thanks, Hopefully I will get something from this

Well its a persuasive. Basically about why gay people should have equal rights like everyone else

Mabe something like "elections"?

well gays eat the poo poo




kidding

They come from all different sizes, shapes, and colors.

The problem with your essay is that you need to narrow your thesis statement; it is too general.

What should I do then?


Here I am thinking I would have a great essay