Discussion: My First Single - "Invisible"

Sin With A Grin

I've been talking about an EP and I've been recording like mad for the past few weeks. I finally finished one of my tracks which is the one I was going to use as a "single" so to speak. I've shown it to you guys before, but it was bad quality and webcam recorded. lol.
I know the vocals aren't particularly extraordinary. I don't have anything to edit my voice with and make it sound awesome...so you get my shaky and on-the-brink-of-going-off-key vocals raw and unedited. haha.
It's just a demo EP recorded in my bedroom... so this is the best I can get it to sound in terms of quality and "talent". Anyways...ATRL is a music forum with tons of opinionated and honest people. So I'd like your honest and opinionated feelings on this.

*crosses fingers*
*prepares for abuse* lmao.

<3

Owl

Whoa, I love it

MrDeeds

1. Wow you're a girl
You have a beautiful voice, but i can barely hear what you're singing.

Loved the guitar.

LCTV

Sounds great

**Edit - ^ ikr I wouldn't have known you were a girl based on your username / sig

Remmy

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Originally posted by MrDeeds

You have a beautiful voice, but i can barely hear what you're singing.

Loved the guitar.

Same. It's hard for me to hear what you're singing

But when I can, it's amazing of course.

But obviously I already knew you were a girl.

I think I heard this from you before, because I actually remember it.

Unless if this is a cover?

circus.co

Beautiful

I love your voice!

Wilkes

You need to get a session in the recording studio.

EDIT: My only critiscm is that if it just going to be you and a guitar, I think that the same chords getting played over and over become monotonous over time. Change it up, experiment or introduce some more instruments into the mix.

Sin With A Grin

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Originally posted by Remeese

Same. It's hard for me to hear what you're singing

But when I can, it's amazing of course.

But obviously I already knew you were a girl.

I think I heard this from you before, because I actually remember it.

Unless if this is a cover?

LOL. I had an acoustic version on youtube that I posted in an ATRL blog a few months ago. But the song is mine. lol.

And wow. Thanks guys!!!

Also, thanks for the advice. I'll work on the volume problem.

Owl

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Originally posted by Sin With A Grin

LOL. I had an acoustic version on youtube that I posted in an ATRL blog a few months ago. But the song is mine. lol.

And wow. Thanks guys!!!

Also, thanks for the advice. I'll work on the volume problem.

I remember when you posted the acoustic version. I'd love to listen to the EP, once it comes out.

DrogoBrush

I really love it. Just work on the volume and it should be fine.

Sin With A Grin

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Thanks guys <3

Btw...is my gender really that shocking? lmao.
I fangirl a lot on this forum...

KarlosVzla

So so so sooooo good. I'm gonna reblog this and share it haha

Sin With A Grin

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Originally posted by KarlosVzla

So so so sooooo good. I'm gonna reblog this and share it haha

Ooh. I just saw. Thank you sooo much <3
Great blog, btw. Followed.

ManDown

Oh my god, you're really talented. Very beautiful voice and beautiful lyrics. When you release an EP/album, I'll definitely be one of the first to buy it.