Im super BORED and i wanted to do and interesting thread sooo
- Future artists ,show off your musical and lyrical chops here share songs , opinions and just praise some haha

For example Here's one song I wrote :
- Song: Leave

I don't know what to do
but I just can't stop thinking about you,
I see you with hate inside
but our greatest moments take over my mind ,
I Breath in and then breath out
so i still love you , it ain't no doubt
Even though I was a pain ,
ur acts with me where a shame

Why does it hurt so much ?
I thank you Cause now im stronger
and every little thing i do takes longer
So Even though u made me a wreck
Now i have my reality check
U were Nothin to me
So Leave


You had a chance for the last time
and wrecked it with ur stupid lies
you wasted ur time with me
so now, please just leave
U hurt me inside ,
i thought it was the end of my life

Why does it hurt so much ?
I thank you Cause now im stronger
and every little thing i do takes longer
So Even though u made me a wreck
Now i have my reality check
U were Nothin to me
So just Leave

But even if ur stupid ways
made me cry
Along the time
I know I was alright
Cause when a door closes ,
another one opens
So guess wat I don't need you no more
Life goes one with alot more thing to adore

Why does it hurt so much ?
I thank you Cause now im stronger
and every little thing i do takes longer
So Even though u made me a wreck
Now i have my reality check
U were Nothin to me at all
So please let it be , Just Leave



lol xD hope u liikeeed

The song is great Great Job

Your lyric is good you are a pretty good composer then !

How do you post a melody? Anywho, i always write music. Even though i think i suck at it,it's just so fun

Uhm I don't want to come off as negative but some one could come in here and steal your song.
Like a famous producer and use it as theirs.

I love to sing! I generally only do covers. :P Definitely would like to know what you think. I have two songs from my YouTube channel (please subscribe!) and some better quality vocal recordings @ Soundcloud: julantvel

My cover of "If I Were A Boy" 2yrs ago (December 20, 2008)


My Cover of "Grenade" 17 days ago

well upload it to youtube and post it here.... -_- lol
anywho!! hah i love writing music too and i also think it sucks xD buuut like u say its too fun

never thought off that xD
buut it would be cool too see a famous artist do my song lol jk

wow
ur really good ^.^
u should try for American Idol lol

Child,you are too ****ing cute,i got first dibs

Anywho,you have a nice voice.

Grenade>>>>>>>

I might end up doing that. Even though i think im mediocre when it comes to writing lyrics,i must admit my melodies are so addictive.

Took the words out of my mouth
I'd post my songs, but they have yet to be recorded...and i don't want to risk anyone stealing them. Famous producer is a bit much. But random lurkers that like the song could easily steal it (and i don't just mean atrl members. i mean guests that are checking the page out. lol)

I would, but I would like to copyright my stuff first... if and when I have the drive to do so.

Isn't it $50 and a half a year wait to copyright a song? Or can it be done faster?

Damn. I didn't know you actually needed licensing... I thought you just have to be the first (with proof) to tag a big old © or ℗ on something for it to be legally yours.

I actually just wrote thirty seconds of a song today. The instrumental sounds alright. It's just synths and percussion right now. Two instruments. But I like it. It's the first time I've ever written and produced my own song. We'll see how it goes. I've written lyrics before and used to write a lot of poetry. Someday I'd like to be bigger than GaGa.



Like that could ever happen. But no I would like to try to pursue a career in the pop world. It would be fun. I'd like to take an image or lifestyle such as that of Michael Alig and turn it into a pop star played by myself.

Song Title: Victim


Victim

I’ve be fighting with myself
Don’t wanna be somebody else
But the drug I got addicted to
Is so poisonous now am unable to hold back

Fighting but am loosing
The precious glooms which gave me meaning
Look at the pretty pearl that now lye in ruins


It’s what I want, it’s what I need
I’ve got a monster trapped in me
It’s what I want, it’s what I need
Call the doc, can he help me?

Cause I am a victim
To the thrills of a secret love
I am victim
Can’t you see that it ain’t real love
I need a way, a path
To shed my bloody tears
Trapped inside
Won’t let it out cause I fear

Never saw the truth behind the lie
I was so blind like a prick was stuck in my eyes
Now am so lost and can’t be found
Screaming so loud but am 10 feet beneath the ground

It’s what I want, it’s what I need
I’ve got a monster trapped in me
It’s what I want, it’s what I need
Call the doc, can he help me?

Cause I am a victim
To the thrills of a secret love
I am victim
Can’t you see that it ain’t real love
I need a way, a path
To shed my bloody tears
Trapped inside
Won’t let it out cause I fear

It’s what I want, it’s what I need
I’ve got a monster trapped in me
It’s what I want, it’s what I need
Call the doc, can he help me?
It’s what I want, it’s what I need
I’ve got a monster trapped in me
It’s what I want, it’s what I need
Call the doc, can he help me?

Now that the table is set
And all the fact is spreaded out
Will you finally let me go
Cause I don’t want to stay no more

You know we didn’t plan all this
Your taking it too far
But I think I’ve grown to like
The pain of it all

It’s what I want, it’s what I need
I’ve got a monster trapped in me
It’s what I want, it’s what I need
Call the doc, can he help me?

It’s what I want, it’s what I need
I’ve got a monster trapped in me
It’s what I want, it’s what I need
Call the doc, can he help me?

Cause I am a victim
To the thrills of a secret love
I am victim
Can’t you see that it ain’t real love
I need a way, a path
To shed my bloody tears
Trapped inside
Won’t let it out cause I fear

Cause I am a victim
To the thrills of a secret love
I am victim
Can’t you see that it ain’t real love
I need a way, a path
To shed my bloody tears
Trapped inside
Won’t let it out cause I fear

©Stafford ‘Da Duke’ Duncan

http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.php?t=104725&page=7

I created a thread for this sort of things already.

I'm a Country singer and writer! My friends told me that I'm super talented! Here is the chorus of my country song I've working on for months now:

Oh sis, this I need to see.