Would a few of you mind commenting on my Best Of?


I wanna get it to the next page for the next update.

The struggle I'm going through is truly real

I wrote some lines and a chorus but I'm just serving adjective overload like with my first 2 entries and now idk what to do

I think I have an idea for Gone With The Breeze. Endless Night part 2 is coming.

I'm struggling with fitting the title in though. I had "But sometimes, I wonder, praying on my knees / How were you here one day and the next gone with the breeze?" but It just sounds.. Awkward? Maybe I won't try to rhyne breeze.

''then'' sounds better than ''the next'' to me but I suck so

That's better nn, that line was too long anyway

I've had the line "I must become an island" swimming around in my mind all day and I knew it was from somewhere, but I couldn't remember where.

It's Sara Bareilles.


I was going to rip off Sara Bareilles. Everybody's doing it!

"If you're gonna steal, steal from the best." - Gandhi

What titles are you all working with so far?

Wooden Branches

if there's one thing I'm happy about with my entry I think my rhyming got a lot better

no more pills/still/will

Achilles's avi would be pretty if it was longer than 1/3 of a second

can i get 2 pity posts for the next page http://atrl.net/?p=37788648

i'll comment on yours if you do

Yeah, I need to see if I can find a longer clip.

Boys Will Be Boys

Idk

anyone wanna read my song

Fun fact it was supposed to be wind but it's too hard to rhyme with.

I've been so sick for the past few days, I'll really have to fight the brain fog to write this entry

Beautiful