My song



It's a bit experimental

Originally posted by Temporal kk daddy I mean if B3 was ready yet

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo You'll get them eventually 💤💤💤

Originally posted by minho I did a traditional song structure, a minimal approach looks very good now though. Prism Shot from your eyes Your gaze covers me Don’t stop My hands move forward but You’re impossible to hold Slipping through my fingers like water Breaking apart into dazzling colours (CHORUS) Don’t stop, keep it going You entered my body Without me knowing Won’t stop, i’ll break through My light will dazzle you - Reflecting through a prism in the night Nothing prepared me for your beam of light Hitting the deepest part of my core So what are you waiting for? Pull the trigger, let it pierce through I’ll keep steady, my eyes fixed on you We’re distant, but I feel you trembling Isn’t that the strangest feeling? Even the clock reaches a standstill Makes time feel infinite Keep staring right through me My eyes stay fixed on you (CHORUS) Don’t stop, keep it going You entered my body Without me knowing Won’t stop, i’ll break through Let my light dazzle you Like a shot from your eyes I can feel it too (CHORUS) Don’t stop, keep it going You entered my body Without me knowing Won’t stop, i’ll break through Let my light dazzle you Will my attempts at Kpop/Pop pay off? We'll see Fun fact: this is my first attempt at a "rap" section

Originally posted by BODERLINE Is there some significance to the batches? Or is it just be when you submitted?

Scorching blazes surround the rubble around me
Dejection as far as the eye can see
Leashed torture's a normality
I drown out the noises of lunatics with miracle sweets
I detect the wild jaguars before my journey to paradise

A little girl's a casualty of a firmly ignited family war
Her existence is a mere nuisance to terrorize
Rejection is the prime melody of her heartstrings
Her and depression develop a tight camaraderie
Caressing her body with tight tethers
Her sanity slowly depletes while hearing the screams
The embrace of the girl's best friend tightens
As she discovers freedom is an unattainable measure
Amidst emotional turmoil she finds a shining pill sideboard
Every pill is downed as grim fate verges
The parents sprint as a rescue squad to find they're late
They never got to explain their love for her

Originally posted by BODERLINE Is there some significance to the batches? Or is it just be when you submitted?

unfurled like a sail, you're letting me in
you leave me a trail, a path made of skin

you're warm like a fire, and soft in my hands
i want to admire, and feel you like sand

i will find you in the night
i will find you in the night

you open the door, i step in the hall
it's what you longed for, your touch says it all

you're bright like the sky, and smooth like a stone
a king in my eyes, my heart is your throne

i will find you in the night
i will find you in the night

and so here we are, retracing the steps
two exploding stars, and debris we left

i have found you in the night
i have found you in the night

[Verse 1]
Origami paper fold
Passing notes like we were told
Not to do
Writing sweet nothings
Dotting our I's with hearts
Feelings flew

[Hook 1]
Secrets we were too scared to shout
Till the fold is opened
And they're all let out

[Chorus]
Passing notes like little kids
Maxing out the lives we lived
Those were the days, those were the days
Catching feelings like a cold
Passing notes till we grow old
Those were the days, those were the days

[Verse 2]
Innocent childhood
Passing notes like rebels would
A wild ride
Spilling our secrets
Praying not to get caught
Fear ran high

[Hook 2]
Innocent acts of love that we hide
Till the fold is opened
And we let them all fly

[Chorus]
Passing notes like little kids
Maxing out the lives we lived
Those were the days, those were the days
Catching feelings like a cold
Passing notes till we grow old
Those were the days, those were the days

[Bridge]
Where have they gone
Our innocence
Our youth's song
Where did the days go
When we passed notes to say hello

[Chorus - Stripped Back]
Passing notes like little kids
Maxing out the lives we lived
Those were the days, those were the days
Catching feelings like a cold
Passing notes till we grow old
Those were the days

[Final Chorus]
Passing notes like little kids
Maxing out the lives we lived
Those were the days, those were the days
Catching feelings like a cold
Passing notes till we grow old
Those were the days, those were the days

Originally posted by PhreshDiamond when do we get the full results etc?

Originally posted by Jackson I love all of that other than the sand line I see you're going more minimalist this round/season

Originally posted by PhreshDiamond when do we get the full results etc?

Originally posted by Gladion What batch am I in