Gworl this aint a question. This is PROMO. Thinking you slick. If you didn't think you could sing, you wouldn't have slaved over CS5 for hours creating album artwork. You aint slick.

You have a nice tone and the instrumental is quite good in my opinion. My only criticism regarding the song is that the vocals seem to not be fitting with the instrumental at all, and as a result the song ends up being a bit hard to listen to, if you ask me. Other than that, keep up the good work!

The next David Guetta, maybe

This song is an atrocity. But your voice is fine.

You need to work at it so perhaps there's potential. Pitchy in some parts but good tones in others.

I've heard much worse. Just trying to be honest. Good luck!

It sounds like you're talking over a track.

No.

Honestly the tone kind of reminds me of beyonce. You have a great voice, you just need voice lessons and to practice a lot. The voice itself could be very pretty but you just need to control it better, and the melody of this song is awkward and doesn't match the production at all.

I just think your tempo is not matching up with the song's tempo.

no

bad news..

Doesn't sound extremely bad, besides the pitch and the lyrics. It seemed all over the place lyric wise

IM ON THE FLOOR OMGGGGG


you're not bad but

1) you need to improve the production on your voice because is tragic
2) you're not in sync with the track
3) your voice is cute but you can get much better with practice
4) you can sing, if you wanna sing you can and if you believe and practice enough you WILL sing, girl, go and slay us with those bops
5) the instrumental is a bit tragic... but keep on producing (since i guess you did it yoursel)

Fix your timing sis. And add some reverb and delay to the vocals cause they sound way too dry