theycallmemaraj - DYING @ WHATEVER SONG THAT IS ON "Stupid In Love". Is this ANTi?
Oh, and the "I'm The Best" audio isn't there at all. At least Kesha's song worked! Her power! Anyway, I liked how you had some message to relay, or almost like a moral that you stand by, with the latter 2 choices, but I didn't quite get that with the first one. I also thought the choice of songs was...predictable as far as the variety in artists go. I can't really knock you if that who you feel you are, but it's something to keep in mind for later rounds.
Chill Bill - Let me just say that I loved how eclectic your choices were! I also enjoyed how you were actually able to relay specific lyrics and how they relate to you. I didn't even feel like you had to exaggerate or reach to relate to the songs - they just worked for you. As far as the presentation goes...it was more on the typical side, but I'm sure your creative side will be explored later on!
Clueless - contact*
no, but I feel like this was a bit...plain. I mean, fair enough you did describe your choices, but it felt very detached to me. The most personality I got from this was when you had the "kickstarter" to bring back your dead dog. I chuckled. I also kinda felt like "2 On" could've...been replaced with something better. There are tons of light-hearted, care-free songs you could have chosen, but 2 On just tells me that by "lighthearted" and "carefree", you like to get drunk and high at the same time, which...is fair enough if that's ACTUALLY you, but something tells me that's not what you were going for...?
Girlicious - As far as song choices go, yours is definitely among the more "out there" ones. DYING @ someone actually calling themselves $WAGGOT. What I find really interesting about some of the songs on your trinity is that there's a bit of a comical feel in the latter 2 songs, yet there's still something that you personally take from it. It was an interesting approach, but it would've came full circle, it would've been more powerful imo.
Kyle. - Fitting choices, but idk..I kinda felt like I was reading some footnotes rather than getting a full picture. It's kinda hard to do given you have 3 songs, I get it, but I feel like this lets people know very small pieces of information about you...like they're trivia facts that you'll forget later on, rather than like...a formal introduction of who you are. I don't know if I'm even making any sense, but...yeah. I guess I just wanted more from this.
Pecinta Mariah - Although I felt that the entry overall could've done with something more, I liked your "mind/body/soul" motif, and the part about religion is something I think is important. I'm not even religious myself, but I do believe it's really important that religion is something that's personal to you, and not really forced on you, and everyone should be able to believe and practice in their own ways without being questioned.
Kxvk - Kudos, first of all, for doing a whole trinity using non-English songs. I think that's a risk in-and-of itself. What I liked about your entry, though, is that even though they weren't in English, you connect with them anyway. (I'm going on a limb here and am going to assume you're not fluent in Japanese or Korean.) I think that gives your entry another message of music being able to break language barriers, which I think most people either don't believe, or don't want to.
Witch_Privilege - Sorry bitch, I'm placing you 4th this round.
Musickid203 - Hmm...I'm not entirely sure what to take from your entry. You tried explaining yourself, yet I felt you did it in a really impersonal way, like you dabbled on things but never actually went into detail. The best example I can give of this is "Everyday we come across people who aren't the same as us and are judged by our differences. I learned this the hard way through out high school and even earlier on in life."...what exactly happened here? I feel like I'd know you a bit better if I knew.
DevonDreams - Bish whet? How do you mention your mom doing drugs as like a footnote or something? Like I literally never would've guessed this? But this brings up something: I feel like you want to tell us something, but yet you don't, which is why you told us your mom did drugs but really didn't elaborate much on it. If you would've gone a bit deeper with it, I feel it would've made for a more powerful entry. Oh, and I'm really sorry to hear that by the way. I know what it's like to have drug addicts in the family.
DripDrip - This entry feels very inspired. It's like somebody close to you led you on a path of self-discovery. "He had a hug grip on her." The PANDERING is real.
No, but I loved the way you approached the challenge from a creative standpoint, but like...is this real? Like did this actually happen? Because I feel like this was more creative writing than an introduction to who you are. This tells me you're creative, though, so it's a start!
Xedretinz Lododnz - I liked the approach you took with this. It was like taking a look into your thought processes, which is a good way to tackle the "Me" Trinity. If I had any qualms with the trinity, it's that all of the songs were a bit..."pop"? I'm not saying that's a bad thing, and if it's YOU, who am I to say otherwise? Just look into diversifying later on.
jpow -
I kinda wish you didn't base your entry around love, but I get it.
Fidel - Aw I love your little running theme with the P words. Also choosing a K-Pop song was a bold move, but I appreciate it.
I just wish you didn't make your text black because its hard to read on my theme!
A Bomb - You definitely showed the most personality this week.
Also, only one of those things you said about me is true. Anyway, I feel like you've inspired people very close to you to follow in your footsteps, and that in and of itself shows that you're a leader and not a follower. True to your entry.
I LOVED the concept as well! Taking the twist on idolizing super heroes and applying it practically is a very interesting take on things, but in a good way! Well done.
Satan - You know what your entry needed? An anecdote. I would've loved a cute story about how one or all of these songs related to you. It would've done a lot more for this entry. I don't really have much to say except that it wasn't bad, just felt a bit plain.
Mirrorwriting - "I've almost abandoned Western pop in favour for the superior styles of the East." true. This was so cute, by the way! I remember doing something similar with my entry. I also never knew you actually were into Rock for a while...or if you still are? Glad this let me know more about you!
Speezy - "Yes, revenge is good but sometimes I let karma run its." ??? I know course is supposed to be at the end, but yeah just something I thought I'd point out. As for the trinity itself, I'm surprised Jordin Sparks isn't there, but it's cool to see an entry where someone didn't shoehorn in their favorite artist (She's still your fave, right?
) I'm not entirely sold on the choices you had, but you know you the best.
Dessy Fenix - I liked how you touched on different parts of yourself without it seeming like a jumbled mess. It all felt linear and neccessary, and in a way I felt like I got to know a bit more about who you are, which is the goal of this trinity, so a good job on that front.
Bloomers - Aw I liked the part with Jackson Browne. It was heartwarming. I also felt that you did what the challenge asked, so I can't really complain much there. I also liked how personal it got at times. Just the right amount!
But I think Staryu and I ended up being nice in our comments.
.. you did a great job with your explanations, it made your song choices so much stronger, really a solid entry.
Anyways.. I think this is a very strong and creative trinity. You better not quit this season, because I feel like you are such a consistent force of creativity.
. I love the approach and you made great song choices. A very solid entry with a creative and well-executed approach.
Revenge being a big part of your life doesn't seem healthy gurl, but your song choice goes well with that feeling I guess 
) , A Bomb's, Mirrorwritingsong's (California Love 
), kvxk, and Chill Bill's
(JK)
