You were calm, cool and collected — already very professional. And I love that your set wasn't just punchline after punchline. You wove a very intricate web with detailed storytelling; expanding upon something as seemingly mundane as that time your cat played with your underwear, and expertly crafting five minutes worth of side-splitting hilarity. Nearly as fun as digging the lint out of my belly button.
This is my first attempt at a dramatic monologue. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY!
You were calm, cool and collected — already very professional. And I love that your set wasn't just punchline after punchline. You wove a very intricate web with detailed storytelling; expanding upon something as seemingly mundane as that time your cat played with your underwear, and expertly crafting five minutes worth of side-splitting hilarity. Nearly as fun as digging the lint out of my belly button.
This is my first attempt at a dramatic monologue. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY!
You were calm, cool and collected — already very professional. And I love that your set wasn't just punchline after punchline. You wove a very intricate web with detailed storytelling; expanding upon something as seemingly mundane as that time your cat played with your underwear, and expertly crafting five minutes worth of side-splitting hilarity. Nearly as fun as digging the lint out of my belly button.
This is my first attempt at a dramatic monologue. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY!
