Place your camera slightly above your face, not under it
Don't film in your bathroom, rather in your living/bedroom with natural light
Work on the audio editing
And sometimes 'bloopers' are funny but not every 10 seconds, be more selective in what you show and what you don't (this will also help the duration of the video cause it's too long)
Other than that this was pretty entertaining and you seem like a really nice person, good luck!