I was waiting for you to ask that, too. I didn't think the actual challenge was going to be posted on that page.

I didn't want you to because you went to the effort and it was quite funny. Collapse tags, perhaps?

can someone read/review my first two verses please

When you think Taylor Swift
I hope you think of me

My hook.

you better lawyer up!

you better shut the hell up!

Ddd too late I deleted it fat.

So I got done with my final presentations a bit earlier than I had intended, that gives me a day to write my song I guess, if I neglect practicing the presentation part.

Can you guys get my best of to the next page? I've got like a billion videos on the current one and I have one more set to post tonight

I'm about to have a breakdown similar to the one I had during the social message challenge. Nothing is coming to me.

Edit: nvm found a concept while taking a shower

A bit late, but I posted to show my support. I really am impressed with just how much you listened to for your Year End. I literally would never.

Um, so I think I just made the artistic choice to not have a chorus. Ready to get dragged. The good news is I'm finally onto something

I didn't have a chorus last round and it worked out ok!

I downloaded an app that reads my notes and wow. I love how it reads it and lets me know if my meter is good

Lets hope I'll be able to pull it off as flawlessly as you probably did!

wut is it

I need to finish my draft tonight, I need half a verse and a bridge still

It's called key note though I'm using a windows phone (my galaxy flopped on me recently so I'm using an old phone) don't know if it's in the android store or apple one. However there should be similar ones!

My song is very much in the realm of Stars of Dusk for me, so I guess that's cool.

My song is short. Just finished it but I'm completely satisfied. Some parts are as vague as Florence's lyrics that are scared of being vulnerable and some parts are as direct as Florence's lyrics that tell it like it is