I rewrote the bridge to my song because swiftie, moony, and I were all side eying it. It's drastically improved! Also made a slight modification to my outro, and I like that better now as well.
Gabe and Moony both think I should improve my chorus. I can see where they're coming from, too, but idk if I really want to change it much.
Wait @ this one line of my chorus that I just realized could be interpreted two different ways. A Swiftian moment.
Happy birthday to you
I'll let you eat a piece of this cake
If you place your gift on my face
Let me have a taste of your frosting
And you will see my ***** popping
The controversy of what it means would make it smash tbh 
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@ocean lips.
