Thanks lovesong! I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad you got what I was sorta going for nn.
I wanna read Cockson's tbh
Also glad you're better now GotSkill, I never fight with boyfriends either so I get some of the situation, it sucks that he came for your guitar playing though.
Cheetah's sounds like Christmases When You Were Mine (by Taylor Swift, get your copy of Sounds of the Season on iTunes or at your local Target today) lettuce read!
What’s with the sad Christmas songs? Anyways, this was a great, effective song. I love some of your language here. I feel the longing and hopelessness in the song. There were a few awkward lines in the first verse, but they can be ignored.
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Originally posted by Hugamari
Another dark song. This had a bit of grace to it, at least in the chorus...it felt like it could be a holiday song. One to get drunk and hate the world to, but a holiday song nonetheless.
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aldskfj crying. This was beautiful! A little cliché stuff here and there but all the way through it was well written and very tight. The concept came through beautifully through your word choice and rhythm and I loved the bridge so much.
- Blown Away, Carrie Underwood
- Stripped, Christina Aguilera
- Oops, Britney Spears
- Baby One More Time, Britney Spears
- Honeymoon, Lana Del Rey
- Title, Meghan Trainor
OOPS... I DID IT AGAIN (2000) OVERALL SCORE: TBD BEST TRACKS: TBD
SONG
1. Oops!... I Did It Again
2. Stronger
3. Don't Go Knockin' On My Door
4. Satisfaction
5. Don't Let Me Be The Last To Know
6. What U See is What U Get
7. Lucky
8. One Kiss From You
9. Where Are You Now?
10. Can't Make You Love Me
11. When Your Eyes Say It
12. Dear Diary
RATING
8.8
8.0
6.8
Oops... I Did It Again: The opening ad-lib is so iconic This is so well put together, especially on the part of the production. It's so hard for me to control my gay when this is playing you have no idea. Why does the bridge have to ruin the groove though? PS, the Glee version slays.
Stronger: Okay the vocal is tragic but the production is so bold and brash. The chorus is generally basic, but the chord on "my loneliness ain't killin' me no more" is awesome, and the verses keep up a nice pace. Wish she had the chops to keep up with the ending run. Overall this is good!
Don't Go Knockin' On My Door: This is still good, but I feel like it's treading in the same territory as the tracks before it. It feels like strong filler. The outro makes this a tad more original though.
Thank you! 
This is so well put together, especially on the part of the production. It's so hard for me to control my gay when this is playing you have no idea. Why does the bridge have to ruin the groove though? PS, the Glee version slays.