Sent!

My song is so preachy, but I feel like it's still really powerful and could potentially be a catchy bop... in the right producer's hands.



Just came up with an idea for the bridge that, woo Lord, would piss off so many people if this song were ever made for real.

I have 1 hr free I'm gonna rewrite my 2nd verse for more imagery and hopefully submit. Changed my stupid "president" line. My song is to do with recent events in the world and my own personal experience. Here I'm going for emotion >>>>> imagery/metaphor but I need to balance it a little more evenly.

I did some final touches on my song and sent in a revised version to Sam. The wait for hints/comments will be torture tbh.

Sam can you confirm you received my new version? Thanks

Well no one agreed on something to fix so let me write up my PM

My bridge is

My entire song is


I can't see this not getting dragged tbh. Even though I think it's kinda great.

A true reverse warholian experience.

Sent! All of you other flops better hurry because I don't want to have to wait 20 years for hints because of your late obese asses!

Sent. At 9:29 PM.

I can already tell it will be divisive.




Let me know if y'all want to read it and I'll PM you.
Haven't seen anyone's songs this round. No idea what to expect.

Clarkson you can always send it to me but idk if you truly consider my advice helpful tbh

I wanna read

hxtcyju I already sent, but you're welcome to look at it if you want I consider all feedback helpful

I want to read it

Btw ausdaniel sorry for not critiquing your song, I've been busy, I wasn't even able to read it

Posting my song in here in hope that others do the same so I can gain an arbitrary sense of self-worth based on how much I like y'all's songs!

Clarkson's song is so poetic. Mine is so blunt and in-your-face.

Anytime I try to not be poetic I end up getting dragT so

That single cover