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Originally posted by Moonchild
Thank you!  Were there any likes you liked in particular or specific things I might need to improve?
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I think the ONLY thing missing from this song was that one line (or a few even) that makes me go YAAAAAAAAS because I love it so much. As I said, your technicalities were all on point, but it's not the type of song I would love for its lyrics. (From what I could tell, it would've been a good sis bop, though!)
EDIT: Not to say they were bad, because I think, for the type of song you did, you sufficed, but I wouldn't say "amazing"!