"04. ausdaniel – Quarantine (Jealousy)
General: I'm going to be honest, I thought this was really familiar with lots of other songs. You tried to keep with your "radiation" metaphor, but it was only in the chorus and part of the second verse. You would've had a much stronger entry had you kept your theme throughout, but as it stands, I was left with a more "meh" feeling.
Does it fit the challenge: I felt more a sense of regret or longing than jealously, and the only time I felt any form of jealousy was when I was outright told you were jealous."
The thing is that I agree with every single critique you made, but I JUST don't feel like it's a "meh" song if you know that I mean? ahahaha I just am really proud of it even though I see it's flaws so idk how to respond to your critique
Still calling ha Euphorian.
Were there any likes you liked in particular or specific things I might need to improve?
Good point, let me not 