Cause I may be bad but I'm perfectly good at it
Sex in the air, I don't care, I love the smell of it


For inspiration...

When you rhyme waist with waste

I used to love her so much, I have all her records (even the ****** remix albums), but Unapologetic killed her for me, and I'm not anticipating too much from ANTI either.

Changed a line and now I hate my song again

If it's not a forced rhyme, it's a really great one

Unapologetic was good though . But yeah - Anti has been very anti-climatic so far

I liked Jump, Diamonds, Stay (without Mikky Ekko tho), Love Without Tragedy (without Mother Mary tho) and Lost in Paradise, but the urban songs (especially Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...eeeee Song) were horrible and instant skips.

Bitch Better Have My Money and FourFiveSeconds are both really really bad tho

Don't do Loveeeeeeeeeeeeee Song like that . Phresh was so good at the time. In fact even today it makes me feel myself. I love it. Pour It Up slays too . I was never a fan of Numb though.

Pour It Up is alright, but it's video is more than disgusting (although it's VERY hot)

And what really really horrified my was 777 Tour, when she sang so so so badly, I couldn't even watch the DVD till the end.

My second verse turned out to be something really great! I just have to pull off the first one now!

Bu, would you mind to comment on Loud as it is now?

I hated her hair in that video but I wasn't expecting anything less of disgusting haha. She was hot in it though.

Send it over

Well, in a way this kind of *****-ing shouldn't be attractive, but that pole-dance tho

Sent

Received .

My song structure is weird

13.5 hours left and only 8/31 entries in.

Im gonna send tonight but my entry is a hot mess

So happy I'm one of them

Oh good

My song so far goes

Verse
[x]
Verse continued
[x]
Chorus
Verse
[y]
Verse continued
[y]
Chorus
Bridge
Chorus
Outro

What is the x/y called? Or have I just invented a new song structure? . I can't call it a pre-chorus because it's in the middle of the verses too.