26. Pencita Mariah – Rays The title you chose isn't the first thing I would have thought of for a title. But it's your song and nobody can tell you what to call it. About the song itself, though - it's hard to describe. Although you did repeat a line quite a few times, it's one of the few times that I think it actually added something to the song. It adds a bit of desperation, which is thematically relevant to your song. In the same time, the repetition makes it like you're mentally degenerating or "losing it", but I can only wish the rest of the lyrics had followed that concept. It isn't bad, but I think adding a different idea to it would've pushed it off the edge to amazing!

Originally posted by Obsession I don't understand the different choruses bit though, I thought I only noted one chorus - did I forget something?

Originally posted by HausofNiko Letters for an Empty Heart im really pulling through with you!!! Hopefully ill be able to pass my forever peak of #22

It was only supposed to be this:

If only you’ll promise
No matter where I may roam
That you’ll be my compass
Then I’ll find my way home

and then at the end, it would be repeated twice - but I was in a rush when I submitted it, so I don't know if maybe my notation was wrong or something

EDIT: Sorry for the confusion, guys, next time I won't submit 5m before I leave for work.

Originally posted by Obsession It was only supposed to be this: If only you’ll promise No matter where I may roam That you’ll be my compass Then I’ll find my way home and then at the end, it would be repeated twice - but I was in a rush when I submitted it, so I don't know if maybe my notation was wrong or something

Originally posted by Urban_Fan In the hat? That's me lol.

Moonchild – Over The Moon And the winner of the most creative way of getting around the character limit award goes to Moonchild! There's something very gentle yet dark about this song, it isn't gloom doom death abyss etc., and I think more of the dark entries should go a bit like this. As last time, you went through the song so gracefully and everything went about so seemlessly, so all I can really say is I love it!

35. Witch Privilege – Platinum Hit I'm offended that you couldn't even manage to fit the word "Hug" into this diss track.

Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah it seems not many people can spell my username correctly just call me placenta then About your comment, idk I wanted this song to be very gloomy but okay I'll take it as positive/mixed review, thank you very much hug!

I'm glad that I was able to hide my addiction to meter this time around, my bad habit is sacrificing good word choices for the sake of meter.

Originally posted by Vulnicura I just remember it as placenta

Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah or Pen is a better nickname for me

Originally posted by Hugamari 2 of my 10s aint even seen their critiques yet (I don't think) Hurry up putas.

I hope no one thinks I was taking swipes at my reviews btw, because I really appreciate the time you guys have put into judging these songs.