Every time I'm really proud of song I break my heels running to show it to ppl and I always appreciate the criticisms so I can make it better but then I find all the things wrong with it and I get sad

I know this feeling .

Same. After I submit it, I try to ignore it

I guess I'll rewrite it.

no your entry was great! tweaking is fine, but don't scrap your work. remember the critiques that we and the judges give you is just so you can grow.

Really? I thought it was great. It told a great story and I liked that.

Why are you saying "**** you" when I said that you were serving HBIC teas?

Okay!

Sticking with my bop then

I second this!

I wrote three songs for this challenge... Wow. I've never done that before

Question that's probably been asked before... Can we re-cycle old material that hasn't been used for PH? I started writing a song several months ago (literally only 3 lines) and I never finished it.

Do like me and just keep it to yourself #enigma.

I show people occasionally at the beginning, or a select few who I know, but in general I feel like I've heard it all before from everybody. This line sounds awkward, I like it but I don't understand it, this rhyme sounds forced, I don't like this word. Well you know what how about I just do me #finalist.

Can I send you my song tho?

Yes but I'm always obligated to be generally positive and point out vaguely similar things to what everybody else says which will probably actually have very little or no impact on your score if you change it. Unless I really hate it then i don't reply (@ClarksonSlays).

.

This past weekend I wrote like 4 things short enough that they could be submitted, and a fifth one that's too long.

My most productive period in like a year or more.


What they don't know won't hurt them.

As long as you're not submitting a song that you finished writing three years ago, I don't see why it'd be a problem.

I see somebody would rather be a cynic that a critic.

You ain't slick.

That's on of the first times I legitimately yelped at a post on ATRL tho. Congrats

True

I think I'll keep it, but change the meter and the length of the stanzas and it relies too much on the influence of other songs so I think some lines need to be changed.

Idk

Warm inside, yeah


I'd like to direct your attention
To something that needs directing to
A lot of people talk about
Dining in and eating out
I guess that's what this song's about

I know this is not a dining room conversation
And you don't have to listen if you don't have the time
But let me remind you in case you don't already know
Dining out can happen down below

Everybody's talkin' 'bout
Wanting that and needing this
I'd just like to know
If you want to learn a different kind of kiss

So won't you go down where it's warm inside
Go down where I cannot hide
Go down where all life begins
Go down that's where my love is

Now what could be better than a home cooked meal
How you want to eat it depends on how you feel
You can eat all you want and you don't get fat
Now where else can you go for a meal like that
It's not fair to be selfish or stingy
Every girl should experience eating out
Sometimes when I come home from a hard day at work
I swear it's all I can think about

Colonel Sanders says it best
"Finger lickin' good"
Let's put what you've learned to the test
Can you make a fire without using wood
Are you still hungry; aren't you glad we came
I'm glad you brought your raincoat
I think it's beginning to rain

That's where my love is
Come inside
That's where all life begins
It's warm inside