Yall writing sexually explicit bops...

Originally posted by JakeKills Yall writing sexually explicit bops...

powwow to the beat of the drums
hot like a bonfire 'till the great white cums
powwow to the beat of the drums
whistle-blowing 'till the daylight comes


an excerpt from my Season 5 #1 Powwow, inspired by Nait Phoenix and EuphorianSea

Originally posted by Buyonce1814 My sexual bops would be too much for the judges to handle

Originally posted by GotSkill I very much appreciate a subtle, sensual sex jam or a clever innuendo but I'm not a fan of the straight to the point explicit songs.

Originally posted by Buyonce1814 I once wrote a song with the line "Come and breed me"

(Verse 1)
I think I’m gonna like this
And the way you flip me,
Over, and I’ll flip you off
‘Cause I’m in con-control, control tonight

You got me on my own now
In this dead end room
I’m a bed of, crops, you’re the plough
Got your *gasp* on show
I’ve got you on my mind

(Pre Chorus)
And I love the way you take me
And you take me out my mind
And you love the way I play it, play it, play it

(Chorus)
Come and give it to me, come and give it to me,
Come and give me your, dirty love, sucker
Come and give it to me, come and give it to me,
Come and give me your, dirty love, sucker

(Verse 2)
You used to think you owned this
But I own this show
And the whips on,
Oh the whips on show
I can be the runway, if you’re flying low, tonight

(Pre Chorus)

(Chorus) X2

(Bridge)
Oh oh
Yeah, yeah
And I love the way you take me
And you take me out my mind

(Chorus) X2

Originally posted by KeshasFansRose One of my lyrics: In this dead end room I’m a bed of crops, you’re the plough Edit: Lemme just post the entire messy song The Way I Play It (Verse 1) I think I’m gonna like this And the way you flip me, Over, and I’ll flip you off ‘Cause I’m in con-control, control tonight You got me on my own now In this dead end room I’m a bed of, crops, you’re the plough Got your *gasp* on show I’ve got you on my mind (Pre Chorus) And I love the way you take me And you take me out my mind And you love the way I play it, play it, play it (Chorus) Come and give it to me, come and give it to me, Come and give me your, dirty love, sucker Come and give it to me, come and give it to me, Come and give me your, dirty love, sucker (Verse 2) You used to think you owned this But I own this show And the whips on, Oh the whips on show I can be the runway, if you’re flying low, tonight (Pre Chorus) (Chorus) X2 (Bridge) Oh oh Yeah, yeah And I love the way you take me And you take me out my mind (Chorus) X2 Written over Demi's 'Confident'

Originally posted by Buyonce1814 I do sing the song to myself so I have an idea of how it would sound. Unfortunately I don't have the musical talent to actually write the melody down.

Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah so my song's structure is chorus verse1 chorus verse2 chorus bridge chorus2x

Originally posted by conatus Bu just called my song "simple for conatus" so I'm unsure about it.

Originally posted by conatus Bu just called my song "simple for conatus" so I'm unsure about it.

Better than "simple for Bu"

Originally posted by Buyonce1814 . I really liked it though

Originally posted by GotSkill How many of you guys write actual melodies and things for your songs here? Obviously it isn't required because it's a lyric writing competition, but I just want to know if anyone actually writes full, complete songs. In both seasons I competed I always wrote every song on either the piano or guitar and had full melodies and simple instrumentals for every song. Some of them sucked but others like Liar (S7) and Strike Twice (S5) are some of my favorite songs I've written.

Originally posted by conatus But will it be perceived as basic? That is the question.

Originally posted by GotSkill Better than "simple for Bu"

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo It's an obvious requirement. How am I gonna write lines and lines of lyrics without a melody? It has to be singable. I can't imagine it any other way otherwise it just won't make since. And since the melody always gets stuck in my head, whenever I write, it stays in the same rhythm (why I've never had a bad comment about this?)