Finished first batch, score ranges from 3-9. Here are some general hints.
*Some of you seemed to let the idea of "intro/interlude" intimidate you into thinking structure should be thrown out. I commented on the lack of meter a lot.
*Please use slant rhymes once in a while. If you didn't, I most likely commented on it.
*We don't hear what you hear, and telling us where instrumentals are, or going "oh whoa oh oh oh oh oh" does not help. Please don't do it.
Finished first batch, score ranges from 3-9. Here are some general hints.
*Some of you seemed to let the idea of "intro/interlude" intimidate you into thinking structure should be thrown out. I commented on the lack of meter a lot.
*Please use slant rhymes once in a while. If you didn't, I most likely commented on it.
*We don't hear what you hear, and telling us where instrumentals are, or going "oh whoa oh oh oh oh oh" does not help. Please don't do it.
I endorse these strippers, especially the first two. I don't mind the third one as much personally.