Is anyone willing to look at my second draft?

I am definitely not, please do not PM me and I will not try to help you

Sure

Omg, I just rhymed tears, fears, and years and then I realized Evanescence did that already. Like I know they didn't invent that rhyme, but it's the same order they used it in and now I'm wondering if I should change it or just go with it.

I'm pretty sure Mariah's languishing uses that very same string of rhymes as well

Okay, I'll send it over

I'm waiting fatty chink

O well I am always looking to be more like the Elusive Chanteuse, so I will use it.

mte

is there still spots open?

I just bought an Apple Watch and it'll get delivered the day this first challenge is due

Yup! As long as you submit an entry for challenge #1, you're in the game the sign-ups list basically means nothing I think

There sure is! Feel free to submit an entry if you'd like.

Mess at PH8 actually coming within striking distance of PH7s sign ups

Message me ill send you what i got too

We also have a shot at getting another 300 pages before the end of the first round. PH7 hew?

I just sent, but I meant second draft not first

Ugh I am torn between just keeping my song as it is and not making it a conventional length, adding another verse and risk writing something not as good as the first part, or just repeating the first part and making it look lazy.

I think I will just let me song be for now, and if something comes to me later I'll add it. I'm just glad I'm writing consistently again. I haven't done without the influence of PH in years.

Mess at a judge being stressed out about his "entry"