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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
I hoped you would  I think I even said to in my critique for that  |
Which reminds me, here is the aforementioned ATRL's Drag Race song as I originally envisioned it (without the edits I made for the challenge). Some of you have seen it, but it's my first song and I would love feedback on any improvements I could make.
Beautiful Dreamer"Beautiful Dreamer"
by Moonchild
[Verse 1]
Three days have passed of running on caffeine
The walls are glossed with a surgical sheen
Only kept alive on a cocktail of drugs,
A victim of a body against its blood
We said we'd see the world together,
We thought that we would run forever,
We lived in laughter and sunlight beams,
But nothing is ever as it seems
[Chorus]
Good night, my beautiful dreamer
Hold me until our tears run dry,
We'll never have a last goodbye
[Verse 2]
Your life won't be resigned to photographs,
I'll journey with you 'til I breathe my last.
I'm sorry you couldn't live your life free,
But thank you, thank you for loving me.
[Chorus]
Good night, my beautiful dreamer
Hold me until our tears run dry,
We'll never have a last goodbye
[Bridge]
Results and a test make one aware
Of the price of a night without a care
Boy meets boy in once upon a time,
But no fairy tale ending will console
A dagger to the heart, one thousandfold.
No pain compares to a life cut in its prime.
[Chorus]
Good night, my beautiful dreamer
Hold me until our tears run dry,
We'll never have a last goodbye
