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Tournament: ATRL's Drag Race - A New Superstar! (Pg. 393)
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Whatever I know when I deserve it!
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Originally posted by Darcy Edwards
You're now "Rumors and Reputations"
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Don't play with me like this
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Originally posted by Vulnicura
is snatch game next?  |
Yes! 
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ATRL Contributor
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Originally posted by Vulnicura
is snatch game next? |
Yes
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Originally posted by X/O/X/O
[FONT="Book Antiqua"][SIZE="2"][CENTER]
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at least it's not 28 pages and someone actually read the whole thing 
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I only just got home, I'd give it an hour, girls.
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eek! good luck girls. I'll perch for the reactions tomorrow 
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ATRL Contributor
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Originally posted by getback
at least it's not 28 pages and someone actually read the whole thing |
Is this supposed to be a drag, though? 
If the judges didn't read the entire thing, then it's unfair judging.
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Essie/Chanel coming for that challenge win this week.
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Originally posted by Darcy Edwards
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"Weird Science"
Emma doesn't want people to know that Mr. Simpson is dating her mother as she hopes to win first place at the Science Fair. Meanwhile, Spinner is having trouble controlling his erections and starts eating fruit after he begins getting more attention from the girls.
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I wish I were "Secrets & Lies," both for the score of 8 and the iconic, "Hey Liberty girlfriend" line.
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Member Since: 8/3/2012
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Originally posted by DripDrip
Here r ur hints hehe (for anyone that cares)
Chanel - Coming of Age
Scarlett - Basketball Diaries
Carrie Messiah - The Mating Game
Nellie - Family Politics
Udders - Eye Of The Beholder
Essie - Take My Breath Away
Carmen - Shout
Smarties - Drive
YSL - Drive
Koko - Weird Science
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Someone definitely didn't like mine
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Episode 7
Untucked - Judges' Critiques
Subomie said...
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Nellie Boddum - girl... the sex toys tho? Your confessional seemed the most removed from this group. Like you live up to your name, but the jokes made me cringe a bit. Pretty standard summary too.
Chanel DiAngelo - Ok, I'm conflicted on this entry. I think it is funny, well thought-out and greatly written. But it's also overly long, and a bit extra. You had to submit your confessionals, which were there, but so was a lot of other stuff not related to you. I'm really sure how to judge this tbh. I liked it a lot but I have to look at the bigger picture.
Scarlett LaPierre - This was ok. An immediate complaint though, is that I read this before Chanel's PDF and had no idea what happened with Nathan cause you didn't say it. There were funny moments but pretty average overall.
Carie Messiah - I think this was the best entry for this team, very funny. It was shady, comprehensive and a good read. Well done.
Udders Tutu - More concise than the others but probably for the best. Maybe a bit basic, but It's a cute and decent entry.
Koko Khalyan - This was cute. I read it like it could be an actual confessional, and you had some good, funny parts too. Good job.
Carmen Scarlett - You had some cute punchlines in here, but it didn't leave much impression on me but I think your absence from the book maybe contributing to that. It was cute though.
Essie Jae Sherbet - Cute. The book was great, the entry was... ok. Topical, and kinda cute, but I feel like it was lacking a little something. Decent entry.
Smarties Skittles - Some good lines, but this kinda read as generic. I think the smilies maybe set it apart a bit but the content wasn't really that special.
Wilhelmina - So you did this third person, which is okay I guess but I didn't get any confessional from this. It was ok, at least we saw it through your eyes kinda. Passable.
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Citrus said...
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Nellie Boddum – I maintain that you are the Alyssa Edwards of this competition. Every time I laugh during one of your entries, I feel like you didn’t intend for it to be funny. There’s a certain charm there that we aren’t seeing from all of the other girls, but as we start getting to smaller numbers, unintentional entertainment isn’t gonna cut it.
Chanel DiAngelo – Okay…Werk. This straddles the line between brilliant and beyond too much. This would be a fabulous entry if the challenge was for all of you to contribute into one singular work…Which, coupled with Team 2’s big “concise summary”, I may have to think about if we ever do this challenge again. I’m gonna chalk up the unnecessary length of this to my poor directions, because this is a great entry aside from its sheer volume.
Scarlett LaPierre – This is okay. It fits the character established in Chanel’s script for you, but it doesn’t quite mesh with the persona we have seen thus far in the competition. This was a mediocre entry, which isn’t always awful. It’s just not as much as I expected, seeing what you’ve done in this game so far.
Carrie Messiah – “Like bitch, did I call Scarlett’s trailer trash boyfriend and tell him the news? Goodbye!” That line absolutely KILLED me, my goodness. This read like a wonderful retelling of an Untucked episode by one of the season’s fan-favorite bitch queens. Some lines felt a little forced “Looks like Scarlett’s gonna have to learn to read when she gets home!”, but the good far outweighs the average. Wonderful comeback from next week.
Udders Tutu – This was a last minute entry from you, and you know you weren’t able to put forth your usual effort. Nothing more to say than that; you know you’re better than this.
Koko Khalyan – Eh. You and Scarlett LaPierre can hold each other’s hands this week, because your entries are on similar levels. Passable and filled with drag race quotes, but not really lasting. This challenge was difficult, so I empathize with a lot of you struggling to find the middle ground to do your entries. But unfortunately, enough of the other girls seemed to figure it out.
Carmen Scarlett – How big is your waist? 28 inches is fat to you? Damn, I never knew I was obese. “Don’t think you can shut us up with your god-damn Indian snacks you bitch!” is the drag race quote I never knew I needed. Carmen sounded a little loopy on this, but I’m gonna attribute that to her taking one of Wilhelmina’s pills.
Essie Jae Sherbet – Your individual confessional was average at best, but your contributions to your team are sooooo good that it balances and still props you up as the MVP of Team 2 this week. You and Chanel put in the most work, and I think in the future we are going to structure this challenge towards creating one cohesive entry like the Drag Book or the script. Thanks for helping us get there with your great work this week.
Smarties Skittles – I actually ended up liking the emoji usage more than I thought I would. It’s a tough act, this challenge, because you essentially have to make a retelling both informative and entertaining. I don’t know that you did enough of the latter, but this isn’t a bad entry, overall.
Wilhelmina – I don’t like the third person. It’s very impersonal and makes this sound more like real housewives than drag race. The “I give no ****s” was an interesting attitude to approach the challenge with, but I can’t help but wonder where that humor that won you the roast went.
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TOO said...
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Team 1 - your story was bland, uncreative and lacked good story-telling. Reading your brief, I honestly had no desire to learn each of your insight to the rest of the challenge.
Nellie Boddum - This wasn't funny or entertaining and I didn't even think it really went along with the challenge. Your train of thought was all over the place and jumped around too often.
Chanel DiAngelo - The. ****ing. Audacity. No one asked for a damn screenplay, sis. I was personally offended when I realized you actually expected me to read TWENTY EIGHT PAGES of this Look Chanel, it's very obvious you care about this competition and your desire to do well here is good to see, especially with all the flops and quitters we've had. But to be honest, it's coming off desperate. You are becoming the Mimi Imfurst of this competition. Everything you're doing lately comes across as really desperate. The effort and time you put into these challenges is applaudable, but the end result never matches your work ethic. Quantity =/= Quality. Know that
Scarlett LaPierre - I felt you were one of the only real shining lights on your team. Your entry was solid, hit several humorous points and told a story. Job well done but you really were dragged down by your team.
Carrie Messiah - You also did fairly well compared to the rest of your team. Your personality got to shine and it was well crafted
Udders Tutu - This is twice in a row, sis. This just wasn't your gig tonight and I'm once again disappointed in you. There was nothing really special here and I expected something more creative from one of our more unique queens.
Team 2 - This was a pure joy from start to finish. To be honest, I wasn't too high on the thought of this challenge in the first place because I fully expected entries like what Team 1 did but you guys really took initiative in making this a fun, enjoyable story to tell. Extremely impressive work by all of you. The Burn Book was extremely creative. Take note, Team 1, THIS is how you tell a big story and keep the readers and judges from falling asleep.
None of your individual output's were as great as the group effort, and since I don't have any way to tell who did what, you all get 10/10's from me because it really was that good.
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Darcy said...
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Team 1 -
So what I liked was that you included every one in the episode and every one was involved. We are the world and all that! The Udders Tutu dragging felt a little thrown in there tho, and honestly reading all of them there seemed to be way to much going on. Remember this is only a thirty minute episode ladies. It felt the most Untucked worthy but it started getting a BIT telenovela.
Ps. Chanel your screen play was genius and creative, loved every part of it.
PPS: Nellie how loose are you that a ***** just shoots up into you without and prepping and lube 
Team 2 -
That creative burn book approach. A fun and creative take and nod to Kenya’s letter, it was funny, whimsical and different. I enjoyed how threw in that part of dragging Willahmenia, I liked how it gave a bit of cohesiveness overall since it was such a big deal in the game. Overall it was really well done and executed, not to much going on but enough to keep me interested and not want to delete it from my DvR.
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While you ladies untuck in the Living Proof Lounge, the judges and I will deliberate.
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ATRL Contributor
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EDIT: Sending some PM's before I make my next move.
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I think I'm bottom three, especially if TOO gave all of the Team 2 members 10s.
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TOO stans for team 2  I know he has the best taste
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 Thank you judges!
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Y'all should never react too harshly until you see the actual results. I know, for me, I tend to score more nicely than I comment.
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Episode 7
Untucked - Safety
Ladies! This week, you competed as teams, but tonight you will be judged as individuals. I need the following queens to step forward:
Scarlett LaPierre
Carmen Scarlett
Udders Tutu
Nellie Boddum
Essie Jae Sherbet
Carrie Messiah
All of you are....
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Going to have to stay in your heels for a bit longer, because you represent the best and the worst of this week. Chanel DiAngelo, Koko Khalyan, Smarties Skittles, and Wilhelmina, you are all safe. You may leave the stage.
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