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Tournament: Survivor: ATRL Edition (Season 5) | Winner Revealed!
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you would pop in when the discussion is on car crashes
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You would throw this tired, 9 year old shade.
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& I will never understand why ATRL "Feels sorry" for Brandy. Sure, she got ignored on a subway, but so does literally everyone else. I'm sure she's devastated about an outcome she pretty much knew would happen
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Originally posted by Bey_Rihstan
& I will never understand why ATRL "Feels sorry" for Brandy. Sure, she got ignored on a subway, but so does literally everyone else. I'm sure she's devastated about an outcome she pretty much knew would happen
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It wasn't an isolated incident

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Mario, I'm confused. I thought I gave a proper explanation for my EP?
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It wasn't an isolated incident

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I mean the people didn't even know she was performing & she was still paid accordingly so what's really the tea?
ATRL stays trying to shade
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okay ethan sent some hours ago
your boy attempted to stay up til he sent but failed by about 30 minutes

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^ what's new?

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Welcome castaways to your 12th Results Show! Below will be your entries as well as scores from each of the four judges.
This round, you all created EPs from albums by your faves. You were each given a score out of 10 based off how you completed each requirement for the entry using the scale below:
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Your Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Revised Tracklist - 4 Points
5. Reasoning - 4 Points
= 10 Total Points Possible
I will post the entries/scores then the final results which will announce who's the winner of the second individual immunity this season.
With that said, let's get to it...
1. Golden
BEYONCÉ
Beyoncé - BEYONCÉ
by: Golden
Tracklist
1. Haunted
2. Blow
3. Pretty Hurts
4. Partition
5. ***Flawless
6. Drunk In Love
7. Mine
8. XO
BEYONCÉ to many is an album that was driven by a surprise release that has visuals as its main focal point. The 14 track album with its accompanying 17 music videos came to the world as a shock and it is no surprise that the album managed to prompt a new global release schedule. However, beyond its impact and success lies a far more important story. It is the fact that BEYONCÉ managed to showcase a musical triumph unlike any other. Musical and personal growth are key aspects within the album as well as its underlying message about beauty and body shaming, love, feminism, sexuality, marriage, motherhood and pride.
That being said, handpicking just 8 songs for an album that was critically acclaimed and shifted millions upon millions of copy was extremely difficult when each song tells its own story and has its own sound. I tried to focus on picking songs that maintained Beyoncé’s personal agenda but also implementing songs that flow well into each other. I shifted from serious songs with important messages to more lighthearted and less serious songs. You could say my theme for this EP is, ironically, Beyoncé - songs with statements and messages she cares strongly about and songs that are so personal and have that distinctive Beyoncé sound we all adore.
The track that opens the EP is a two-part song: Ghost and Haunted. The first part is Ghost, that begins with an audio file that symbolizes the start of Beyoncé’s journey and story as a worldwide famous superstar. Ghost mostly touches on how Beyoncé runs her business and her lack of trust in record labels. (‘’I don’t trust these record labels, I’m tourin’’ / ‘’All the **** I do is boring / All these record labels.. boring.’’) Haunted on the other side speaks about sexual desires and being haunted in love. Overall, Haunted/Ghost offer a completely different musical side of Beyoncé whose robotic and eerie vocals completely mesmerize you and swallow you into the song, which makes it the perfect fit as the opener for the EP. The song is as effortlessly non-commercial as it is endlessly listenable.
The second track Blow is oozing, filled with sexy vocals and a surefire club banger. The song is sexual and lyrically speaks about giving head. The reason I picked this for my tracklist is because it has Beyoncé written all over it. It holds firmly to her roots; R&B and Hip-Hop sounds. Blow feels like it could fit on B’Day right next to Green Light or Kitty Kat. It brilliantly describes the pleasures of oral sex. (‘’Can you eat my skittles, it’s the sweetest in the middle / Pink is the flavor, solve the riddle’’) Blow is an extremely fun song that will move you the instant you hear it.
The third track is Pretty Hurts. The song is a must on the EP as it is a beautiful powerhouse empowerment anthem. The song speaks about self-acceptance and feeling comfortable in your own skin. Beyoncé makes it clear that the key to happiness is choosing your life path on your own terms. (‘’What is your aspiration in life?’’ / ‘’To be happy’’). It is not to be missed on the album and that is exactly why it was chosen as a single at one point in the SELF-TITELD era.
The fourth track is Yoncé/Partition. A rather sexual song with a thrusting baseline and a heavy drumbeat. I chose this song because although lyrically it is quite raunchy, it carries a great message. It represents sexual liberty and confidence. The song also gave birth to another alter ago - a sassier, more care-free and more sexual version of Sasha Fierce.
The fifth track is the feminist empowerment song ***Flawless heavily carried by trap-beats and flawlessly (!) completed with an extended speech from feminist Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie. ***Flawless not only gave us the iconic catchphrase (‘’You wake up, flawless’’) but later also a terrific collaboration between Queen B and the Queen of Rap. The reason I picked ***Flawless is because it’s Beyoncé perfectly embracing feminism. She gets heavily criticised and judged as a feminist, but this song is a staple for feminist movements and acknowledges Beyoncé’s transition from a shy to a full-blown powerful feminist.
The sixth track is Drunk in Love. A carefree, light song and an ode to obscene drunk sex. I chose this song to be on my EP because, although the collab is not a Crazy in Love or a Deja Vu, it does have the unmissable Bey/Jay stamp on it. It combines heavy trap beats and hip-hop elements and with its amazingly catchy chorus and iconic lyrics, Drunk In Love is already one of Beyoncé's most recognizable and memorable songs.
The second to last track on the EP is Mine. Despite being a whopping 6 minutes long, it is most definitely one of the highlights on SELF-TITLED. Sonically, it is unlike any other Beyoncé song before. Lyrically, it is about love and all its highs and lows. It speaks about relationships going against rumours and stories and overcoming them. Jay and Beyoncé combined are seen as a huge power couple, but at the end of the day they’re lovers. I picked this for my EP because it is different, shares a great message and it is beautiful work done by Dreezy and Queen B.
The last track on the EP is XO. I deliberately chose this song as the closer for my EP because it is a magical song that puts you in a euphoric trance. The song is dedicated to tragedy and reminds us to appreciate and love every second in life that you share with your loved ones. The chorus is pure pop-delight and amazingly captivating. XO is a song for a sold out crowd in a stadium to sing their heart outs with.
SELF-TITLED, in my opinion, is the perfect mixture of Beyoncé's own personal experiences combined with political statements. The album grabs you 66 minutes long and in that short hour you delve into bits of Beyoncé's private life as it allows you to experience her world and the things she’s passionate about.
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Dylan - Golden
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Very Rihanna of her to be smoking!
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points - This album is hard to make an EP but I think you did a good job on the tracklist. My issue is that Pretty Hurts sticks out as odd compared to the rest of the tracks sonically. It's just not that impressive of a track despite the message. I think removing that track and then adding a slower song like Blue after Mine or even Rocket before Partition would have been better routes to the creation of this EP. Good job here, though.
5. Reasoning - 4/4 Points - Your explanation was one of the best. Not because it was longer than others but just because you explained yourself well. There's no track where i felt you just slapped something down which is something I found in other entries. Definitely one of the stronger entries this round.
Total: 9/10 Points
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Ethan - Golden
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 4/4
You cut the weakest songs on the album: No Angel, Rocket, & Superpower, and kept the strongest: Drunk in Love, XO, & Blow. While it hurts to see Heaven cut, it's for the best.
Reasoning - 4/4
Very well thought-out and eloquently explained! Choosing the songs that represent the whole album and the different sides of Beyonce was the best thing you could have done. Excellent work!
= 10/10 Points
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Yvess - Golden
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points
I like the songs you chose. It all shows how strong the album is. Beyonce shines the best with XO, Haunted, DIL and Partition. Pretty Hurts is kinda basic tbh. I would have preferred Rocket or Superpower take its slot. Kudos for not sending 7/11 by the way. Strong setlist overall.
5. Reasoning 3.5/4 Points
Your reasoning slays so much. I like how you make a strong introduction for Beyonce. It made me thrilled to learn more about your tracklist's explanation. The track by track explanation is so cool that it made me understand why you chose them. You deserve a high score.
Total: 9/10
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Mario - Golden
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
The opener and closer are perfect but, except for Partition - Flawless - Drunk in Love, I don't think the sound flows so well with this tracklisting. The song choices are good, though. The only thing that irked me is that you didn't include Ghost and Yoncé also on the list, given the fact you used them as well.
5. Reasoning 3.5/4 Points
It could've had a main theme but it ended up being a short edit of the parent album. Still, it worked quite well following your explanation.
Total: 8.5/10 Points
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2. dwuw
Enchanted
Taylor Swift - 'Enchanted'
By: Jorge (graphics also by me)
Tracklist:
1. Enchanted
2. Sparks Fly
3. Mine
4. Ours
5. The Story Of Us
6. Last Kiss
7. Dear John
8. Haunted
Taylor Swift is really known for writing about love and break-ups. She's also known for the story-telling in her songs, so I thought, why not combine them both?
I revised the Speak Now tracklist into a 8-tracks EP called 'Enchanted'. The theme of this EP is a love story with a tragic ending, something Taylor is great at writing about. The first half is about love, and the second one about a break up.
The first track is 'Enchanted', a fan favorite track, and also the title-track of this EP. I chose 'Enchanted' as the first track because it talks about how Taylor met a boy and fell in love with him, as she sings, "she was enchanted to met him". This track is the start of this love story.
Then, the next track is 'Sparks Fly', a song Taylor wrote when she was 16. This is also a love song. In this track, Taylor and the boy are already in a relationship, and Taylor just asks him to leave everything behind so he can meet her, because she feels something special when he smiles, as she tells us in the chorus.
The third track is 'Mine', the lead single of the original album; a love song too. In this track, they've already been in a relationship for a long time, and Taylor remembers some of the best moments they've lived together. "Do you remember, we were sitting there by the water?" And she also says her lover is one of her best things ever.
The fourth track is 'Ours', a track from the deluxe edition. In this track, Taylor shows that she'll love her lover even though the people that surround her try to change her opinion of him; but Taylor's opinion is more important than the others'. "Don't you worry your pretty little mind, people throw rocks at things that shine but they can't take what's ours".
After the first four tracks about the evolution of their love story, the story starts to get darker.
The fifth track is 'The Story Of Us', a quite underrated track, in my opinion. In this song, Taylor talks about how she used to think she would tell to everyone her love story, and it has some throwbacks to other tracks in the EP ["How we met and the sparks flew instantly," reminds us of Enchanted and Sparks Fly]. But even though they had a great relationship, everything went wrong, and now they try to avoid each other. In this track, Taylor talks about the topic with a more 'upbeat' tone.
The sixth track is 'Last Kiss', another fan favorite. In this song, we can notice Taylor's sadness perfectly. This track can remind us of 'Mine', because in these two songs, Taylor remembers moments with her lover, but in this one, Taylor talks with a sad tone, since she has lost him. This is like the follow-up to 'The Story Of Us' (in this EP), since their topic is similar, but this one is much sadder because she has finally realized they broke up, it isn't a story/fairy tale anymore.
The seventh track is 'Dear John', in this almost 7 minute track, Taylor blames everything on her lover. She names herself the victim, and we can notice the same emotion we hear in 'Last Kiss'. The song is just Taylor talking about how her lover used her, but she was too young to notice. In the bridge, Taylor talks about how she isn't the only one her lover has used, but she could escape before it was too late.
The last track, 'Haunted', is another break-up song. In this song, Taylor also talks about how she didn't expect to end like this "But I never thought I'd live to see it break". After 'Dear John', this song shows us how, even Taylor escaped from her lover, she's never going to forget about him, he'll always haunt her. This song is the most dramatic one on the EP, and it perfectly closes the album.
A tragic ending to the perfect love story.
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Dylan - dwuw
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - You did this yourself? Nice.
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points - Enchanted goes with your storyline well but the song sonically doesn't scream opening track to me. A give & take situation. Mine, Sparks Fly, & Ours are perfect for the first half of the EP and they flow very well from juvenile to more serious love. The Story Of Us provides a nice transition into the love loss without being too abrupt. I like the inclusion of Last Kiss & Dear John as heartbreak tracks. Ending with Haunted is odd but it works in the way you were aiming for a dramatic ending. Back To December would have been a nice one to add somewhere in here but given your theme, it was okay to leave it out. There's plenty of commercial value in the EP. Overall no complaints other than Enchanted opening and also your theme doesn't really differ from the actual album but it works.
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points - I think you explained yourself very well so I wouldn't be too worried about your English Jorge. You were straight to the point with your theme and wasn't any unnecessary information in your writing. You explained each track well and I overall felt you stayed true to your storyline from start to finish.
Total: 9.5/10 Points
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Ethan - dwuw
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 2/4
I can't think of a good reason to leave off Back to December, especially since it would have fit with the theme you had just fine. Leaving off the songs from Speak Now that aren't about love was a mistake, in my opinion. Mean, Never Grow Up, Innocent, and Long Live help make the album more interesting. Can you imagine the dragging Taylor would receive if she released an album ONLY about boys? She gets enough of that as is. Also, including Dear John, the most boring song ever written, is unforgivable. That was the easiest cut you could have made! On the plus side, you included Enchanted, which is one of Taylor's greatest songs ever, and The Story of Us, which I agree is underrated.
Reasoning - 2/4
I personally hate when people try to make an album "a story", because no artist really does that, and for a good reason; this isn't a musical soundtrack, it's an album. I don't think that was the right direction to go with this album especially because it's very diverse and you could have easily made it into more than just a love story EP. I'm sorry to be so harsh, but this is an album I really love, so it's sad to see it reduced to this. I can appreciate the explanations you gave, there was at least an effort made, but I wish you'd taken a different direction.
= 6/10 Points
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Yvess - dwuw
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Very girly and I liked it. Fits your ep's sound tbh.
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points
Speak Now is my favorite Taylor Swift album. You chose the songs that I would personally pick if I'm in your position.
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points
Speak Now slays me + my whole country. It is certified 9x Platinum here! What a legend! I know that you are not confident enough writing essays but surprisingly, I was able to like and relate with your explanation. You renamed the title of the album to fit the story that you used on your reasoning. It works well! The title up to the graphics to the setlist up to the story you used for reasoning is so strong that I feel it would be so deserving of a perfect 10.
Total: 10/10
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Mario - dwuw
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points
This works perfectly, from the flowing of the tracks to the thematically fitting positioning
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points
The way you created this by the stages of a love story gone bad hit me. I'm a sucker for albums which tell a story.
Total: 10/10 Points
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More coming up.- Dylan
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3. T-Swizz
1989
1989 Reconstructed
1989’s mission statement is to cement Taylor as a fullblown pop artist free of all country roots. Her music has crossed the divide between the cool and commercial, bursting with both infectious energy and instant likability. With that in mind, Taylor decided to rid this EP of any acoustic ballad-esque tracks (sorry Clean stans) that might hinder the consumer from receiving the all-encompassing pop experience. However, as 1989 is a drastic departure from Taylor’s original sound, the lyrical terrain meticulously maintained throughout her career thus far has remained in order to avoid alienating her fanbase. The EP chronologically represents the 3 phases of a relationship: the intoxication phase (the first 3 tracks), the breakdown/break-up phase (the following 2 tracks), and the flashback phase (the final 3 tracks).
Tracklist
1. Blank Space
2. Style
3. Wildest Dreams
4. All You Had To Do Was Stay
5. Bad Blood (Feat. Kendrick Lamar)
6. Out Of The Woods
7. I Wish You Would
8. Wonderland
Explanation
As a song writer it’s important to be conscious of the public’s perception of you, Taylor is well aware of the sensational fictionalization of her personal life & decided to take advantage of the situation with the self-deprecating Blank Space. BS is a great way to start the EP sonically and lyrically, as it is one of the most exhilarating tracks on the album and describes the early symptoms of the infatuation stage. Style & Wildest Dreams follow with Taylor’s smooth voice pouring over bouncing beats into your brain as the words spring around in your mind. With the radiant hooks, which pulse with electronic drumbeats in Style and serene glaciation in Wildest Dreams, Taylor manages to fit her own unique narrative on the pop landscape.
All You Had To Do Was Stay & Bad Blood reminisce about the time that your significant other’s lack of attention and dedication towards you is eventually what leads to the imminent break-up. Although Bad Blood has now become an infamous diss-track towards a certain other pop star, this EP decided to utilize a different angle, as lyrically, the song does a magnificent job of encapsulating the anger one would feel post break-up. Thereafter, we have Out of the Woods and I Wish You Would, which burst with erupting drums, moody synths and searing guitars, both tracks delve into how one would grieve a break-up with the relapse and misguided hope sprinkled across both songs. Finally, Taylor decides to conclude the EP the same way she started it, with a bang. The synthpop gem, Wonderland, is a roller coaster from start to finish with the bass drop right off the bat. The track alludes to her past relationship as a road of many highs & lows but in the end accepting it for what it was.
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Dylan - T-Swizz
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - 0 Points - Literally this could cost you immunity.
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - I like this cover. Way more chic and less granny.
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points - Giving me Tove Lo teas with the three sections. Blank Space i wasn't totally sold on but it made sense with your explanation and it's a good song anyway. Style & Wildest Dreams were good fits for the intoxication stage. I love All You Had To Do Was Stay and it works well for the break-up portion. Bad Blood was your best choice to pair along with it though I do personally get major friend vibes and the mood of the song is a bit off from the rest of the EP. The flashback portion is really unique and I love how the three songs chosen fit together so perfectly. The whole EP could potentially smash so the commercial aspect is a no brainer. Overall, your tracklist is strong and only Bad Blood stands out as a little odd for me.
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points - I've already seen you write in LA and you're great at it so that will come in handy during these rounds. Your explanation was great and concise. You tackled your theme with the intro and elaborated with the final two paragraphs. No unanswered questions here.
Total: 9/10 Points
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Ethan - T-Swizz
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - 0/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 3.5/4
I'm conflicted. You made some great cuts (I Know Places and Clean hihi) but left off Shake It Off and New Romantics, two songs that I absolutely cannot see this album being without. I also love Welcome to New York but can't blame you for cutting it because I recognize that it's not a GREAT song. It's difficult because there are only two bad songs on the album, and while I also hate All You Had to Do Was Stay, it's a strong track. I love that you kept both Out of the Woods and I Wish You Would, and even put them together, because I love the work she did with Jack Antonoff. I don't know what the perfect way to do this was, and while it wasn't this, I do like a lot of the choices you made!
Reasoning - 2/4
You did the same thing dwuw did, you reduced this album to just being a Taylor Swift album about boys. She and her fans would be mortified, and her critics would have a field day. Even the fact that Blank Space is done ironically doesn't excuse it. Most of the album is about love/break-ups, but Taylor always includes those crucial songs that aren't about boys that show that she's somebody more than just a girl who dates boys. I liked the track listing from a sonic standpoint, so I'll forgive the fact that you also tried to make it flow like a story. Overall, I appreciate the effort, but it doesn't stand out like it could have considering what a strong album 1989 is.
= 7/10 Points
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1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - 0 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
Pretty strong list, only if IWYW and the remix of Bad Blood wasn't included. I prefer the original version of BB. Glad to see SIO is snubbed as its not a TS song that I can tolerate tbh.
5. Reasoning 2.5/4 Points
Very brief explanation. As a judge who didn't like 2 songs from your list, I was wishing the reasoning would convince me to like those 2 songs. That's the only flaw of your entry. But still you did justice to 1989.
Total: 7/10 Points
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1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - 0 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points
Blank Space opening the EP seems a bit forced but, overall, this works well.
5. Reasoning 3.5/4 Points
I wasn't really sold on the idea of making Taylor's first big change in style about the theme that always marked her, love and everything around it, with the following exclusion of the tracks that weren't about it, but I get your choices and I think this would have real potential if released.
Total: 8.5/10 Points
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4. Ares
The Pinkprint
The Pinkprint EP by: Arés
1. All Things Go -- Final Single (Not meant to be a hit, but a way to close the era.)
2. The Crying Game -- 2nd Single
3. Bed of Lies
4. Grand Piano
5. The Night is Still Young -- 3rd Pop Single
6. Anaconda -- 1st Single
7. Feeling Myself -- 4th Single (Crossover potential)
8. Want Some More - 5th Urban Single
9. Shanghai
10. Truffle Butter -- 3rd Urban Single (Crossover potential)
Reasoning
I chose this track listing because I feel in this particular order, the album/tracks flow better. So to start it off, All Things Go. Arguably one of Nicki's most personal tracks. And gives you an idea of where she is right now in her life. It's also good album open. ("THIS is the Pinkprint.")
So I figured for the next tracks #2 - #4, I could take the very best "heartbreak" songs from the album and put them in the order chronicling the eventual break up. TCG with realizing the arguing and domestic violence have become a vicious cycle. BOL calling her boyfriend out on his lies and betrayal, and realzing there's something broken that can't be fixed. GP with acceptance. The Nicki/SB break up was a prominent part of most of the album and promo so leaving these songs out is a no.
The center tracks, #5 - #7, are just feel good fun songs, the best of the album. After listening through all though sad/serious songs the particular section allows the listener and Nicki to have fun and just enjoy the music. These tracks are all good club songs people could just go off to when they come on.
#8 - #10 are Nicki's best urban/hip-hop tracks from TPP. These are tracks where the production just knocks and Nicki and her guest features are allowed to go off and talk their ****. This is something most of her fans love, her bragging and dragging. (in small doses)It's also something to remind the fans of where she came from, sound wise, and that she hasn't forgotten about her mixtape days. Especially Shanghai and Want Some More.
I included single availability in the tracklist, as you requested us to take that into consideration as well.
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Dylan - Ares
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Deja vu?
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points - You exposed us to the three sides of Nicki and that was cool but I feel like you could have made a really nice urban EP out of those tracks. I feel TNISY threw that direction off completely. But, going off your route we have the emotional Nicki with All Things Go (which is a great opener), The Crying Game, Bed of Lies, & Grand Piano. Then fun Nicki kicks in with TNISY, Anaconda, & Feeling Myself. Finally, you end off with hard Nicki with Want Some More, Shanghai, & Truffle Butter. My problems would be that your transition between serious and fun Nicki is very sudden and that you could have had a better theme had you gone all urban but I feel you wanted a pop hit and that hurt you more than helped you.Still, good job here.
5. Reasoning 3/4 Points - I would've given you a 2.5 since your explanation was lacking but you were the only one to really emphasize the commercial aspect of the R12 OP and I thought you'd deserved a little extra credit for that. You had the era planned which was cool. I wasn't expecting a story from a Nicki album since her albums are sort of messy to begin with. Just like I said, you could have had a proper theme/direction if you hadn't aimed for a pop hit.
Total: 8/10 Points
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Ethan - Ares
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 3/4
Thank you for including: The Night is Still Young, Anaconda, Feeling Myself, Grand Piano, and Shanghai. I wish you had included: Get On Your Knees and I Lied. Thank you for NOT including: Only and Four Door Aventador. I wish you had not included: Want Some More. Overall, you did a great job condensing this scatter-brained album. It's more of an album than an EP at 10 tracks, but Nicki's albums are always so long anyway that this would seem very short for her as an album.
Reasoning - 4/4
There wasn't really a wrong way to do this, the album is so varied that as long as you really thought about it, the album works no matter what. I appreciate the effort put into selecting the singles and ordering the tracks! Overall, great job.
= 9/10 Points
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Yvess - Ares
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Slay that cover!
4. Tracklist - 2.5/4 Points
I only like half of the tracklist. TNISY being included is a geat choice. I feel its the flag bearer of the album.
5. Reasoning 2.5/4 Points
As much as I would like to love the EP, the reasoning fell flat to me and it didnt give me the drive to give the other tracks another chance. Your entry could have been better tbh.
Total: 7/10 Points
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Mario - Ares
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
I gave you an extra point because I really liked as you also planned the era commercially but I didn't like how you divided so firmly the slower songs from the upbeat ones and, on top of this, how you chose the former ones to open the album.
5. Reasoning 2/4 Points
I can't focus on the theme you went on for this. Is there one? Or it's just a collection of three type of songs Nicki manages to make work?
Total: 7/10 Points
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5. Bloomers
ARTPOP
Lady Gaga - ARTPOP EP
Directed By: Bloomers
Tracklist:
1. Applause
2. ARTPOP
3. Sexxx Dreams
4. Venus
5. G.U.Y.
6. Jewels N' Drugs (feat. T.I., Too $hort, & Twista)
7. Do What U Want (feat. Christina Aguilera)
8. Gypsy
Designed to be as cinematic and entertaining as possible, the ARTPOP EP tells the story of, and celebrates, the love affair and eventual marriage of the pop musician and her art. The cover references Lichtenstein and his brand of pop art while also showing Gaga front-and-center ready for the show, both part of the art, and the one making the art. The tracklists's story is a big extended metaphor to describe the creative process and artistic process behind creating a record.
The EP kicks off with the lead single and a round of A-P-P-L-A-U-S-E!!! A round of applause is the best way to open any entertaining show and the song also nicely introduces the lady and her mission statement for the EP: to entertain, and to melt art and pop culture and her. After, Applause spells out the mission statement for A-R-T-P-O-P, the title track bubbles up. The cool glide of ARTPOP (the song) finds Gaga longing, in the conditional tense, for the hybrid between pop and her work as an artist. The next track finds Gaga lusting after the vision in her Sexxx Dreams and gradually becoming more inspired and infatuated before requesting to be taken off to the planet of love – Venus. Venus, takes off after Sexxx Dreams and builds off it sonically. G.U.Y. finds Gaga at her best, when she’s in love and submitting to her art while trying to maintain the power in the relationship. Jewels N’ Drugs maintains the frantic energy level of G.U.Y. and leads into the finale of the EP. Jewels N Drugs finds Gaga benefitting from the relationship financially: red carpet events, money, and pancakes aplenty! Do What U Want (feat. Christina Aguilera) continues the relationship outlined in G.U.Y. and JND and serves as a bit of a comedown from those tracks. This Do What U Want finds Gaga a bit worn out from her relationship with art, admitting being tired from her shows (through the Legend of The United States), but still giving herself over to the relationship she chose. Finally, the conclusion. Gypsy closes the EP in a somewhat bittersweet but rousing and triumphant way. Gypsy is a song about touring life, a necessity for the pop artist; Gaga leaves her love of creation behind to travel the world and spread her music. The story here has no end, she has to leave, despite everything. She can leave it there and more on or possibly return, invigorated, to a fresh round of applause only to restart the creative process and rekindle her relationship with her music.
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Dylan - Bloomers
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Mess but Gaga would do this.
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points - You got rid of most the mess on the album. Jewels N Drugs is a guilty pleasure but you had Manicure and Mary Jane Holland that could have been substituted in its place and still made sense with your story (which was unique btw). I know Applause was meant to be a closer because of the title on the album but I actually prefer it up front since it doesn't scream album ender like Gypsy does. Other than JND, I would have preferred the original to DWUW as R Kelly's verse is kinda the best part about ARTPOP but that's just a personal preference. Nice job here. Not perfect but good.
5. Reasoning 3.5/4 Points - Your explanation was sort of like Gaga herself. It 's really confusing but right before you're about to blow it off, it starts making sense. I like the double meaning the EP could have if they didn't get to see your explanation. Truly your ARTPOP era, Bloomers. Luckily not score-wise though!
Total: 8.5/10 Points
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Ethan - Bloomers
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 3/4
Rightful dust was paid to Swine, Donatella, Fashion!, and Mary Jane Holland. I can't fathom why you would leave off Aura or Maincure, they are two of the strongest tracks on the album, ESPECIALLY when you have Jewels N Drugs and Sexxx Dreams on the track list! Bonus points for including the Legendary version of Do What U Want, aka my most played song on iTunes. Great choices for the most part.
Reasoning - 3/4
The weird like story-thing you tried doing about it being a show made my head hurt, I don't think even Gaga would try something that convoluted. Bits of it made sense, and I appreciate the effort. It didn't feel like you were BS-ing, but it was confusing.
= 8/10 Points
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1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Love it!
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points
ARTPOP won't flop if the whole album sounded like the songs you have chosen.
5. Reasoning 3.5/4 Points
Great explanation as you were able to make me believe that the album is cohesive and most of all, fun to listen to. Great job!
Total: 9.5/10 Points
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Mario - Bloomers
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points
In my opinion, Applause is a perfect album closer so I struggle to see it as an opener but the rest is really good. I applaud you for picking Jewels 'n Drugs, quite a brave choice, and, I don't know if that was your aim, but the way Do What U Want (feat. Legend X) works as a bridge is amazing. Maintaining the R&B-Hip/Hop flavour of the previous track but also leading nicely to Gypsy, which would've been harder with the original duet with R. Kelly.
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points
Bravo! You made ARTPOP work and no one even knows what ARTPOP is. Lemme send your contacts to Interscope.
Total: 9.5/10 Points
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6. Sebas
Born This Way
Lady Gaga - Born This Way EP by Sebas
1. Government Hooker: I think the "Gaga, ga oh-ah" and the "Io ritorne" (coming back/returning) are the perfect lines to open the EP. The song is about female sexual empowerment and it flows perfect with the "be proud of who you are" theme.
2. Born This Way: This song is basically the epitome of what Gaga has been preaching since day one. It is the essence of the EP. You have to be proud of who you are (no matter your gender, sexuality, race).
3. Judas: We already talked about loving yourself. but what about loving others? even if it's someone that is not the best one, but you can't deny that the choice is not a part of you and who you are.
4. Bloody Mary: I decided to put the two songs with the most obvious biblical references right next to each other. This song is basically about staying true to yourself. Even if that person who you loved a lot is not here with you anymore, you are still as amazing as you were when (s)he was with you.
5. Scheiße: Being yourself can sometimes bring you problems, but you can take all of that ******** and become stronger.
6. Heavy Metal Lover: This song is about celebrating who you are. She even makes a reference to Born This Way.
7. Black Jesus † Amen Fashion: This song is about recognising your past, but accepting that it is not the only thing that can define you. You can learn a lot of things from new experiences too.
8. The Edge Of Glory: This song is about your last moment on earth. It is about living your life to the fullest like you were going to die tomorrow. I think you can only reach that glory when you die, if you stayed true to yourself through your whole life. and that's why is my closing song for the EP.
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Dylan - Sebas
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Thank god it's the deluxe. There's some super cute fanmade ones though.
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points - This is solid aside from Black Jesus + Amen Fashion since I think even Gaga stans hate that song. I would have replaced that with Hair or even Marry The Night really. Glad Blody Mary made the cute. Yeah, aside from BJ+AF, I thought you made the correct choices here.
5. Reasoning - 2/4 Points - Both you and I know you can do better than this Sebas. You were pressed for time and it certainly showed but hey, you're still in the game and have time to send in entries similar to S3 in future rounds. Pretty good for being rushed though.
Total: 7.5 Points
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Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 2.5/4
There was a LOT of fat to cut with this album, and while you got rid of some of the easy cuts, like Americano and Electric Chapel, I can't excuse the inclusion of Black Jesus or Bloody Mary over You & I, Hair, or Marry the Night. I personally think Scheiße is hugely, hugely overrated, but I know the world would end if a Gaga stan didn't mention it every chance they got, so I can't do too much on you for including it. It's not a good song. I wish you'd had the balls to take Born This Way off, because she does the same message a couple other times on the album much better. Overall, it was a mixed bag.
Reasoning - 1/4
Um, I don't need to know what the songs are about... ? How about telling us why you chose them or what the structure of the EP is meant to be? This does not appear to have been very well thought out, and if it was, you didn't do yourself any justice.
= 5.5/10 Points
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Yvess - Sebas
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
A strong playlist if you prioritized adding MTN and Hair instead of Government Hooker and Black Jesus. I can't stand those songs.
5. Reasoning 2.5/4 Points
I know that you have a deadline to meet and it kinda striked me that your reasoning is a bit rushed. It's short and sweet but not enough to sell your EP to me.
Total: 7.5/10 Points
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Mario - Sebas
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - .5 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
Government Hooker may be too alienating to start off an EP, especially for casual listeners. Also, I would've liked to see Marry The Night in, since it would've fit the theme.
5. Reasoning 3.5/4 Points
You made it clear this was about the self-empowering side of the album and I think the tracks you picked explain the job by themselves pretty well.
Total: 8/10 Points
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7. Guero
Jackie
Ciara - Jackie EP
By Guero
1. Give Me Love
2. Lullaby
3. I Bet
4. Only One
5. Fly
6. One Woman Army
7. Dance Like We're Making Love
Give Me Love is a great EP opener as it's a great dance pop song that makes you want to get up and move. Taking charge, Ciara sings: " Boy I need you at attention, need you at attention baby" demanding that her lover be at his best or he gets nothing at all.
Lullaby is a switch to a more R&B side that Ciara excels in. This track shows off Ciara's confidence in the bedroom, which I love. " Cause you know that I'm the ****, this as good as it gon' get" letting her lover know that yes, she is the best!
The next three tracks we see Ciara showing us her strength in a different way by overcoming difficulties in a relationship and taking charge of the situation.
In "I Bet" Ciara sings about a man who cheated on her, but instead of being down, Ciara knows that one day he'll regret his decision. She boasts about how she doesn't need him to continue to survive and thrive, in fact, she helped better mold his life by introducing him to new things.
Every EP needs that one strong ballad, which Only One most certainly is. Ciara is growing tired of the lack of effort from her partner, so she gives him an ultimatum which is to either get his **** together or she's leaving.
In Fly, Ciara accepts the fact that a relationship, ultimately, isn't working out and decides to let him go... and she's fine with that.
One Woman Army is about Ciara laying down the terms of what she needs in a relationship. Learning from her troubles in the past, she won't accept anything less than what she's looking for. The song just screams of someone knowing what it is that they want.
From the vocals, to the production - everything is on point with Dance Like We're Making Love. Ciara's confidence continues to beam from this track as well: " So come and show me your moves, I got some things I can teach too" The song is one of the best, if not the best, from the EP. It's a strong, yet smooth way to end the EP.
All in all, I chose these songs because they show off who Ciara is as a person: a strong, confident woman who isn't afraid to take charge. I also feel like this is an amazing mix of songs from both the R&B and Pop genre's, which show off the versatility that Ciara can produce.
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Dylan - Guero
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - This cover is almost flawless but her boob hand isn't cute.
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points - Your theme was confidence and i think you executed that well for the most part. Fly may be the worst track on the album so its inclusion is insulting to my ears Guero. Plus Jackie (B.M.F.) is the ultimate declaration of confidence so i wish you would have utilized that track instead of the forgettable Fly. Also, DLWML could have been placed after Lullaby as the sexy side of the EP with Only One ending the EP off. Kiss & Tell was snubbed and despite it being the best song ever made, it doesn't fit your theme so I'll let it slide. There's both urban and pop commercial songs which was a failed goal of the album itself so good effort on that aspect. You got rid of Stuck On You & All Good as you should have. Only real problem is Fly & a little bit of flow but good job here other than that.
5. Reasoning 2.5/4 Points - The problem with your explanation for myself was that I didn't know what you theme was until the last two sentences of the album. Other than that, you explained each track decently but others just did it better.
Total: 7.5/10 Points
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Ethan - Guero
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 3.5/4
I don't know this album very well like most of the others, so it's difficult for me to be too harsh. I did NEED the title track to be on here, it's such a strong track. Fly could have been left off in place of it.
Reasoning - 3/4
Some of the reasoning is a little light, but overall, you did a great job of defending why the tracks should be included and why the EP is structured the way it is.
= 8.5/10 Points
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Yvess - Guero
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 2.5/4 Points
I only like track #1 #3 #7, why did u snub the Missy collaboration and I Got You?
5. Reasoning 2.5/4
Just average. Not that bad but not that awesomely great job from you.
Total: 7/10
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Mario - Guero
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - .5 Point
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points
This flows perfectly, also thanks to Princess' versatility in genres and tempos.
5. Reasoning 2.5/4 Points
I almost thought there wasn't a fil rouge linking the songs until I came to those last few lines. You could've used a better explanation or theme.
Total: 8/10 Points
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8. rl231
4
Beyoncé - 4: The EP
By: rl231
Love on Top, Countdown, Schoolin' Life, End of Time, Best Thing I Never Had, I Was Here, I Miss You
1. Schoolin' Life
2. Love on Top
3. End of Time
4. Countdown
5. I Miss You
6. Best Thing I Never Had
7. I Was Here
1. I started with Schoolin' Life because I wanted to portray a story of Beyoncé, so the beginning of the story goes with her being at the top of her game and how she's "schoolin' life." The fun braggadociousness of the song makes it a nice beginning to 4: The EP.
2. Love on Top is incredibly special because it shows Bey's love for her man and how he reciprocates it to her. Also, it's a personal favorite of mine because of the crazy vocal range that she shows towards the end of the song. I wanted to choose it after Schoolin' Life because I wanted to show a story of Bey being at the top of her game and finding love too, plus I feel that they flow well together.
3. So Beyoncé is still in love in End of Time and she wants to share it with everybody. I chose End of Time because it's so damn catchy and fun. To me, it's an album highlight since Beyoncé is showing her absolute passion in this song. I put End of Time after Love on Top because I wanted to show her vocals off as quick as possible, and I thought that thematically they flowed well together.
4. Well, surprise, Beyoncé is still in love in Countdown, but she's recognizing that there are things that her significant other and her have to recognize in their relationship and fix. However, through all the bad, they'll still be together since they love each other. I chose this song because I think it's a brilliant song about loving through everything that comes to a couple's way. I put it after End of Time because they flow thematically and sound great back-to-back. Also, I wanted to make a hint that with the countdown, there'll be a shift in how the songs sound and in what the songs are about.
5. I Miss You, to me, has such an interesting production because it's very sparse yet complex at the same time. You can feel the passion in Beyoncé's voice when you hear this song. I chose this song for a few reasons. One reason is that Frank Ocean co-wrote this song, and another is that it's just a gorgeous song. Finally, for the reasons of how I wanted the EP to flow out of Countdown, this song works because it's a change of pace and a change in theme since Beyoncé has now lost her love and is contemplating if she wants him back, which leads to...
6. Best Thing I Never Had is about how she sees right through her former flame and how she's glad that the relationship is no more. It's a great midtempo ballad that totally shows Beyoncé's strength in her vocals and her emotional power. I wanted to pick this song after I Miss You because it flows well into the theme of the EP, in which after Beyoncé was pondering whether or not to go back, she ultimately doesn't because he's not right for her and has done wrong to her. Also, they flow well together with their sounds.
7. I love I Was Here. It's a powerful song that shows how Beyoncé wants to continue to create change around the world and impact others in a great way. She's moving on and wants to be remembered as someone amazing. I chose this song because, for one, I love it, but I also feel that it's a great EP/album closer with the heavy, dramatic drum beats at the very end of the song. Finally, it shows off Beyoncé's amazing vocal prowess.
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1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Solange wannabe.
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points - Ooh storytime with rl231! I really love Dance For You but i get its exclusion since it's not really that connected to your story. You chose all the best songs on 4 that also go along with your theme besides one song. I feel Best Thing i Never Had should have been replaced with Start Over since I Miss You seems to be more focused on how she misses this guy rather than moving on so the sudden change in feeling is a little startling. Start Over would allow the relationship to be mended and fit the storyline better in my opinion. That's truly my only problem though. I Was Here ending the EP was the obvious right answer.
5. Reasoning 3/4 Points - There's good and bad to the commentary on this one. I like the storyline and how you connected each song in your own way but you never blatantly stated the plot to the story. Also you sometimes seemed to just throw out that you loved the song which is fine but I felt that was your main reasoning for a few tracks rather than your storyline. Other than those minor issues, I liked your explanation.
Total: 8.5/10 Points
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Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 4/4
4 is pretty much a flawless album, so there wasn't really a wrong way to do it. The only thing I needed was for Rather Die Young to be left off, it's the weakest track, and for End of Time to be included. Considering you did both, I'd call it a success! Some of the other cuts hurt, like I Care, 1+1, Start Over, Party, and Run the World, but you have to cut somewhere!
Reasoning - 4/4
You did a great job thoroughly explaining your choices and how the EP is supposed to flow! Like I said, 4 is flawless, so good on you for choosing it because, to me, as long as you tried, there wasn't a wrong way to do it.
= 10/10 Points
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Yvess - rl231
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points
4 is a great album imo and I'm glad you picked the strong songs of the album.
5. Reasoning 3.5/4
I love your track by track reasoning. It. ade me reminisce how good this album is. Excellent job!
Total: 9.5/10 Points
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Mario - rl231
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
Schoolin' Life is cute but it seems weak as an opener while I Was Here is perfect at the end of the EP. Best Thing I Never Had is also a bit out of place compared to the other strong choices.
5. Reasoning 2/4 Points
A proper explanation for the EP's theme was missing and this hurt your entry. I guess it's about love, right?
Total: 7/10 Points
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9. Rider
Penalty: 1 Point Off Average Score
Side Effects
Rihanna - Side Effects EP
Brought to you by Rider
Tracklist:
1. Lost In Paradise
2. Diamonds
3. Numb (Interlude)
4. Nobody's Business
5. Get It Over With
6. Stay
7. What Now
8. Love Without Tragedy/Mother Mary
side effect
noun
plural noun: side effects
a secondary, typically undesirable effect of a drug or medical treatment.
In the case of the EP, the drug or medical treatment is the sentiment of love which in the revised tracklist is like a rollercoaster. We get to see the good effects, the bad effects and the realisation of it all in the end.
The opener of the Side Effects EP is Lost In Paradise is the perfect one as I said this will be themed on the rollercoaster that is love in many cases. The song proclaims the GOOD even though she can already see the bad it still feels like paradise.
I can see the storm, I can see the sky
I can see the darkness, flashing lights
All my fears gone tonight
Let me stay, I'm lost in paradise
Diamonds again, proclaims the good of the relationship. The acceptance of love and as the EP is a play on the side effects of a medicine, we have in the song the use of drug terms like ecstasy.
You’re a shooting star I see
A vision of ecstasy
When you hold me, I’m alive
We’re like diamonds in the sky
The Numb Interlude would consist only of Rihanna's parts and it would only be an interlude because it's not talking specifically about love, but it's perfect for the whole vibe of the EP.
Ecstasy... in the air
I don't care, can't tell me nothing
Nobody's Bussines and Get It Over With is the proclamation of love but by the couple this time as we have both female and male voices in these tracks. Basically they're in that moment where they don't care about anything or anyone and they just feel the love. People should get over their relationship, perfect or not.
Again in Get It Over With we have that drug inducted vibe that goes perfect with the title of the EP and the theme.
You'll always be mine, sing it to the world
Always be my boy, I'll always be your girl
Nobody's business, ain't nobody's business
When I'll feel the pain, now baby I won't complain
I'll hear you saying, look up the sun it's just a cloud away
And I was so afraid to cry
But when you need a way to ride, that's the way
You keep thundering thundering
I'm wondering wondering, why you keep thundering
With Stay the love takes a turn. They are realising the bad of the love but they still want the other one to stay, even if it's bad. Again, we have the perspective of the couple as we have both male and female voices.
Not really sure how to feel about it.
Something in the way you move
Makes me feel like I can't live without you.
Yeah, it takes me all the way.
I want you to stay, stay.
What Now comes as a reflection and contemplation of the past love and all the confused feelings that she feels right now. What's going to happen now after such a big love?
I don't know where to go
I don't know what to feel
I don't know how to cry
I don't know oh oh why
So what now?
Love Without Tragedy/Mother Mary comes as the perfect closing track for the EP.
Look where we first started with Lost In Paradise, look at what the relationship went through and look how the EP closes. It's a rollercoaster.
The track starts as again the contemplation of the past love and with Mother Mary we have the desire of change and finally moving on.
Mother Mary I swear I wanna change
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Dylan - Rider
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Druggie.
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points - Get It Over With seems unnecessary though your theme is mostly to blame for its placement I presume. I would have preferred Loveeeee Song to make the cut but other than that, I liked the flow and the tracks chosen. Also glad you changed the title of the EP because it would make no sense without POTR, PIU, etc.
5. Reasoning - 3/4 Points - It was good besides the drug aspect of the theme which would have been cool if this album had songs capable of making that theme a main idea but you basically clung onto numb and get it over with (one of the weaker tracks) so while I appreciated the gesture to be different, it didn't full work. Other than that, good job and glad you're not going home DQ'ed.
Total: 8.5/10 Points
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Ethan - Rider
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 2.5/4
This album was so half good/half trash that it should have been really easy for you to cut, but some of the choices you made were baffling, even with the stellar explanation. Cutting Nobody's Business should have been the easiest choice you made, that is not a real song. There is nothing special about Get it Over With, it really didn't stand out enough to make it onto an EP version of the album. On the other end of the spectrum, Jump is probably the best song on the album and should have easily made the track list, and it saddened me that you left off Power it Up as well. I personally love Right Now, but I know I'm the only one so I can't do too much on that.
Reasoning - 4/4
I really like the thought you put into it and the breakdown of how you pulled the lyrics out to aid your explanation. Excellent design and execution!
= 8.5/10 Points
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1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
A very strong playlist. Numb interlude being included is one of the great decisions you have made for your ep. It is like the glue to all of the other songs.
5. Reasoning 3/4 Points
I like the way you add lyrics to the explanation. In that way,you were able to convince me to lke some of the songs that I don't like initially. Great job at making the EP cohesive the best way you can do.
Total: 8/10
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Mario - Rider
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
Good flow but I just don't think an interlude was necessary in an already short EP
5. Reasoning 3.5/4 Points
Interesting way to portray the often used theme of love but the drug relation felt a bit forced at times.
Total: 8.5/10 Points
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10. Ivory.
Femme Fatale
Britney Spears – Femme Fatale (EP)
By: Ivory.
The cover is by Eros from Coverlandia.
Tracklist:
1. Hold It Against Me
2. Seal It with a Kiss
3. Up n' Down
4. He About to Lose Me
5. Inside Out
6. Trip to Your Heart
7. I Wanna Go
8. Till the World Ends
Reasoning:
I chose Hold It Against Me and Till the World Ends as the intro and outro respectively because I thought they were the most defining songs of the album. The EP’s (and the album’s) songs mostly fall under one theme: love/lust at the club, so I thought why not make the two songs that most resemble that theme the first track and the last track.
I chose Seal It with a Kiss and Up n’ Down mostly because of how well they flow into one another, and with their similar production and lyrics, they seem to be a perfect match for each other. I chose He About to Lose Me and Inside Out also because of how well they flow into each other and I thought it would be fitting to put the song about not being able to let go of a toxic relationship after the song about a girl feeling her current relationship start to end and wanting to cheat as a result.
I chose Trip to Your Heart and I Wanna Go mostly because I needed two more songs and I happened to like these two more than the others. Neither of them sounds too out of place on the EP and they seem to flow very well into each other.
Overall, my EP’s tracklist was mostly decided by what the lyrics were and how each song flowed into the next sonically.
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Dylan - Ivory.
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - The unequal white borders are bothering me but cute otherwise.
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points - Femme Fatale doesn't really have any major theme to it. It really is just a fun pop album so I'm glad you didn't go the story route entirely. I really like HIAM starting and TTWE ending the EP. I like all the songs you chose actually. They are basically the 8 tracks i would have chosen. I loved that you grouped Trip To Your Heart, He About To Lose Me, and Inside Out together because it flows great that way. They basically represent the three stages of a relationship without being too sappy and still appealing to the club atmosphere of the EP. One of my favorite tracklists actually. Tons of potential hits including three that actually were.
5. Reasoning 1.5/4 Points - You weren't confident in your writing and it showed. Your tracklist was one of the best here in my opinion yet you wrote like you weren't sure what you were doing and it demoted your entry from good to average as a result. Specifically, when you explained TTYH and IWG, you said you just needed two more songs which to me meant you just got lucky that it worked so well in the end. Have confidence in your entries and even if you're not sure what you're saying, act like it. You did good so you know what you're doing. Just explain it next time. This could have easily been a solid 8.5 or 9.
Total: 7.5/10 Points
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Ethan - Ivory.
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 3/4
Good choices for the most part, I'm glad you chose to include Hold it Against Me, Till the World Ends, I Wanna Go, and Inside Out. I think How I Roll is a standout on the album, so I would have liked to see it on there, but other than that, the cuts you made didn't bother me. Trip to Your Heart is a little weak of a track to include, I'd have considered other options there. Overall, pretty good!
Reasoning - 1.5/4
"I needed two more songs" is not a reason I want to see for why you chose two songs. I know that Femme Fatale isn't a really deep album but there was more you could have done planning-wise to choose eight songs that really fit together and were there for a reason.
= 6.5/10 Points
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Yvess - Ivory.
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Brit looks immaculate!
4. Tracklist - 3/4 Points
I love that you pick strong singles from her album mixed with the great album tracks. I just don't think that Up N Down and HATLM deserves their places on your EP.
5. Reasoning 3/4 Points
I know you hate essays on this game. It's nice to note that you didnt suck in the essay department at all. Femme Fatale is a great album, just like your work on this round.
Total: 8/10
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Mario - Ivory.
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 2.5/4 Points
The tracklist isn't bad per se but it feels quite inconsistent.
5. Reasoning 1.5/4 Points
This entry sounded totally uninspired. It lacked a spinal theme and that "yeah I have no idea what to do so lemmr throw these two tracks in" was terrible.
Total: 6/10 Points
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11. Element
The Spectrum EP
KATY PERRY
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THE SPECTRUM EP
by Element
The album which inspired this EP, PRISM, is named after a multi-faceted glass object that is able to break light into its different spectral colors. I was inspired by this theme, and I wanted to dig into the various colors of the light spectrum, and their meanings. By doing so, through color psychology and symbolism, I am able to show the diverse sides of Katy Perry as a person and an artist -- just as a prism has many different facets, so does Katy. Each song on this EP has been selected to represent a different color of the light spectrum, as well as a different side of Katy. Throughout this journey of color, Katy will display how each color lives inside of her, and how she interweaves that color into a soundtrack of shimmering hues and shades. What qualities and colors will Katy find deep within herself? Each colored panel links to the audio for each song.
As Katy's prismatic journey comes to a close, she has now embraced a new era of herself. She has discovered new sides to her spirit and character, and has painted her spectrum for the world to enjoy. Each song is a true hue of Katy Perry, with the ultimate goal of inspiring others to discover and live out their true colors as well.
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Dylan - Element
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - Slay photoshop king!
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points - You got rid of the trash on the album pretty effortlessly. I like all the choices and their color correlations. I really like Double Rainbow but it's nothing to complain about. I would have personally put It Takes Two before Unconditionally so you could have ended on a slower note but that's just a small flow issue on my part. Other than that, you chose quality commercial tracks that work well with your desired theme.
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points - Great writing. Concise but also informative more so than people who wrote twice as much as you. You had a clear theme and each song had an explanation to go along with it. And you even wrapped up any loose ends with a conclusion so no complaints here, Elephant!
Total: 9.5/10 Points
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Ethan - Element
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 4/4
It's hilarious how easy the cuts are for this album: it's the last half of the album. I personally love all of the songs on the album, other than the unlistenable International Smile and Ghost, but there is a distinct dip in quality in the latter half. Excellent choices, thank you for using Walking on Air, Legendary Lovers, It Takes Two, and Dark Horse. While I think the album version of By the Grace of God is lesser than her acoustic versions, it's still a strong track and deserves a spot on the EP.
Reasoning - 4/4
I LOVE the idea behind it, with each song representing a different color of the spectrum. Really cool idea! It really worked well. I want to let you know that while I love the graphics, I'm not creaming myself over your entry BECAUSE of the graphics like some other judges might. I also don't love it just because I love Katy. This is a great entry because it was creative and not contrived, it was well thought out, executed, and explained, and because you made the right choices. Awesome job, man!
= 10/10 Points
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Yvess - Element
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - SLAAAAAAY!
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points
So perfect! I couldn't ask for more. Those graphics
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points
I like the fact that you backed up your EP tracklist with a very strong explanation. The introduction is commendable. The tracks were given a very good explanation treatment. You deserve the acclaim with an entry like this.
Total: 10/10 Points
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Mario - Element
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 4/4 Points
I think everything was in the right place and the song choices were the best you could do. Slay!
5. Reasoning 4/4 Points
This is the most creative entry of the round and, knowing you, I'm not surprised by it. It still touches the original album theme but with its own unique twist. Great job. Send me a copy!
Total: 10/10 Points
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12. Mariah4life
E=MC2
MARIAH CAREY - E=MC2 (EP)
By: Mariah4life
Track Listing:
1. Cruise Control
2. Touch My Body
3. Love Story
4. Thanx 4 Nothin
5. For The Record
6. I Stay In Love
7. Side Effects (feat. Young Jeezy)
8. Migrate
This EP plays with the meaning of the songs. It acts as the theme and also the flow. The theme being the story of her love and that it ended up not working out. It took her a while to find herself again but she did it at the end.
She was falling for a guy because she can’t get him off her mind. People have told her that he might ruin her life but she doesn’t care. This love is too strong that her Cruise Control is out of control. After a while, things heated up between the two. Their relationship grew, and they begin explore each others bodies. The girl moaned to her lover, "Touch My Body" and asked him to give her everything she deserves. It all happened so fast between them that it now became a Love Story. They have deeply fallen in love with each other and nothing could stop this love now.
After sometimes, the girl realized she’s been played and cheated on by the one she loves the most. She trusted him and never thought he would do this to her. Boy, Thanx 4 Nothin indeed. For The Record, she regretted her decision of leaving him because a part of her thinks that things could have worked out if they had given each other another chance to work out their problems. With I Stay In Love, even after the break up, she still misses him and wanting him to be there again but she knows it will never happen and he will never come back nor be the same person when she first met him. With Side Effects, she saying that she's over it now. She will no longer cry for this man who treated her badly because she’s not a girl he can use as a decoration. It’s now time for her to fly away and become a new person. The past is far gone. She has found her new life and she’s living for today. She’s now migrating from the party to the club to another party and to the hotel. She’s living her new life to its fullest with Migrate. Why live thinking about a cheater when there’s so much more that life can give you?
Buy this EP today and receive a free copy of Me I Am Mariah. The Elusive Chanteuse.
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Dylan - Mariah4life
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point - She looked so good here.
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points - Your storyline works just fine but I can't accept you leaving both I'll Be Lovin' & Bye Bye out from the album as they are both highlights. Bye Bye doesn't really fit into the story but I'll Be Lovin' especially could have worked for the love side of the EP. Other than that, I like the rest. It flows well which seemed to be a main goal of yours. Migrate not being a single was so stupid by the way.
5. Reasoning 2.5/4 - It was cute but it also sounded a little juvenile. You did mention every track but you didn't really explain the actual traci itself. You more just made it fit into your story that we wouldn't really know just by looking at the EP itself. It was decent but others had more detailed reasoning that made your entry fall a little flat here.
Total: 8/10 Points
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Ethan - Mariah4life
Artist Name + EP Title - .5/.5
Your Name - .5/.5
Cover - 1/1
Tracklist - 3.5/4
Where is *checks hand for notes Dylan gave me* I'll Be Lovin? It should have been on it!!! Touch My Body is a good song, I was glad to see it on there.
Reasoning - 3/4
I can't even be mad.
= 8.5/10 Points
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1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - 1 Point
4. Tracklist - 2.5/4 Points
Bye bye and IBLULT got snubbed? Good thing Cruise Control and Migrate opened and ended the EP.
5. Reasoning 3/4 Points
I enjoyed reading your EP's explanation. Very nice idea of having the EP play along the theme of love. So there, you had the cohesiveness goin on even if I don't like 3 songs on your EP.
Total: 7.5/10
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Mario - Mariah4Life
1. Artist Name + EP Title - .5 Points
2. Name - .5 Points
3. EP Cover - .5 Point
4. Tracklist - 3.5/4 Points
Good re-arrangement of the positioning that I find a bit messy on the original but I think Bye could've been a good fit here.
5. Reasoning 2.5/4 Points
The intentions were cute but it looked too much as an explanation for a kindergarten project. I wish you went deeper but I guess you can only do so much when you're working with this album out of all the Mimi ones.
Total: 7.5/10 Points
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Final Results coming up. - Dylan
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Below will be the normal stats I display every round, only obviously tribe ranks are now nonexistent so it will only include the current round rank as well as the overall rank.
Then Tribal Council will commence as usual which all 12 of you will be attending.
R12 Rank:
1. Element - 9.9 - +5
2. Golden - 9.1 - +8
3. Bloomers - 8.9 - +5
3. dwuw - 8.9 - +4
5. rl231 - 8.8 - -3
6. Mariah4life - 7.9 - -3
6. T-Swizz - 7.9 - +3
8. Ares - 7.8 - -3
8. Guero - 7.8 - -4
10. Rider - 7.4 (8.4) - -9
11. Sebas - 7.1 - -1
12. Ivory. - 7 - =
Overall Rank... So Far:
1. Element - 8.85 - +2
2. dwuw - 8.78 - =
2. rl231 - 8.87 - -1
4. RIder - 8.64 - =
5. T-Swizz - 8.5 - =
6. Sebas - 8.53 - =
7. Guero - 8.32 - =
8. Golden - 8.28 - +1
9. Bloomers - 8.16 - +2
10. Ivory. - 8.08 - =
11. Ares - 7.98 - +1
12. Mariah4life - 7.87 - +1
13. prezli - 8.3
Congratulations Element on your first Individual Immunity of the season.
Element is immune from elimination this round. However, the other 11 of you are up for elimination this Tribal Council. Send me a vote with the name of your choice for elimination after deliberation. Immunity Idols may be played but remember you must PM me before elimination or they are invalid. Good luck at your second Merge Tribal Council. One of you will become the second member of the Jury.
- Dylan
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Beat by Prism and BEYONCÉ again 
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d I knew Ethan would **** me up
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i want ice cream
i told my parents no when we went to the grocery store bc i had just eaten and was full
just thought i'd share that with everyone 
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was I the one tied for #1 
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I don't like ice cream. It's too cold 
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