Music Video: My Music Video! :) - Page 2

Phunk

Why is the choreography giving me Femme Fatale tour teas?

Cain

I hate how hypocritical everyone on this site is once they know the maker of a video is a user on here

I see where you were going with this, and the production is really nice, so props on that
but I'd work on your high notes, and the video could've easily been done without that effect the whole time, it's kinda distracting

Daydream

This is a good effort. Production and voice are good! Could obviously do with some touching up, but that's something for you to work on.

TaylorFantasy

ngl the high notes... i kinda didn't see them coming but when I listen to it the second time I really like it!
i don't really appreciate your "normal" singing voice idk why sorry

I think a vocal caoch can really help you.

Christiavan

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Originally posted by TaylorFantasy

ngl the high notes... i kinda didn't see them coming but when I listen to it the second time I really like it!
i don't really appreciate your "normal" singing voice idk why sorry

I think a vocal caoch can really help you.

"Normal" singing voice?

And yeah! I'm kinda poor to afford a vocal coach so :3

IBeMe

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You're a beautiful human being.

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Keep up the good effort! Find a vocal coach and it'll REALLY help you control your voice better.

oh thank you guys haha! I hope that it encouraged him or put a smile on his face tbh !

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Originally posted by Cain

I hate how hypocritical everyone on this site is once they know the maker of a video is a user on here

I see where you were going with this, and the production is really nice, so props on that
but I'd work on your high notes, and the video could've easily been done without that effect the whole time, it's kinda distracting

I agree with you Cain. However I do believe there is always a nice way of saying something.
for example what you said is your opinion and you said it very politely. ppl don't need to "drag" someone or be rude to them to get their point of view on his work across.
I think that now, thanks to polite and constructive comments like yours he will work harder on his vocals and use his talent in production some more all while not hurting him with unnecessary "drags" or "clocks" : )

Christiavan

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Originally posted by MrMinum

Why is the choreography giving me Femme Fatale tour teas?

I was inspired by Piece of Me actually.

Christiavan

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Originally posted by IBeMe

oh thank you guys haha! I hope that it encouraged him or put a smile on his face tbh !

I agree with you Cain. However I do believe there is always a nice way of saying something.
for example what you said is your opinion and you said it very politely. ppl don't need to "drag" someone or be rude to them to get their point of view on his work across.
I think now thanks to comments like yours he knows he will work harder on his vocals and use to his advantage his talent in production some more in the future! : )

Thank you so much!

Yeah, I'm kind of sensitive myself, but I try to tell myself at the end of the day. Work harder, and not everyone will like what you will do so yeah. Sometimes, I wonder how celebs do it. Take all this criticism. For example, Iggy doesn't seem to take it well. :/

TheCheshireCat

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Hey it's awesome that you're putting yourself out there, however... you are not a singer and this does not sound good, and knowing the internet this could lead to negative attention, so be careful. I'm just being real, people are cruel. Singing just isn't your thing, but that doesn't mean you can't still be in love with it and make it a part of your life. There are dozens and dozens of jobs that don't involve the microphone in your hand that are still in the industry, and you can still chase that dream. <3

NeverSincerely

I don't usually like these type of songs, but I liked the production on this. Also liked your video concept, though I think it would have been better if you used the old film effect more sparingly. If you did all of this by yourself(the video, editing, song) then it's very impressive, I know how time consuming doing all of that can be.

Christiavan

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Originally posted by NeverSincerely

I don't usually like these type of songs, but I liked the production on this. Also liked your video concept, though I think it would have been better if you used the old film effect more sparingly. If you did all of this by yourself(the video, editing, song) then it's very impressive, I know how time consuming doing all of that can be.

Thank you! And yeah, I had trouble with the video editing. I felt some parts looked of without some "unifying" effect (plus my computer is kinda poopy, so the program was slow so it took me maybe a week because I had stuff to do).

Dylan'

Anyone writing a negative comment with absolutely no constructive criticism is probably finishing off their 7th bag of chips for the day before checking their blood sugar so don't worry about it. Although the majority of nice comments are cool to see on a site like this. I expected typical drags.

If i tried to make my own music video, it would be an absolutely disaster. Maybe less of the filter you used but pretty good quality.

The production is good especially for being self-made. Voice needs work but you're not tragically tone deaf.

The dancing wasn't really needed on a song like this in my opinion. When you make a club banger, then sure.

Christiavan

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Originally posted by DillonATRL

Anyone writing a negative comment with absolutely no constructive criticism is probably finishing off their 7th bag of chips for the day before checking their blood sugar so don't worry about it. Although the majority of nice comments are cool to see on a site like this. I expected typical drags.

If i tried to make my own music video, it would be an absolutely disaster. Maybe less of the filter you used but pretty good quality.

The production is good especially for being self-made. Voice needs work but you're not tragically tone deaf.

The dancing wasn't really needed on a song like this in my opinion. When you make a club banger, then sure.

Am I slightly tone deaf? :S

vamp

Your voice isn't bad. You have a soft voice. Try layering your voice a couple times. The production is chill but it got annoying after a while with the same guitar strings. Try to have a build up.

Dylan'

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Originally posted by Christiavan

Am I slightly tone deaf? :S

In some notes, yes honestly. In general, nah.

PS this will probably be closed when mods come back but you can make blog entries for future videos.

Era

Great effort

I LOVED the production and didn't like the high notes at first but they're okay as they don't ruin the song!
Loved your dancing haha

BUT as DillonATRL said it wasn't needed for a song like this!

Christiavan

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Originally posted by DillonATRL

In some notes, yes honestly. In general, nah.

PS this will probably be closed when mods come back but you can make blog entries for future videos.

Ah okay thanks! I use ATRl that much so I don't know how to work it.