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 A Devil Always Wins (Sam)The intro kinda gave me a Madonna vibe in a good way of course, really strong start to the song. I liked the first verse, but the angel line is pretty awkward but it was a solid continuation to the intro. The pre-chorus is a lot better than the first verse honestly and a good build up. The chorus is nice but I don’t think it really packs a punch that a chorus needs. Like the contrast between the two verses, I think that works real nice actually. Just the shoulder line comes across so awkward. I liked the bridge but it wasn’t really the highlight of the song for me.
Breathless (EuphorianSea)
The intro was pretty interesting and seemed very passionate and filled with strong emotions. I liked where you were going with the first verse and it was leading up very well, but I thought the let it rip line was pretty awkward. I already spoke about the chorus and I like the second part is a bit water than the first part but it’s still solid. I like the bridge as well but I don’t really like the red line and it is the weakest part of the bridge. The transition from the bridge to the final chorus was pretty weak as well and I didn’t like it at all.
Chasing Dreams (Hugamari)
I liked the intro and the contrasting of empire/homes and nightmare/dreams, nicely done. The first verse is decent, I prefer the second half by miles for the shark line which I thought was a nice touch. The second verse’s first part is much better and is well written. The second half feels a bit familiar with the idea of broken hearts but it’s still a nice touch. Not really a fan of the hook at all and it feels out of place. I like the bridge but the word/herd rhyme felt a little forced.
Green-Eyed Drizella (Era)
Your title is pretty interesting and unique. I actually forgot her stepsister’s name was even Drizella, oops. I do like the idea of you writing a song based on a story. I like the first verse, the storytelling lyrics about Cinderella’s life are well written. I’m confused who the pre-chorus is talking about, Cinderella or her Stepmother? I got a little lost. I like the chorus, probably the highlight of the song. I really like the second verse talking about the stepsisters and their annoying fighting and targeting Cinderella. The second pre-chorus is much better. As well as the second chorus. The bridge felt a little rushed so that the whole story could come full circle.
Oh, Why? (keshasparsxo)
I thought the first verse was pretty awkward but when I reread it I liked it a lot more. Especially the night line, it was a nice touch and a good intro to the song. I liked the set up with the pre-chorus and it builds nicely into the chorus. Love the first part of the chorus, the drowning demons line and how they came back is genius and well written. Best part of the song. I think the use of the title is a bit awkward, but besides that the chorus is the highlight. I like the second verse, it isn’t as good as the rest of the song and kinda struggles a bit, don’t really get the dreams line. Love the first two lines of the bridge about healing cuts, another great line.
Purpose (ClarksonSlays)
Let’s see if you delivered a better sex song after last week’s mess. I like the idea of the line about the bones moved by the hands. Uniquely well written. The lines in your eyes line is awkward because I imagine someone’s eyes being slit and it makes me uncomfortable. The pre-chorus is the my favorite part so far, it sounds a little familiar and has feels like it’s been done before but I like it. The chorus was interesting and I’m mixed on it. The second verse is weaker but I still like it, nothing really stands out honestly. Love the sun line in the bridge, actually no, I love the whole bridge. This was way better than whatever you did last week and you redeemed yourself.
We Were Friends Until Yesterday (8thPrince)
I thought the title was pretty interesting, and I’m curious to see how it’ll be used in the song. The chorus is pretty good but my favorite part was the third part about the heartache. I like the first verse but I think your idea is a bit jumbled like how you reflect on yourself and your lover you left reviews about the relationship. It would’ve been easier if you broke up both sides of the story into two verses, one about your side and the other about your lovers, think I Wish You Would. The rap is a bit random but I actually like it. It’s a risk from you and a good one. I liked the second verse but the rap is probably much better and overshadows. The second rap is good as well, but I prefer the first.
Woman Of Desire (lovesong)
I like the storytelling lyrics in the first verse, very well done and it’s easy to picture the lyrics as they go along. The midnight kisses line is probably my favorite from the verse. I really like the chorus, it’s sad and well written. The post-chorus is really good but it felt like it was done before. The second verse is much better than the first, your storytelling is much stronger here. The bridge is probably the weakest part of the song as I feel it doesn’t really add anything.
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2015: Pop Duo/Collab (keshaspearsxo)
2013: Special Achievement Award (ClarksonSlays)
2004 / 2007: Female Pop Vocal Performance (Era)
2002: Best Pop Collab with Vocals (8thPrince & Sam)
2001: Latin Grammy for Female Pop Vocal Album (Euphorian**** and LoveSong)
2000: Best New Artist (Hugamari) |
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