Originally posted by Era Aww conatus & BlueM hennys it's actually not a HUGE question. I'm just gonna ask them abt what structure I should choose out of the ones I have in mind and they're gonna drag me for it BUT that's okay. I would be embarrassed if you guys would drag me so I'll pm you for lyric related questions.

Golden: Write a song from the bottom of your heart.
Me: *writes a song from the bottom of my heart*
Golden: this doesn't work at all.

Bass drum overload
No division
Lift me off the ground
Be my ignition

Ooh-hoo-hoo
If you wanna do
What I wanna do
Then we're going down-down-down

Ooh-hoo-hoo
If you come through
For what I wanna do
Then we're going down-down-down

And if you feel like I feel
Put your hearts up, put your hearts up
And we got love designed to kill
Put your hearts up, put your hearts up

You can't control the kids
You can't control the kids
You can't control the kids
Put your hearts up

#mood

Originally posted by dwuw Golden: Write a song from the bottom of your heart. Me: *writes a song from the bottom of my heart* Golden: this doesn't work at all.

Originally posted by Sam  Write a song from the bottom of your heart that's actually good.

I actually think my song is good. It's just that Golden doesn't like my good songs.

He liked All Night, I almost got eliminated; he hated Monster, and it made the top 10.

So save these kind of comments for another day.

But nothing ever gets me high like this
I pick my poison and it's you
Nothing could kill me like you do
You're going straight to my head
And I'm heading straight for the edge
I pick my poison and it's you
I pick my poison and it's you

Originally posted by Sam  Yeah I wouldn't trust Golden much tbh. Your song probably slays.

Originally posted by dwuw But nothing ever gets me high like this I pick my poison and it's you Nothing could kill me like you do You're going straight to my head And I'm heading straight for the edge I pick my poison and it's you I pick my poison and it's you

the video is actually good but

So sick, ill-equipped, gonna stick to a stick
I don't think that I can stop this
Pick it up, let it drop, be my cup, stir it up
Oh no, I'll never stop

That bad girl power I got, I'll abuse it tonight
Cause tonight got poison on my mind
That power I got, you'll be mine when I strive, feel alive
Got poison on my mind
I got that poison (uh huh), I got that poison (uh huh)
I got that poison, that poison on my mind
I got that poison (uh huh), I got that poison (uh huh)
I got that poison, that poison on my mind

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Originally posted by Era the video is actually good but So sick, ill-equipped, gonna stick to a stick I don't think that I can stop this Pick it up, let it drop, be my cup, stir it up Oh no, I'll never stop That bad girl power I got, I'll abuse it tonight Cause tonight got poison on my mind That power I got, you'll be mine when I strive, feel alive Got poison on my mind I got that poison (uh huh), I got that poison (uh huh) I got that poison, that poison on my mind I got that poison (uh huh), I got that poison (uh huh) I got that poison, that poison on my mind >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

I sent Clarkson my song, like, 15 minutes ago and he still hasn't replied.

Hope he's just picking all his follicles back up.

Originally posted by dwuw I don't care about metaphors anymore.

I don't care about songwriting anymore. Platinum Hit has killed it for me, at least for now.

At least I'm going out on a kii.

omg, Euphorian said I copied the line "I'm lost, nowhere to be found" from one of her songs, but Breathe Me by Sia was in a Spotify playlist and I looked at the lyrics and...........

Ouch I have lost myself again
Lost myself and I am nowhere to be found,