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Discussion: The poetry thread
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Post your favourite poems here, or even ones you've written yourself.
This is a therapeutic place to discuss and share poetic works.

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This is a short poem I penned while sitting on a swing in an exclusive resort in Turks & Caicos, about a straight friend whom I've fallen for, but loves another.
Twin flames raging in the night
Each burns intrepid, unflinching, and glorious
Feeding on the wind, riding up through the earth
Wild and magnanimous
Ah the splendid sound, the rhythm, the cadence
Of love's greatest rhapsody
And as you burn in your towering inferno
There I'll be, a separate flame
A flame of friendship.
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Here are some of my favorite poems:
"O Captain! My Captain!" by Walt Whitman
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O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done,
The ship has weather’d every rack, the prize we sought is won,
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring;
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.
O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells;
Rise up—for you the flag is flung—for you the bugle trills,
For you bouquets and ribbon’d wreaths—for you the shores a-crowding,
For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning;
Here Captain! dear father!
This arm beneath your head!
It is some dream that on the deck,
You’ve fallen cold and dead.
My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still,
My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will,
The ship is anchor’d safe and sound, its voyage closed and done,
From fearful trip the victor ship comes in with object won;
Exult O shores, and ring O bells!
But I with mournful tread,
Walk the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.
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"Lady Lazarus" by Sylvia Plath
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I have done it again.
One year in every ten
I manage it——
A sort of walking miracle, my skin
Bright as a Nazi lampshade,
My right foot
A paperweight,
My face a featureless, fine
Jew linen.
Peel off the napkin
O my enemy.
Do I terrify?——
The nose, the eye pits, the full set of teeth?
The sour breath
Will vanish in a day.
Soon, soon the flesh
The grave cave ate will be
At home on me
And I a smiling woman.
I am only thirty.
And like the cat I have nine times to die.
This is Number Three.
What a trash
To annihilate each decade.
What a million filaments.
The peanut-crunching crowd
Shoves in to see
Them unwrap me hand and foot——
The big strip tease.
Gentlemen, ladies
These are my hands
My knees.
I may be skin and bone,
Nevertheless, I am the same, identical woman.
The first time it happened I was ten.
It was an accident.
The second time I meant
To last it out and not come back at all.
I rocked shut
As a seashell.
They had to call and call
And pick the worms off me like sticky pearls.
Dying
Is an art, like everything else.
I do it exceptionally well.
I do it so it feels like hell.
I do it so it feels real.
I guess you could say I’ve a call.
It’s easy enough to do it in a cell.
It’s easy enough to do it and stay put.
It’s the theatrical
Comeback in broad day
To the same place, the same face, the same brute
Amused shout:
‘A miracle!’
That knocks me out.
There is a charge
For the eyeing of my scars, there is a charge
For the hearing of my heart——
It really goes.
And there is a charge, a very large charge
For a word or a touch
Or a bit of blood
Or a piece of my hair or my clothes.
So, so, Herr Doktor.
So, Herr Enemy.
I am your opus,
I am your valuable,
The pure gold baby
That melts to a shriek.
I turn and burn.
Do not think I underestimate your great concern.
Ash, ash—
You poke and stir.
Flesh, bone, there is nothing there——
A cake of soap,
A wedding ring,
A gold filling.
Herr God, Herr Lucifer
Beware
Beware.
Out of the ash
I rise with my red hair
And I eat men like air.
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"I Rise" by Maya Angelou
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You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
You may tread me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I'll rise.
Does my sassiness upset you?
Why are you beset with gloom?
'Cause I walk like I've got oil wells
Pumping in my living room.
Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise.
Did you want to see me broken?
Bowed head and lowered eyes?
Shoulders falling down like teardrops.
Weakened by my soulful cries.
Does my haughtiness offend you?
Don't you take it awful hard
'Cause I laugh like I've got gold mines
Diggin' in my own back yard.
You may shoot me with your words,
You may cut me with your eyes,
You may kill me with your hatefulness,
But still, like air, I'll rise.
Does my sexiness upset you?
Does it come as a surprise
That I dance like I've got diamonds
At the meeting of my thighs?
Out of the huts of history's shame
I rise
Up from a past that's rooted in pain
I rise
I'm a black ocean, leaping and wide,
Welling and swelling I bear in the tide.
Leaving behind nights of terror and fear
I rise
Into a daybreak that's wondrously clear
I rise
Bringing the gifts that my ancestors gave,
I am the dream and the hope of the slave.
I rise
I rise
I rise.
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"Bog Queen" by Seamus Heaney
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I lay waiting
between turf-face and demesne wall,
between heathery levels
and glass-toothed stone.
My body was braille
for the creeping influences:
dawn suns groped over my head
and cooled at my feet,
through my fabrics and skins
the seeps of winter
digested me,
the illiterate roots
pondered and died
in the cavings
of stomach and socket.
I lay waiting
on the gravel bottom,
my brain darkening.
a jar of spawn
fermenting underground
dreams of Baltic amber.
Bruised berries under my nails,
the vital hoard reducing
in the crock of the pelvis.
My diadem grew carious,
gemstones dropped
in the peat floe
like the bearings of history.
My sash was a black glacier
wrinkling, dyed weaves
and Phoenician stitchwork
retted on my breasts'
soft moraines.
I knew winter cold
like the nuzzle of fjords
at my thighs––
the soaked fledge, the heavy
swaddle of hides.
My skull hibernated
in the wet nest of my hair.
Which they robbed.
I was barbered
and stripped
by a turfcutter's spade
who veiled me again
and packed coomb softly
between the stone jambs
at my head and my feet.
Till a peer's wife bribed him.
The plait of my hair
a slimy birth-cord
of bog, had been cut
and I rose from the dark,
hacked bone, skull-ware,
frayed stitches, tufts,
small gleams on the bank.
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"Fire and Ice" by Robert Frost
Quote:
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
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And here are a few poems I have written. Any feedback is welcomed.
"Train Tracks Trees"
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Train tracks trees
Lining up one by one
They may not stay here forever
In this life I have not won
As I split and no longer together
One half of me to the sky
The other stuck to not fly
I lay here and look across
At the train track trees
I was already ran over
Never got what I wanted
Through I never remained sober
My insides were always haunted
It’s been a bumpy road
And now it all ends
At the gates my fate awaits
Up or down, I may not be proud
Everything has already been defined
Through his eyes
And judgement is upon me
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"No One Knows"
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Here I gaze
Through the fog and haze
Stomped out and over
By the invisible horses ran
By their invisible kings
Over and over
Speaking to a dead cobra
Winning and losing
Battles have been lost
Scars from the life
Are all a cost
Sharp, cutting like a knife,
And no one knows
Truth behold
We take most things for granted
And don’t realize what we have until
The end
Because we never had it in
The beginning
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"Shot of Life"
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Thou ill-formed offspring of my feeble brain,
I can feel the disease
My hands with my ice cold body pit into strain,
Nothing is quite at ease
Can I ever make it past this day
Crack by crack, I can not still see the light
On my knees and looking for a new way
My mother never told me there was this fight
I’ve always felt like a slave
To my desired one’s love
So my body set to fire in my grave
Not a single white dove
Nobody to surround me
Not a flower around me
Drowned into a deep blue sea
Going through to let it be
Sometimes I question my own existence
All I see is explosions
Lean to first see it at it’s moment
The people feeling their isolations
I knew to chose to believe
Set my mind to succeed
Some may think it’s all a joke
But all must eventually choke
Turn off the lights and step into the dark
Here I stand in New York City park
Hear the people talking
But no one cares for me
Now they will see
What was never meant to be
A deafening sound and that
Is the end
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Those three poems are works for a five poem collection I did two years ago on life and death.
Here are some other ones which are less serious.
"Robots Run the World"
Quote:
Here, there, everywhere
Take a look, do you see?
They got you by the hook in the deep blue sea
Silver as a nickle
Rusty as a penny
Making our products is their purpose
But soon they may hurt us
We can be outsmarted in a flash
Better dodge to make a dash
Nuts and bolts they are tight
Tightening of the screws for a fight
Duplicates begin made
They are the terminator and executioner
Here, there, everywhere
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"Homeland"
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Lakes superior to others
Urban surrounded by rural
America’s largest mall not far away
Cities that our twins
The world’s fourth largest river runs through here
Gold and purple runs deep in the blood
Two time World Series champions occupy
The phrase “Holy cow” started here
Most shoreland in the country
Every changing weather for every changing times
Right below the maple and right above the hawkeye
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"Perfect Poem Presenting Pie"
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Crazy cracked crayons creating crying crabs
Days dawn dusk dead dreaded drains
Easy elephants eating earth erasing expectations
Moon moving mighty mountains morning ll
Sun setting seeing scenes shattering soon
Over organisms outlasting over organs on oranges
Green grass growing Greek grams granted Gods
Brain busted being bananas back before butter
Windows wiping wands wrapping weird willows
Universal unicorns using utilized unsexed under
Vikings’ victory vandalizing Venus vectors ventures
Yellow yuckiest yearbooks yawning yourself
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A Poem by Me
N***a ain't **** but hoes and tricks
Lick the pearl tongue keep ya dick
Get the **** out after I ***
So I can hop in this coupe and make a quick run
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Roses are red
Violents are blue
Goosey is Kween
And none of you
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Originally posted by MiMiLamb
This is a short poem I penned while sitting on a swing in an exclusive resort in Turks & Caicos, about a straight friend whom I've fallen for, but loves another.
Twin flames raging in the night
Each burns intrepid, unflinching, and glorious
Feeding on the wind, riding up through the earth
Wild and magnanimous
Ah the splendid sound, the rhythm, the cadence
Of love's greatest rhapsody
And as you burn in your towering inferno
There I'll be, a separate flame
A flame of friendship.
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this is great
I didn't know you have this kind of skill
post more
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'Hope' is the thing with feathers—
That perches in the soul—
And sings the tune without the words—
And never stops—at all—
And sweetest—in the Gale—is heard—
And sore must be the storm—
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm—
I've heard it in the chillest land—
And on the strangest Sea—
Yet, never, in Extremity,
It asked a crumb—of Me.
Emily Dickinson
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I am the only being whose doom
No tongue would ask no eye would mourn
I never caused a thought of gloom
A smile of joy since I was born
In secret pleasure - secret tears
This changeful life has slipped away
As friendless after eighteen years
As lone as on my natal day
There have been times I cannot hide
There have been times when this was drear
When my sad soul forgot its pride
And longed for one to love me here
But those were in the early glow
Of feelings since subdued by care
And they have died so long ago
I hardly now believe they were
First melted off the hope of youth
Then Fancy's rainbow fast withdrew
And then experience told me truth
In mortal bosoms never grew
'Twas grief enough to think mankind
All hollow servile insincere -
But worse to trust to my own mind
And find the same corruption there
Emily Bronte
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Fading stars
She once was a tranny
some said she didn't have a fanny,
she sang and she danced
till her hips were lanced
Many heralded her as queen
but now she is a hasbeen
the monarchy has been overthrown
replaced with the new queen of drone
Her minions remain
some say they're insane
vitriol they spewed
creating many feuds
But now the new queen is alive
bow down to her rise
she roars louder than thunder
making zero blunders
worship ha!
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William Carlos Williams, ee cummings, Emily Dickinson 
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I will LOVE this thread so much. Thank you so much OP for making this thread! 
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Originally posted by brndksk
'Hope' is the thing with feathers—
That perches in the soul—
And sings the tune without the words—
And never stops—at all—
And sweetest—in the Gale—is heard—
And sore must be the storm—
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm—
I've heard it in the chillest land—
And on the strangest Sea—
Yet, never, in Extremity,
It asked a crumb—of Me.
Emily Dickinson
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Love this one
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And yeah, especially when your own thoughts make no sense to you anymore, writing them down or expressing them in other forms of art is still the best way to understand yourself!
The thing for me is just - I never manage to finish the poems cause, as soon as I write something, I suddenly stop + start something else instead!  Anyone else here who has the same problem? Or maybe even a solution???
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Originally posted by IBeMe
I will LOVE this thread so much. Thank you so much OP for making this thread! 
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No problem!
Hopefully it will blossom over time. I'll try to find some interesting poems to post soon.
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Actually here is one of my favourites. It's so sad but so relatable...
Nobody heard him, the dead man,
But still he lay moaning:
I was much further out than you thought
And not waving but drowning.
Poor chap, he always loved larking
And now he’s dead
It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
They said.
Oh, no no no, it was too cold always
(Still the dead one lay moaning)
I was much too far out all my life
And not waving but drowning.
Stevie Smith
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Did you guys like my poem? I can make another one of y'all want 
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Quote:
Originally posted by jackieshann
Fading stars
She once was a tranny
some said she didn't have a fanny,
she sang and she danced
till her hips were lanced
Many heralded her as queen
but now she is a hasbeen
the monarchy has been overthrown
replaced with the new queen of drone
Her minions remain
some say they're insane
vitriol they spewed
creating many feuds
But now the new queen is alive
bow down to her rise
she roars louder than thunder
making zero blunders
worship ha!
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Is this about gaga?

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Here's my poem I wrote few weeks ago
Woman and Secrets
Birds can not ask
Are they melodious?
What is it that flies and sings through the clouds?
They just fly knitting love with leaves and seasons
Until all ears awaken by their voice
Butterflies can not ask
Are they beautiful?
What is it that stretches so wonderful?
They just land knitting love with dews and flowers
Until all eyes amused by their beauty
Flowers can not ask
Are they fragrant?
What is it that produces life so buoyant?
They just grow knitting love with honey and seeds
Until universe wraped by their colors
A man can not ask
Why does a woman exist?
Who is she that dwells in elegance?
She's a song knitting love with earth and secrets
Until I'm trembled by her warm embrace
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^^^Great work! Well done.
I read that to a family member and she loved it.
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And now for one of the most famous poems (I thought we should get the classics out the way first)...
If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
But make allowance for their doubting too:
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or, being lied about, don't deal in lies,
Or being hated don't give way to hating,
And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise;
If you can dream---and not make dreams your master;
If you can think---and not make thoughts your aim,
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two impostors just the same:.
If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build'em up with worn-out tools;
If you can make one heap of all your winnings
And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your beginnings,
And never breathe a word about your loss:
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone,
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
Except the Will which says to them: "Hold on!"
If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
Or walk with Kings---nor lose the common touch,
If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you,
If all men count with you, but none too much:
If you can fill the unforgiving minute
With sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
And---which is more---you'll be a Man, my son!
Rudyard Kipling
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^^^ Aww thanks, it must be fun to have family who shares same interests, I wish my family could understand my work lol, they don't speak English
I'm not really familiar with Rudyard Kipling's work but that poem is very encouraging
William Blake's works inspired me to write
one of his poems (my favorite!)
The Sick Rose
O Rose thou art sick.
The invisible worm,
That flies in the night
In the howling storm:
Has found out thy bed
Of crimson joy:
And his dark secret love
Does thy life destroy.
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Breath In
Breath Out
American Oxygen
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A poem called Boy
Boy
Roses are red violets are blue
Boy I'm really starting to hate you
Either you stay away from me or it's 6 feet under the ground for you
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