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Broken Wounds (Jezang) : This was an interesting approach to the subject. To be honest, a lot of contestants took their keywords extremely literally, so your risk gave you a few extra points. However, there were a lot of lyrics that felt a little... overly juvenile, moreso than the concept would seemingly entail. A lot of it felt like the theme song of a cartoon show and if that was your purpose, you achieved it, definitely. I'm just not quite sure that in round 4, a potential cartoon show theme can survive... Especialy since it lacked in execution. "designed for horror" and "broken wounds" were a little bit awkward. But on a more positive note, it did have a good pace, relatively good rhyming and some good lines, like "light veiled behind the clouds", that sounded good.
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The song was went to be 'campy' and 'spooky'. I think the rhymes and choice of words fit the theme well and the execution was spot on. However you are free to feel that the song is juvenile and this definitely was a risk. I was originally going to make a typical song about wanting someone's companionship but felt it left me uninspired - and then I came up with this.
I wasn't sure if this song was either going to be a home run or knock me out since you guys could dislike it altogether, but I figured i had nothing to lose other than elimination and even then I'd still be proud of my work. "Designed for horror" was actually one of my favorite lines but ah well
Thanks for the feedback TT!
Feel better, love.
