"Not as strong as your previous entries"
"This song was unnecessarily long, you could have conveyed the same message in half the lyrics"
"I wasn't a fan of the concept, it was too simple and uninspired"
"You overused your theme in this song, it was too literal. Take it back a step"
"There was too much familiar language in this song to make it really stand out"
"It was an okay effort but certainly not one of my favourites of the round"
"Some of the rhymes and lyrics were obviously forced and felt completely unnatural"
"Not as strong as your previous entries"
"I wasn't a fan of the concept, it was too simple and uninspired"
"There was too much familiar language in this song to make it really stand out"
"It was an okay effort but certainly not one of my favourites of the round"
"Omg it was perfect slay me King!"
"Why isn't this #1 on Billboard right now?"
"I like how you changed it up yet slayed just as much"
"Great work"
"Can you top me?"
"Omg it was perfect slay me King!"
"Why isn't this #1 on Billboard right now?"
"I like how you changed it up yet slayed just as much"
"Great work" "Can you top me?"
Truth Teller liked it, clearly. I feel like Matty will have liked it, too. Tymps. probably hated it, and Fefe will drag me over the "familiar" language. Bloomers will be indifferent to it.
Orly. Is that why you were #1 and #3 in both previous rounds?
I could relate to Little Birds. I could relate to parts of Happy (not the chorus, the weakest part). I couldn't relate to Flowers at all. I need to write songs that I feel, not songs that I think will sound cool.
