I'd rather you to send the original version, but if you really want to send the instrumental version, then send both.

Oh well. Im already eliminated.

its nice to know that I left this game knowing that I gave my all even if the majority dislikes it.
I dunno if I should ferl bad about it or not but I wont give it time to linger on my mind.

The best of luck to Holyground and Musicloverdude.

Adios.

5 left... Y'all better hurry!

I think I sent.

It's near impossible on my school's terrible wi-fi. I kept getting a "This Webpage Not Available" message everytime I hit submit.

Putting some finishing touches on my entry, expect it soon!

Not Prismatic having his inbox unavailable and Dollas being late for the 100th time when he said it wouldn't happen again

and i just came in to me being on time before i sent

I'm really sorry Pedro. usually your deadlines end at 5pm my time so i thought i had plenty of time but i see that its 4pm right now and the countdown is already over. i never checked or else i would have sent as soon as i got home. damn.

oh for ****sake i just typed it out and im way over word limit anyway

**** it i give up my feeble mind isn't strong enough to explain the complex magnificence that is the Wildest Dreams instrumental in only 250 words as well as what it means and why its the best.
sorry again judges. like really im incredibly pissed at myself i didn't keep my promise to you. I should have been eliminated last round, in fact you should place yvess in the top ten not me he deserves it

rooting for Holyground and Capital B. I wouldn't have beat you two anyway

Can't you summarize what you wrote and make it at least closer to 250 words?

And why do you feel like you cannot beat holyground and boyonce? We've seen major shifts in the ranks. Anything can happen. Don't give up now

I reffuse to say a word.

This instrumental is so damn complex there are so many elements i dont now what to cut without my explanation being empty. i 'm stressing out just thinking about it. if i wasn't gonna describe all the sounds like that i would have to reconstruct my entire essay and there is all ready no time. i would show you but idk if im even allowed to post the link anyway cause its hosted on google music which my or may not let you download idk also Wildest Dreams the original has been erased from the internet so

holy and B are both incredible writers and i think im a pretty good one too but i dont know how to condense or structure which makes my essays suffer.

ugh the fact it isn't perfect is frustrating me into wanting to fix it even tho it doesn't even matter anymore

@Pedro

Well if it's that hard to break it down, you can pull a Starships and submit your essay even if it's 300 words. Fewer points from judges is better than quitting. We'd be more disappointed about the fact that you're dropping out instead of being late. But if you don't want to continue, I respect your decision. Will see you around.

I only see one on ATRL.

But in all seriousness, I really love your essays and descriptive language. Please submit if you can, Dollas.

You don't need to explain every little detail about it. Just pick a couple strong points and try to drive home why they make it the best instrumental on the album

You can just PM ha to Pedro

Okay,

thank you so much guys for encouraging me to finish, especially Inner helped me refoucus my essay into what was actually important. i shortened it down for 300 words

you guys helped me focus and really reevaluate my work and learn some new things. im happy

@Kavish i was tempted to do that just send my first sentence. it kind of works

do i need the original because i cannot find it. i assume you all have heard it already?

Sometimes you do just need someone to get your mind back into focus. I'm glad I could help Dollas.

Sorry Pedro, but I have to pull out from the game. I got some personal issues so I'm leaving the whole of ATRL.


I'm really sorry for disappointing you because I know you hate quitters. Your game is so fun and I can clearly see you put in a lot of effort into making it. Your essays are really solid and it'll be great if you end up winning your own game!


Thank you Inner, igor, Element and Kavish for being wonderful judges. I really learnt a lot from all of your comments.


Good luck to all the contestants still surviving! You guys are all amazing for making it to the top 10, it isn't easy at all!