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Originally posted by nicedude
Take a deep breathe in the mirror part?
I also love the break, and burn and end part 
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The first half is okay, cuz it's supposed to reflect how horrible her ex is.
But "Walked in expecting you'd be late..." felt a bit too descriptive, especially bout rather insignificant stuff. I understand that it's probably showing how she notices these little details that people would easily overlook and how these little moments actually make her feel good about the new relationship. But it just feels a bit too simple.
she's the whole reason I started writing music and is definitely my biggest influence on my writing style, I just love her