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Tournament: PLATINUM HIT 5 [FINALE] [Looking for new host! App inside!]
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Chorus
I put in time, but I got dat kill doh
Shooting lines, blow yo mind, where yo career go
I got yo man harder than a flag pole
All I can say is
[announcer voice] I got dat kill doh
Verse 1
Taking a shot, pinky up in the air
Acting classy with *** stuck in my hair
But yo man seems to like, he don’t even care
Who do you think got it all up in there
We own things things don’t own we?
Time to get yo own style, Miley
Recording in the studio, sounding like a banshee
Country girl hating, I say “who she?”
Chorus
I put in time, but I got dat kill doh
Shooting lines, blow yo mind, where yo career go
I got yo man harder than a flag pole
All I can say is
[announcer voice] I got dat kill doh
Verse 2
Rolling up... to the club
Rolling up... in the club
Light it up... that’s a blunt
Put em up... little ****
There's a place downtown where a bitch could get shot
Tik tok, pop my glock, crazy kids around the block
Getting these bitches pressed cuz I put em on lock
If they don’t shut their mouths they about to get clocked
Chorus
I put in time, but I got dat kill doh
Shooting lines, blow yo mind, where yo career go
I got yo man harder than a flag pole
All I can say is
[announcer voice] I got dat kill doh
I put in time, but I got dat kill doh
Shooting lines, blow yo mind, where yo career go
I got yo man harder than a flag pole
All I can say is
[announcer voice] I got dat kill doh
Verse 3
Pour it up, put it up, ima watch these bitches fall
Phresh out the runway, on their knees but not to crawl
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I was planning on writing my second song tonight but I'm too tired.
I have the day off tomorrow though and no plans for once 
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A flawless Libra over here you guys 
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Me every time I enter this thread.

The injustice that I got banned before I could prove myself, almost mirroring my time as a contestant during Season 3. But, I will be back with a vengeance next season. I'm not playing, my 21 is brewing and I will Candice Clover this ****.

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Nait, I'm gonna be honest right now and tell you that I need you to post those examples  I started my air song but I'm not sure how airy it is.
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Quote:
Originally posted by feelslikeadream
Nait, I'm gonna be honest right now and tell you that I need you to post those examples  I started my air song but I'm not sure how airy it is.
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I posted the examples. If you want an honest opinion, an "air" song should be happy, carefree, wild, unpredictable, and/or fun! Like the wind, you just never know where it's going. I didn't post it (mostly because it's obvious and the lyrics BUG me), but "Air Balloon" is definitely an "air song".
I think you'll have more trouble with an earth song since it needs to be content, stoic, grounded, safe, and/or balanced. A lot of ballads are that, so something like "Someone Like You" or "I Will Always Love You" are good examples.
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And the two doing fire & water:
Fire needs to be passionate, overly emotional, angry, powerful, and/or uncoordinated. Songs like "Since U Been Gone" or "Caught Out There" would be good examples.
Water songs are usually calming, cool, deep, depressing, and/or easy-going. So, "Teardrops on My Guitar" or "Shades of Cool" are decent examples.
I'd post more, but I'm having a brain fart right now.
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Fire and water are so much easier. Y'all better slay this challenge.
Fortunately, I have a good air song started. "Candelabra" will probably win this round 
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I don't think air and earth is that bad. I'd probably do a prison vs freedom theme if I had those.
I'm attempting to keep similar themes but different emotions in my songs. I'll see how that works out
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I think the best song of 2013 is a good AIR song.
Hop on the back of my bike
Let the good wind blow through your hair
Ride on through the middle of the night
Let the moonlight kiss your skin

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not you getting ignored, i'm sorry :molesthard:
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Quote:
Originally posted by feelslikeadream
I think the best song of 2013 is a good AIR song.
Hop on the back of my bike
Let the good wind blow through your hair
Ride on through the middle of the night
Let the moonlight kiss your skin

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Agreed. That's a very carefree song. It's so pleasant, but at the same time it's so whimsical. 
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My inspiration for fire (and even a bit of water) this round is the Age of Adz by Sufjan Stevens. I want to explore in my lyrics and thinking how fire and water's characteristics are embodied in people and how the human nature which exists in those elements can be corrupt and, to put it simply, bad. I love lyrics that venture into this kind of deep thinking because it really leaves you pondering the subject for many days to come so hopefully the judges appreciate the style as well!
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Maybe I'll update the OP today… 
TBH, not looking forward to it…
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Jack, after you work on your other song tomorrow, you should send them to me so I can give you a lot of great feedback.

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Quote:
Originally posted by feelslikeadream
Jack, after you work on your other song tomorrow, you should send them to me so I can give you a lot of great feedback.

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Oh I already finished it
I might write another one because I wasn't in an angry mood so it turned out kinda depressing
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Storm Warning vs. Storm Chasing
coming for roots....SOON
When pop sucks the **** of ART.
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This thread is deader than my dad.
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