Here is a thread so you can post songs yo personally have written. Here's one I wrote a couple of days ago.

Alone
She sits there
Wondering
How it could end up like this
The world is
So hungry
That it eats up her life
The walls scream
With darkness
That she cannot take
Anymore
Anymore

She's alone
In the world
Nobody to guide her
Love her
It's like nobody's home
But really there is
They just don't care about her anymore
And it's so sad
How life could
Be terrible for one
And great for another
However
She's not really alone

We try to
To help her
But somehow it slips our mind
To give her
The love she needs
In this life
Why did it end up like this

She's alone
In the world
Nobody to guide her
Love her
It's like nobody's home
But really there is
They just don't care about her anymore
And it's so sad
How life could
Be terrible for one
And great for another
However
She's not really alone

Inside she's dead
Outside she's grieving
As the walls are screaming
Her ears are bleeding
Help her, help her, help her she's alone

Alone
Yeah
She's alone
Whoa
Oh yeah

She's alone
In the world
Nobody to guide her
Love her
It's like nobody's home
But really there is
They just don't care about her anymore
And it's so sad
How life could
Be terrible for one
And great for another
However
She's not really alone

34 views and no one even tried to comment..Well, I'll be the first then.
I really like the song, you write really good..I just think you should work on those 2 lines -
"It's like nobody's home
But really there is"
Maybe you got some melody in your head where it fits but in my head it's not really working..It's just a suggestion, anyways great song .

And now for mine..I got some songs I wrote a while ago, like a year or so and that's one of them...A week ago I wasn't falling asleep so I tried to make it better so now I kinda like it.
I haven't given it a title.

Picture froze in time
I can't remember anything
Seeing shades and lights
Trying so hard just to see
Pieces of your face
Try to gather them around
Searching in my mind
Maybe there's something I could find

And I'm all alone
Have nothing but my dreams
Out there by my own
With some faded memories
Trying hard to find
Someone who will give me a hand
But no one even mind
And I can’t get my happy end

It's all my fault
I broke the rules time after time
Didn't care at all
Doing what I saw as right
Now I pay the bill
Of the actions in the past
Even if I tried
To regain your love and trust

And I'm all alone
Have nothing but my dreams
Out there by my own
With some faded memories
Trying hard to find
Someone who will give me a hand
But no one even mind
And I can’t get my happy end

And I tried so many times
But it's so hard now that you are gone
To be strong and just move on
Tried to deal, tried to forget
Tried to blackout but I'll always regret
Being without you just makes me feel
Broken up, like nothing's real
And 'till I'll get you I won't be whole
Won't be the same
'Cuz I'll always feel like

I'm all alone
And I have nothing but my dreams
I'll wait there on my own
Count some faded memories
It will always be hard to find
Someone who will give me a hand
We all know no one will even mind
But I won't let it ruin my happy end

We had a contest back then about song writing. It was fun.

I probably wasn't here back than...But I think this thread is a great idea.

I love your's! With the tune that's in my head, it could be a real hit.

Wow you guys are really good..
i love ur lyrics ..
i have lyrics too
but they suck..
lol

Lol, thanks ! It sucks you can't post a tune 'cuz I got my own one in my head..I wonder what kind of tune you got...
Hey, it's all about posting and getting an opinion...It can only make us better, you should try.

Ur right.. well is just some lines... i´ll try to write more (my writting book is lost )

"here i am
standing here alone
screaming...
screaming like there´s no time at all
but it seems like nobody listen
do you listen?
do you care?
are u there for me?
I need to know
Time´s running out
and my lungs are filling up
im drowning in the dark
and you cant see it at all

There it is.. Dont be to hard on me!

ohh I miss Mikal's ATRL Song Contest

It's kinda short but I can see you got some nice writing skills .
I'm guessing it's not the complete version...Keep working on it, I'm pretty sure it can turn into a really great song.
To be honest I don't think I got a complete and finished song 'cuz I always keep on retouching them..

Its not complete.. Im gonna finish it later.. thanks!

Aww this reminds me of Fantasy Billboard when we all made up our own artists and songs and voted for each other's singles and albums.

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Here is one of my songs (I haven't written anything in recent years)

All The Same

Born without a reason on a long forgotten night
Life abundant, so redundant, yet I remain
Exist as I'm supposed to, to the standards I abide
But for every sense not shunned, I am in pain

Why, is all life, a mere struggle to survive
A billion hands, just holding on to what they'll leave behind
To be, is that all there is to our humanity
In the end, will we suffer or be free?

Yearning for clarity
In every troubled stream
My world making sense
An unimaginable dream
Share all fate, have no faith
Every second
Comes too late
Not a soul that will remember what we've been
It's all the same to everyone who's seen

Why, is all life, an ending struggle to survive
A billion voices, dying memories to the ones they left behind
Not to be, is that how it ends for all humanity
Is it really all the same for you and me?

Why, did my life, lose all value over time
Am I destined to be worthless, is no feeling really mine?
Is there joy in being part of this cursed humanity
If it's all the same why don't you cry, like me?

Yearning for clarity
In every troubled stream
My world making sense
An unimaginable dream
Share my fate, let's have faith
Let's join hands, it's not too late
Together we'll remember every wasted day (let's waste this day)
It's all the same to all of us, anyway
All the same to all of us, anyway

Tcatron565 - I liked your lyrics, I had the beat in my head and it worked well. There’s a word for not giving the love someone needs. The word is neglected.

NickLacheyFan - That was really good. There were some awkward endings to a line that just didn’t go with the flow. I really liked it though.

KarlosVzla - that’s really good. Very depressing.

Kworb - I LOVED IT!!!!! So beautiful and true.

Whats with all the sad songs that seem they would go to a midtempo/ballad beat???


Heres a sample of mine, if you like it i'll let you read the full song:
(to keep with the depressing sad songs) here is a snippet of my song When I'm Gone
My Biggest Regret, Is Ever Trusting You
Thinking That You Were True
But I Was A Fool
I Fell Into Your Trap, Of Your Evil Scheme
Now Look At What You've Done To Me
Are You Proud?

they should bring that back I liked it

It's kinda hard to judge a snippet of a song..At least for me, would be great if you post the full one.
Anyways, thanks It will be awsome if you tell me where are the awkward endings so maybe I'll see it myself...

Someone bring back the contest!

Liyoh goes and brings back that contest in a few days.

Thanks... ur song was cool.. u should put the whole thing

Those bolded parts just really didn't flow with me when reading it