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Joan
Member Since: 8/19/2013
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A heart touching poem
Heaven is something quite interesting isn't it?
How can something so far away feel so close?
Why does the simple thought of consummation tremble within me?
Why does my home feel so close yet eons away?
Through time, and space it speaks to me.
Through faithful words it declares to me
like a mother calling her child home, I too hear its voice.
When my boat lands on that beach.
The shores of time and glory.
No words on this page can describe that emotion.
The breath of Air celestial.
The sight I see miraculous.
And the life I see behind…finished.
Maybe I won’t know I’m was.
Maybe It will all seem Like a dream.
The passed life fading away like salt in water.
As I look to my loved ones I will not see their failures and
wrongs.
Or their rights, and works.
But them.
There in that place I will rediscover people I always knew.
Unraveling the world together.
Peeling pack the hollow shell we once were and reveling what we
never were.
Discovering the one we never knew.
Seeing his face finally in that place of mystery.
When I look into his eyes.
I will see all I wanted to hear.
And smell all I wanted to see.
Every day we will walk among the skies he created.
Breathed the air he breathed.
Walk the steps he paved.
Every day we will see the time pass and It will mean nothing to
us.
Countless Ages we will spend together.
I will know him as much as he knew me...
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Nathan Maciel
HausOfGerard
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Who wrote this?
HUYPHAN
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alexanderao
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Joan
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HausOfGerard
Who wrote this?
I don't know actually
I was on YouTube on a Cloud Atlas music piece and I saw this. I think that after I watched the movie it really made sense to me
Dancehall
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PYP: Post Your Poetry
Joan
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HUYPHAN
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alexanderao
skwonderfactory
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It's from here:
http://usefulbrainy.blogspot.com/201...an-maciel.html
Joan
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PYP: Post Your Poetry
There's a Post Your Poetry thread?
But I wouldn't post it on there because I didn't make this one, I saw it on a YouTube comment
Joan
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skwonderfactory
It's from here:
http://usefulbrainy.blogspot.com/201...an-maciel.html
Thank you
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alexanderao
Thanks for stopping by ! I hope you read it and enjoyed it
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