Member Since: 8/20/2011
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Welcome to the second elimination ceremony. This week was tough. We lost a player but that wasn't enough. DOMINO needed to get rid of another one. But that's because there can only be one winner. Only one of you will be crowned "Le ATRLer".
First of all you will get the comments of the judges.
Les Comménts
Arcane_Sky
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
WELL this was an interesting entry. I've heard this song be referenced so many times. I like how you included this own little journey on how you came about the song, and this who spiritual awaking you seemed to have when you listened to it 
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Originally posted by H-I-M
Dddd, sistér, you effortlessly scalped the competition and set the bar so high that all the other entrées suddenly became boring.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
What kind of improvement from last week? This was a very good read.
The only negative thing I can say about it is that layout started messy but it got cleaner towards the end. Good job overall.
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Gatsby
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
Its v cute, and they always say good pop songs are like go nursery rhymes, with few words and a chrours that repeats its self in your head. I could so see how you can this song go together though, it reminds me of you: loud and in your face. Good job.
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Originally posted by H-I-M
You're lucky that I saw your entré before Arcane's, the score would probably have been lower 
But I loved reading it, great entré !
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Originally posted by DOMINO
I loved your explanation and everything. I also liked the stats. 
Well done!
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Cupid
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
I loved the background story. And I can’t stop staring at her ass when she walks off 
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Originally posted by H-I-M
Cute entré, but maybe too short ? You can do much better Gareth.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
I love how you kept it this short (which was actually the right length I had envisioned for this challenge - so good job!), yet it was informative. I can semi-relate to this, to be honest.
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coolcristobal
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
I thought you were straight. Ch.
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Originally posted by H-I-M
I liked your honesty, I mean who is their right mind would come up with a Gaga song as their favorite one ? Definitely not me ( ).
Anyway, good entré, but I kinda find it strange that your favorite song is a song that its lyrics "aren't clever or amazing", but whatever.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Well well well. Slé. Although, as I said to e437, the connection to yourself is missing. But it’s amazing how you pointed out every detail that you liked about this song.
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nineteen
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
The last part was very beautiful, about having it give you hope, and then you finding it, omg  . Congrats on finding love. I have no other words, it was a good entry.
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Originally posted by H-I-M
Loved reading your entré, but the only reason why you got the bronze medal is because the top2 set the bar too high.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Wow. This was so personal and touching.
My favorite entry overall. It was easy to read and I loved the lyric comparison to your real life. 
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Bey_Rihstan
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
You and like every other queen.
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Originally posted by H-I-M
I won't even bother, just like you obviously didn't either.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
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Frozen99
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
You kind of described what the song was about, and not really on why you like it so much besides its a Shakira song. I was left a little bit  when I finished it.
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Originally posted by H-I-M
Same as e437, just boring to read.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
I can understand why you love that song but this was a little underwhelming. I don’t know why, though. The layout also seemed a bit lazy. Not bad but not great either.
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e437
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
Eh another entry that seems rushed and not very thought out.
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Originally posted by H-I-M
Good but kinda boring, it's just "text", you could have been a bit more creative (titles, subtitles, gifs)
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Meh. Kind of lackluster. I don’t know why it’s YOUR favorite song, though. You talk about the song itself but not the connection to you.
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iHypeMusic
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Originally posted by Emmy Del Rey
Stan for Mimi, her Horcrux 
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Originally posted by H-I-M
This is such a hard challenge, cause most of you guys came with such well written paragraphs that I struggled to rank you. What got you this position is probably that background.
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Originally posted by DOMINO
Nnn;; This was cute. It felt like an experience. Well done.
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Sté tuned.
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