Judges Comments!!!
NICKIMINAJ
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Challenge 3
Starships-
What....?
You're story was interesting, but it was kind of everywhere. I'm kind of on the fence about it. - 5/10
Nasiir-
I feel like it would have been better if it were longer. It was pretty vague... - 5.5/10
Citrus-
Sent late, sorry sis. - 0/10
CBXC-
Kiiiiii, yours was funny, I really liked it! - 9/10
CrazyCat-
Yours was funny, and the formatting slayed! - 10/10
Timber-
Yours was kind of funny, It was kind of random though, and just "put together" - 8/10
Funky - Literally done with you, I laughed through out the entire thing and the way you made it look like a magazine article made it cute. - 10/10
Musickid203-
Country. Bumpkin. Magazine. I SCREAMED. Yours was shocking, but it was kind of flip-floppy. The beginning solidified that they killed him, then the claim was retracted and now no ones prints were matched. When you have a topic/story in mind, ride the topic out the whole way. - 7.5/10
Richa-
I rooted for you. I was the one who made everyone consider you into the competition. But it doesn't even seem like you care. But it's all good. - 4/10
rl231-
Sent late. - 0/10
Jax-
Pretty much SCREAMED throughout the entire thing. - 8.5/10
e437-
A little messy. A little everywhere. Slight kii tho. - 6.5/10
riri-
Damn. - 0/10
Cupid
Starships - Did you seriously write this? It seems like something my 4-year old nephew would write.. the colours were hella annoying too. Sorry not sorry.
4/10
Nasiir15 - What is it with you guys and piss? This was kind of like Starships story except with older and more talented people in the story. No thanks.
4/10
Citrus - That damn picture, i'm sorry i'm howling

Ok it was kind of silly but I did enjoy reading it.
7/10
CBXC - Omg that picture of Bruno and the nipple, dghklndgkhln stop. The whole superbowl scandal is obviously uninspired but I liked the twist you put on it. Good job!
7/10
CrazyCat - Ok so the actual story is a mess. Like bra stealing? And it's kind of hard to follow but I know English isn't your best so i'll look past that, that damn picture of Kylie at the end legit made me shed a tear, I was not expecting that! I think it was a cute story, it definitely made me laugh.
7.5/10
Timber - I didn't really like it. It was kind of annoying, the only funny part was when Katy couldn't catch the award.
5/10
FunkyDinevo - Girl I was hollering, cunninglingus

Ok so the story is completely ridiculous obviously but you totally owned the fact and just took it to the extreme which I loved. The formatting was perfect as well. Points, take all of da points!
9/10
Musickid203 - So you took the more serious approach, I think what confused me is when you said Hunter was raped and murdered, but then in the next sentence he came out and confirmed having a 3-some, despite being dead as you previously mentioned

I can appreciate the effort though.
6/10
richa70 - You probably would have scored better not sending in anything. I hate it, all of it.
2/10
rl231 - Considering the fact all these people are irrelevant, this could have actually been a real life story. In fact I actually went to Twitter just in case you had cheated. Good job, the only downfall is that it's not as scandalous as the others, it sounds like something which could happen.
5.5/10
Jax - Um this entry kind of scared me, talking about killing babies and stuff.. umm... Apart from that part I liked the rest.
7/10
e437 - Girl I like you but this was not a strong entry. I would say more but i'm still drowzy from the flu and those pictures and hypnotizing me.
6/10
ririfan21 - I already told you he quit
0/10
ethan
Starships: 8
I'm going to be honest, I was not impressed with the beginning part between Ke$ha and Lady Gaga. I thought the entry was just going to be crap, but then after "MEANWHILE…", you had me laughing. The Demi shade was just perfect, so hilarious. I like that you changed the colors of their quotes, but there wasn't much else to the presentation. I would challenge you to work more on making your formatting look nice. You have the content (for the most part), you just need to give it a presentation it's worthy of.
Nasiir: 3
Well, you had three artists and a scandal. Yay for following directions! There wasn't much else. I would challenge you to be more creative with your entries, don't go for the obvious and try to show us your creativity!
Citrus: 10
A perfect 10 because it made me laugh. My favorite parts: "its quick an rolls off ur tongue. It hits u a bit.", "Did you hear how much her tickets are, now? Only $6. Isn’t that desperate?" because Angela Cheng hates Gaga, and just the use of Angela's picture. Really funny entry, great pictures, creative presentation (interview). Not what I expected but very impressive.
CBXC: 9
Great presentation, hilarious picture, and a really creative story. Luke was a weird person to be give, so I can't dock you for not giving him more to do. It was a funny parody of Justin's last Super Bowl, but it kind of fumbled at the end. With such a tight word-limit, I wish you'd have made every word count. Still a really impressive entry!
CrazyCat: 6.5
You had an idea, I just wish it had gone further. The pictures were really funny, you definitely did a great job with them, and I loved the background, but there was some room for revisions in the story. I would challenge you to think of some less obvious shade to use, but definitely keep up the awesome presentation!
Timber: 10
Yes! This was hilarious. The Katy Perry shade was perfect, it may be old but I will never tire of Katy Perry Grammy shade. The story was really creative, I wish you hadn't given the twist away in the title, but it was still a great one. The Rihanna shade made me laugh, the Justin part didn't (why did you include him? you didn't even have to and he really had nothing to do). Great entry, even if the presentation wasn't as strong as other's.
Funky: 10
Really creative idea using the magazine cover, and really cute to include Katie and Matty (I don't get the Retro part…). Great presentation, and I love that your picture was New York. The story itself was great, cool idea using Melvin, and the line about Selena only getting one butt cheek injected made me laugh. Great job!
Musickid: 6
Country Bumpkin magazine was cute, nice picture. The story was kind of lacking, there was nothing really funny about it except that picture of Blake (any picture of him is funny). I would challenge you to try and push the limits on your entries, take your time and make something you're proud of.
richa70: 0
? There was nothing to this. I would say focus more on your story and try to give it some real depth, rather than "Selena's happy! (picture of Selena being happy)". Take a look at Timber's to see what I mean. There was more than one thing going on in his story, and it made it entertaining.
rl231: 6
Cute idea using twitter! The story was believable, the things they said were a little outrageous, but that's what makes it funny. A picture or graphic of some sort would have helped, but the basic idea was there! I would challenge you to flesh it out a little more to make it stand out.
Jax: 7
Homeboy, you can do better. It had some clever stuff in there, especially the part about Azealia not being noticed for "just over a minute" and her getting in a feud with the NYPD. The presentation was a little messy but it wasn't distractingly bad. I would challenge you to go even further next time, make your entries as outrageous as I know you can and it'll really stand out.
e437: 6
Those graphics are a MESS! The story was funny, especially the dig at Adele's weight. I wish you'd made Mariah shadier in her comment, and I didn't get Madonna's role, but overall it was an entertaining entry.
ririfan: -1
YOU HAD KATY PERRY
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Gold Team:
Starships: 7/10
This was another story based scandal then a scandal with a story, but this seemed to be more of a reality TV show episode tho so its okay. What would seem like a better title is "Demi and Gaga continue to piss out Music with Ke$ha". The coloring was cute tho and so was the centering lol
Nasiir15: 5.8/10
This was more a non-event more then a scandal, but it was cute I guess. The Ke$ha piss story, the Madonna vs. Cher dilemma, I guess it was okay. Although the title I think did not do thee article as much justice, I mean the Ke$ha piss and what Madonna pulled out of her pants, Those would have caught my eye as to what the scandal was then "MDNA: The Re-Up Album Signing Brawl"
Cirtus: 5/10
FYI people don't come out as Transgender

Being transgender is only a change someone makes because that was the gender they always have been and it is not something they change like sexuality can change. But I might have just read too much into your new article title, "comes out" = telling everyone I am of a new gender...
I think the article was supposed to be scandalous but it was more defaming Chris Brown's reputation ( trolling to seem as if he isn't intelligent) but it didn't really do much with the Jason Derulo beef (well it was more actually i couldn't understand the "beef" he had on twitter). Anyways, cool pic and centering
CBXC: 10/10
greast formatting (and picture). How outrageous does this story seem eh? JT's teeth getting stuck, the ironic song lyric in which Bruno's Johnson sticks out, and then the alleged story which did happen after JT's scandal occured lol. It all sounded oddly realistic and did indeed seem scandalous.
CrazyCat: 7.9/10
I think if you stuck with the first part of the story with the Bra/spitting scandal and stated "allegingly Rihanna laughed at Ciara and Michelle after a visit to their prison (this is a summarized), then the scandal wouldn't seem as scattered as it did. I do like the background, pictures, and the formatting I saw in the PM you sent me. posting it in the thread did not do it justice
Timber: 9.5/10
Now for the formating of the article I was not really as impressed, but this article was very straight to the point and very easy to understand. I'm not sire how there was more people than I asked to be in the story, but nonetheless this is a fun article to read and I would actually realistically be shocked if this happened and went down like this. Excellent work, just work on your formatting
Green Team:
FunkyDinevo: 10/10
Your own magazine

and Melvin joining along in this scandal

This entry showed you place a lot of effort into both the story and the formatting itself. I can't actually believe Melvin decided to spill all this hot tea for Funky's magazine in fact. Its all so scandalous and rediculous that I have to applaud you. I also love the little side articles of 3 moderators lol.
MusicKid203: 5/10
I was hoping for something scandal involving underlying homosexual stories from the three big country stars, but this scandal was actually confusing. The first picture is about what exactly? is it regarding an article about Hunter Haynes talking about Blake Shelton and Keith Urban, okay. Then the second picture seemed to be more of the real story: a rape and a murder. But how exactly is Hunter Haynes speaking out if there is an article saying Blake & Keith Killed him? I don't get it.
richa70: 3/10
I like the direction the article could have gone in, but it pretty much was too flat to even be funny or intresting. At least you centered this and provided pictures
rl231: 5.5/10
Ahh a twitter war. Lorde was indeed the overall focus even if Avril started the twitter war. THis conversation sounds very SYG actually in the most beefy way. I wished their was some pictures of some sort or at least some twitter pictures (their are websites that make fake celebrity tweets out there), but at least you centered the article.
Jax: 9/10
I actually thought this was one of the cleaner cut scandals submitted. It was to the point, it was pretty laughable (I mean Rita trying to hurt Rita's non-existent baby was a cute chuckle), so this was a chill scandal. If the title had been "Azealia attempts to throw dow Angel Haze's Album release party" would have best suited this article (Angel wasn't as much of a focus of the scandal then Azealia). Oh and good work with the formatting
e437: 7/10
This was an okay story. Idk if the Mariah and Adele thing was more intresting then Madonna stealing Adele's Grammy's. Concentrating on 1 story would have been best. I liked odd but notable pictures that went with the story
ririfan21: 0

Idk if this is a strategy or what but at least send me a Nicki GIF
