Originally posted by PentegramPeterPan this is a song I wrote when I was 20 about coming out and how it's OKAY TO BE GAY!

The longevity, the impact, the legacy, etc.

I should post here

'Kite'
[V1]
Draw me
Draw me like a character
Call me
Call me for your adventures

Follow me
Follow me to paradise
It’s everything
Everything we dreamed it’d be

[H]
So if you’re brave enough
I’ll give you all my love
You got me far above
Anything I’ve felt before

[C]
You got me so high, scraping the skies
You’re the greatest thing gracing my eyes
I’m elevating up to brand new heights
You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite


[V2]
Hold me
Hold me close to beat as one
Tell me
Tell me love is never done

Caress me
Caress me like in my dreams
Carry me
Carry me to new extremes

[H]
So if you’re brave enough
I’ll give you all my love
You got me far above
Anything I’ve felt before

I hope you’re strong enough
Never said I won’t be rough
I could fit you like a glove
Oh, you’re everything and more

[H]
You got me so high, scraping the skies
You’re the greatest thing gracing my eyes
I’m elevating up to brand new heights
You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite


[B]
Try me as they might
You’re the only one I want
No one else for me, cause I’m
On top of the world just like a kite

[C]
You got me so high, scraping the skies
You’re the greatest thing gracing my eyes
I’m elevating up to brand new heights
You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite


[Outro]
Like a kite
Like a kite
You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite

Originally posted by AdamAL4 Well, I'll be honest, this was not what I was expecting based on the subject of this song. Very Bob Dylan-ish

Originally posted by Hugamari The longevity, the impact, the legacy, etc. I should post here 'Kite' [V1] Draw me Draw me like a character Call me Call me for your adventures Follow me Follow me to paradise It’s everything Everything we dreamed it’d be [H] So if you’re brave enough I’ll give you all my love You got me far above Anything I’ve felt before [C] You got me so high, scraping the skies You’re the greatest thing gracing my eyes I’m elevating up to brand new heights You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite [V2] Hold me Hold me close to beat as one Tell me Tell me love is never done Caress me Caress me like in my dreams Carry me Carry me to new extremes [H] So if you’re brave enough I’ll give you all my love You got me far above Anything I’ve felt before I hope you’re strong enough Never said I won’t be rough I could fit you like a glove Oh, you’re everything and more [H] You got me so high, scraping the skies You’re the greatest thing gracing my eyes I’m elevating up to brand new heights You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite [B] Try me as they might You’re the only one I want No one else for me, cause I’m On top of the world just like a kite [C] You got me so high, scraping the skies You’re the greatest thing gracing my eyes I’m elevating up to brand new heights You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite [Outro] Like a kite Like a kite You got my heart strings, fly me like a kite

Can I get someone to help me with a song? Privately?

I wrote like a basic structure.. But it needs to be polished up.

Freestylin

VERSE I
If I want you baby, that's something I cannot confess
You impress in that red dress, flex it, had our best night yet
If we wanna get crazy, we're lovin here to make some mess
You a bad bet, I confess, yes, going out of my head
Yeah

CHORUS
We still got our love on freestyle
No stayin there, shuffle for a long while
Going round and round to the beat like a wild child
Don't make a sound, get ideas from that wide smile

Ooh baby, yes, in that red dress, freestyle
Beat of this song got you dancin you a wild child

Ooh baby, yes, in that red dress, freestyle
Beat of this song got you dancin a wild child

VERSE II
Lean close, need a good dose, do the most on the dancefloor, bitch
Feel exposed, go low, it's a show, on the floor like this
I know you don't know the way song's been looking to go
Gimme more, with a kiss, real close, freestyle with a twist

CHORUS
We still got our love on freestyle
No stayin there, we can shuffle for a long while
Going round and round to the beat like a wild child
No, don't make a sound, get ideas from that wide smile

Ooh baby, yes, in that red dress, freestyle
Beat of this song got you dancin a wild child

Ooh baby, yes, in that red dress, freestyle
On and on and on and on
Beat of this son got you dancin like a wild child

BRIDGE
Freestyle to inferno
On the dancefloor
Feel this beat more

Freestyle to inferno
On the dancefloor
Feel this beat more

Tonight, we're gonna get creative, baby
We might get a little crazy, baby
I been hearing your freestyling's amazing, baby
Lookin in your eyes, good god, don't tame me!

Tonight, we're gonna get creative
We might get a little crazy
I been hearing your freestyling's amazin
Freestyle on the beat your mind is chasin

CHORUS
We still got our love on freestyle
No stayin there, we can shuffle for a long while
Going round and round to the beat like a wild child
No, don't make a sound, get ideas from that wide smile

Ooh baby, yes, in that red dress, freestyle
Beat of this song got you dancin like a wild child

Ooh baby, yes, in that red dress, freestyle
Beat of this song got you dancin like a wild child

Treat Me Like I'm Your Baby

VERSE I
Addicted to the flash of light in your eyes
Let them light up the night,
We reach heaven like a thousand times
This is out of sight & out of mind
It's a night gon wild
It's a blessing, just the way we like

HOOK
You not sure I should be him
But I'm guessin' you gon like this
Like the way the moves gon twist
Like the way this move gon hit

You not sure I should be him
On a line, that looks so thin
I can't win, why can't I win?
But tonight, the lights dim

CHORUS
Treat me like I'm your baby, tease me
Kiss me like you can't tame me, lead me
Treat me like you could save me, need me
Kiss me, cause we got all these reasons

Treat me like I'm your baby, tease me
Kiss me like you can't tame me, lead me
Treat me like you could save me, need me
Kiss me, cause we got all these reasons

VERSE II
Rejection is the motivator
And I'll still be here to love you later
Can't be clear that if tonight'll make ya
Be that night, tonight, the most amazin

Make ya be my baby, be my baby, oh
Be my baby, be my baby, oh
Selection is your complicator
Need more reasons, here's a demonstration

HOOK
You not sure I should be him
But I'm guessin' you gon like this
Like the way the moves gon twist
Like the way this move gon hit

You not sure I should be him
On a line, that looks so thin
I can't win, why can't I win?
But tonight, the lights dim

CHORUS
Treat me like I'm your baby, tease me
Kiss me like you can't tame me, lead me
Treat me like you could save me, need me
Kiss me, cause we got all these reasons

Treat me like I'm your baby, tease me
Kiss me like you can't tame me, lead me
Treat me like you could save me, need me
Kiss me, cause we got all these reasons

BRIDGE
Why you closin the page, closin the page?, baby
I'm your poison of shame, poison of shame, baby
In a prison of games, prison of games
That's still reason to play, reason to play baby

Why you closin the page, closin the page?, baby
I'm your poison of shame, poison of shame, baby
In a prison of games, prison of games
There's still reason to play, reason to play baby

But it's too much
Being away is not enough
Need you more with every touch
Can't lie now, call my bluff
Can't lie down, we're not down

CHORUS (repeats twice at the end)
Treat me like I'm your baby, tease me
Kiss me like you can't tame me, lead me
Treat me like you could save me, need me
Kiss me, cause we got all these reasons

Treat me like I'm your baby, tease me
Kiss me like you can't tame me, lead me
Treat me like you could save me, need me
Kiss me, cause we got all these reasons

OUTRO (overlaps second chorus at the end)
Make ya be my baby, be my baby, oh
Be my baby, be my baby, oh
I'm gon need you baby, need you baby, oh
Need to know, need to know

Why you closin the page, closin the page?, baby
I'm your poison of shame, poison of shame, baby
In a prison of games, prison of games
That's still reason to play, reason to play baby

Why you closin the page, closin the page?, baby
I'm your poison of shame, poison of shame, baby
In a prison of games, prison of games
That's still reason to play, reason to play baby

Obligatory bump. Lemme post one of my most recent songs I wrote

[V1]
You want me to take your hand
Well, I can’t my hands are tied
You formed a rope of promises
And made the knots out of your lies

You want me to say I care
Well, I won’t my lips are sealed
And nothing that could come from yours
Will help the scars you left to heal

[B]
You leave nothing to desire
My love for you has died
You used to light up my fire
Now nothing will ignite

[C]
So I’m gonna go
The finale of the show
I’ll be far away
You will remember the day

The day that I stopped trying
Stopped believing your lies
Yeah, somebody’s gonna cry
Tonight, it won’t be I

Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I

[V2]
You say you are sorry now
Well, I’m sorry that I tried
You don’t deserve a part of me
Or to even be on my mind

Now you want to compromise
Well, we can’t we good as gone
Gone with a flash before our eyes
For all the times you’ve done me wrong

[C]
So I’m gonna go
The finale of the show
I’ll be far away
You will remember the day

The day that I stopped trying
Stopped believing your lies
Yeah, somebody’s gonna cry
Tonight, it won’t be I

Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I

[B]
Tonight, it won’t be I
Who will fall for alibis
Who will be the one to try
To fix what’ll never repair

Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I

[C]
So I’m gonna go
The finale of the show
I’ll be far away
You will remember the day

The day that I stopped trying
Stopped believing your lies
Yeah, somebody’s gonna cry
Tonight, it won’t be I

Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I
Tonight, it won’t be I

Intro
Dee: Who’s the boy with a busy dady?
It’s Jeffery, it’s Jeffery!
Jeff: Who’s the girl that loves to stamp?
It’s Dee, it’s Dee!

Verse 1 (Jeff)
I could shop at five or six stores but I only want you
You left a stamp on my heart, #23 blue
I’ll get you screaming louder than Amy Rhodes
Saying “to ti ya” looking at Adam’s toes

Verse 2 (Dee)
I can call you Monte cuz you take the cake
You’re the Best Baker musicfan09 could make
So meet me on Wednesday in room N135
(redo this later)

Chorus 1 (Jeff and Dee)
So give me a taste of your rainbow sponge
Your Finnnn;;gerprints on me, you can use your tongue
“The noise!” we’re making, it’s one night we won’t sleep
With looks so good, you could be on Kiii-TV!
So hashtag love me

Verse 3 (Jeff)
Bending you over the stamping table
You’ll be less straight than Joey Graceffa
Strip for me like Kyle when he’s on web came
Love you more than Mr.Link hates Tournament games

Verse 4 (Dee)
It’s hood in the morning, I’m up and I’m yawning
We don’t need friends when we’re Carla Shaw-ing
When you’re going down, make me scream it out
“Wepa wepa wepa w-w-wepa!”

Chorus 1 (Jeff and Dee)
So give me a taste of your rainbow sponge
Your Finnnn;;gerprints on me, you can use your tongue
“The noise!” we’re making, it’s one night we won’t sleep
With looks so good, you could be on Kiii-TV!
So hashtag love me

Bridge (Jeff and Dee)
So let’s make love in the closet, we might see Kool-Aids-King
Service is sell and selling is service
Compared to you, the others look like Remember’s graphics
We don’t pray to God because we’re Saytunic

Chorus 1 (Jeff and Dee)
So give me a taste of your rainbow sponge
Your Finnnn;;gerprints on me, you can use your tongue
“The noise!” we’re making, it’s one night we won’t sleep
With looks so good, you could be on Kiii-TV!
So hashtag love me

Outro
Dee: Who’s the boy with a busy dady?
It’s Jeffery, it’s Jeffery!
Jeff: Who’s the girl that loves to stamp?
It’s Dee, it’s Dee!

Hey, I had an idea to show you guys what I've really been working on. So, I have two ideas for "albums" and I wanted to share with you the two unfinished songs that embody the albums best.



https://soundcloud.com/nait_phoenix/matrix-rhythmicity


This one is "Matrix"; plays with the idea of "going down the rabbit hole", but with less squid monsters attack your spaceship. It, like most of the songs on the album it follows, is R&B, but has the electronic feel still, and very fun to dance to.



https://soundcloud.com/nait_phoenix/alien-alienation


This one is "Alien"; a mysterious and lonely song, but also danceable. It, like most of the songs on the album it follows, delves into some of my fears for the coming days.

Whichever one you like the most, love it and the one that gets the most love gets to be the catalyst for the next album I put out. Thank you for listening!

Originally posted by NeonSebert i m writting lyrics for 3 years already and i tried to make instrumental but it s too difficult

Fly me far across the world
With your love, just take it slow
Like tomorrow we'll be gone
And the same bed will be cold


I just wrote this. It popped up in my head.

Lyrics:

We talked everyday
Sometimes I even stayed up late
I thought we were getting closer (getting closer) (verse)
But, I guess it doesnt work that way

I wrote a song about you
Telling you my feelings
I always mentioned your name (verse)
Atleast ten times a day

But
Now I know and now I see
The truth will help me, set me free
No more tears and no more lies (chorus)
The truth will help, me survive
(The truth will help me survive)

I thought you felt like this
I never got to feel your kiss
Now, things won't be the same (verse)
But I guess that's just the way life is

I know, your not to blame
You never felt the same
It's just the way my story goes (verse)
But I'm not at the end of the road

But
Now I know and now I see
The truth will help me, set me free
No more tears and no more lies (chorus)
The truth will help, me survive

Maybe one day, we'll meet
When your walking down the street (bridge)
You'll see my face again
And you would turn away
From me

But
Now I know and now I see
The truth will help me, set me free
No more tears and no more lies (chorus)
The truth will help, me survive