The instrumental is amazing, especially the inclusion of those Arabian-inspired strings - very refreshing.
The chorus is fantastic, but it feels like it was ripped and pasted from a completely different song, doesn't flow with the sub-par verses at all.
And I actually don't mind the opening. "I killed my poor friend" would be a killer way to open the album, just needs a tweak in the production and vocals - she sounds so monotonous & static (Like on the majority of BTW), then again, it is just a demo.