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!!Judges Comments!!
Hugamari:
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funnellegs - 7/10
I like the choice of words, but for the first time with you I don't think all of the lines work too well together.
"Shouldn’t be so complicated for all of us to get along
If we were united, together, we’d be SO strong"
I just think if you'd added the so, it would have made it much easier to read. it's just not as good as stuff you've done before basically. But good work and I can't wait to see what you do next week, as usual
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ImARudeBoy - 9/10
I really think this was a solid piece of work. Agreeing with FL, some of it didn't necessarily flow, but in general, I felt what you were trying to say. Good job!
AdamAL4:
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funnellegs - 10/10
I don't really know what changed with you, but the verses of this are insaneeeeely good. I love the way the second verse just rolls off the tongue. It's brilliantly written and so hook-ready it's unbelievable.
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ImARudeBoy - 10/10
Fantastic. I don't have any critiques. Massive improvement, my friend.
Kavish:
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funnellegs - 9/10
This is intense! I love how with your songwriting it always digs a bit deeper than anyone else. You find an emotional core to the topic and really run with it. Love it!
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ImARudeBoy - 8/10
You always know how to strike a heart string, but that doesn't necessarily mean the song is great. It is a strong set of lyrics, but I just didn't love it as much of the entries.
DripDrip:
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funnellegs - 8/10
Very, very good! The chorus sounds so carefree and doesn't force the aim of the challenge on the reader. It's very carefree but serious at the same time somehow, great job
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ImARudeBoy - 7/10
Good. An awesome hook, but kind of bland verses. Felt kind of wishy-washy, but it is still a solid piece of work, but not enough for me to love it. The verses feel so dark and sad, while the chorus is uplifting, it's like combining two emotions. Like... imagine having a song with the Wide Awake verses with a Part Of Me chorus, that's kind of how I feel about this. But maybe I just interpreted it different.
I can't at me thinking I would leave this round.