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Tournament: ATRL's Platinum Hit | Season 2 | Episode 9: New Assignment!
Member Since: 11/16/2011
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The last TWO safe are:
 DripDrip
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funnellegs - 8/10
I like that this is kind of like "I got through something, I'm good" because you've kinda put a different spin on it to most of the others who make it a current thing. Nice work.
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ImARudeBoy - 6/10
Very "eh" for me. I love that it's different and interesting, but it just lacks depth and just isn't as memorable as I would like. In the end, it was a good submission.
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The final person safe is...
AdamAL4
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funnellegs - 6/10
I'm a bit disappointed, only because I've read songs you posted pre-competition and the emotion in this feels very forced compared to others songs.
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ImARudeBoy - 7/10
Not as strong as some of the competitors and I hope you step up your game soon, but it was still a good first song.
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Member Since: 3/27/2012
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Oh thank you I'm safe 
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Eliminated:
Lucky#17
gettsleazy
BadBitches
theoyella jukebox
Gavin4713
Arturdork
None of y'all even bothered to submit. 
While the ATRL lag could be an excuse, but sorry, you missed the deadline- even when I did extend it by 12 hours.
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Member Since: 7/15/2012
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14 out of 20 isn't a bad turn out! 
So hew is the winner of this round?
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Yas DeityDeity and Slaydam are safe  Can't wait til next round.
Pretty sure Kavish won, and I got second. Not sure after that.
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Member Since: 9/15/2012
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Oh my ****
As for the bad score it was expected. An empowerment anthem doesn't leave much room for artistic creativity in the lyrics.
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Okay, I double checked - Kavish definitely won this round. Congratulations Kavish.
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
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yay,  can't wait for the next round.
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ATRL Contributor
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
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so when will the winners' lyrics be posted? I wanna read them so I can learn something 
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Member Since: 6/30/2012
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NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
Not me and my lazy ass making me be eliminated.
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Hew wants to see the runner-up's lyrics, who only lost by 1 judge point? 
Reign
[V1]
You wake up every morning and you just feel so useless
Your parents oblivious - people are ruthless
You go to sleep crying and trying your hardest
To make it out alive of the days that are darkest
But it feels like on the inside, you're already dead
Seems like nobody cares, and you're ignored instead
But nobody knows you, or what you can do
Never given a chance - what else is new?
[h]
But there will be a day when you come out on top
You're running the show, and you can not be stopped
The people once taunting will now be applauding
And at the end of it, you can say
[c]
I made it through the storm, now I got a reign of my own
I no longer feel torn, or the pain of being alone
Say goodbye to the life that you had once known...
Once you make it through the storm, you'll have a reign of your own
[v2]
Right now it seems hopeless and you can't even fathom
That more than just madness and sadness could happen
And none are the wiser - you're fed up and tired
Of deceivers and leavers - bullies and liars
Maybe nothing is real if you ignore how you feel
Go away from the world and lock it up in a seal
But one day you'll have to stand up and face your beasts
'cause weakness is a meal that a wicked man feasts
[h]
And there will be a day when you come out on top
You're running the show, and you can not be stopped
The people once taunting will now be applauding
And at the end of it, you can say
[c]
I made it through the storm, now I got a reign of my own
I no longer feel torn, or the pain of being alone
Say goodbye to the life that you had once known...
Once you make it through the storm, you'll have a reign of your own
[b]
(go!)
Give it all you got
(go, go, go!)
Get everything you want
(go!)
Rise up to the fight
(go, go, go!)
Grace the sky to new heights
(go...go, go, go!)
[c]
I made it through the storm, now I got a reign of my own
I no longer feel torn, or the pain of being alone
I'll say goodbye to the life that I had once known
I made it through the storm, now I have a reign of my own
...now I have a reign of my own
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Originally posted by Hugamari
Hew wants to see the runner-up's lyrics, who only lost by 1 judge point?
Reign
[V1]
You wake up every morning and you just feel so useless
Your parents oblivious - people are ruthless
You go to sleep crying and trying your hardest
To make it out alive of the days that are darkest
But it feels like on the inside, you're already dead
Seems like nobody cares, and you're ignored instead
But nobody knows you, or what you can do
Never given a chance - what else is new?
[h]
But there will be a day when you come out on top
You're running the show, and you can not be stopped
The people once taunting will now be applauding
And at the end of it, you can say
[c]
I made it through the storm, now I got a reign of my own
I no longer feel torn, or the pain of being alone
Say goodbye to the life that you had once known...
Once you make it through the storm, you'll have a reign of your own
[v2]
Right now it seems hopeless and you can't even fathom
That more than just madness and sadness could happen
And none are the wiser - you're fed up and tired
Of deceivers and leavers - bullies and liars
Maybe nothing is real if you ignore how you feel
Go away from the world and lock it up in a seal
But one day you'll have to stand up and face your beasts
'cause weakness is a meal that a wicked man feasts
[h]
And there will be a day when you come out on top
You're running the show, and you can not be stopped
The people once taunting will now be applauding
And at the end of it, you can say
[c]
I made it through the storm, now I got a reign of my own
I no longer feel torn, or the pain of being alone
Say goodbye to the life that you had once known...
Once you make it through the storm, you'll have a reign of your own
[b]
(go!)
Give it all you got
(go, go, go!)
Get everything you want
(go!)
Rise up to the fight
(go, go, go!)
Grace the sky to new heights
(go...go, go, go!)
[c]
I made it through the storm, now I got a reign of my own
I no longer feel torn, or the pain of being alone
I'll say goodbye to the life that I had once known
I made it through the storm, now I have a reign of my own
...now I have a reign of my own |
 I like really like this. It has a strong message and it's conveyed well. Good work.
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Thank you 
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Why don't the judges point out the flaws of my lyrics? 
and btw, nice lyrics huga. you deserve it
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Btw guys, check out my newest blog post 
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OFFICIAL PLATINUM HIT AVERAGES
DripDrip: Funnellegs - 8/10, IARB - 6/10 Avg. 7/10
AdamAL4: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 7/10 Avg. 6.5/10
Doodledot: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB - 8/10 Ang. 7.5/10
Hugamari: Funnellegs & IARB - 9/10, Avg. 9/10 (Second place)
Insidepariscloset: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 7/10 Avg. 6.5/10
Nait Phoenix: Funnellegs & IARB: 8/10, Avg. 8/10
Kavish: Funnellegs - 9/10, IARB 10/10, Avg. 9.5/10 (First place)
Midnight: Funnellegs - 9/10, IARB 8/10, Avg. 8.5/10 (Third place)
Danny789: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB 5/10, Avg. 6/10
Kylespearsfenty: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB - 8/10, Avg. 7.5/10
Swiftie13: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 5/10, Avg. 5.5/10
TheSeenScene: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB - 8/10, Avg. 7.5/10
Jack!: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 7/10, Avg. 6.5/10
Mastamind: Funnellegs - 5/10, IARB - 4/10, Avg. 4.5/10
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The winning lyrics:
Survive The Unjust
Tears drained in a smile's sanctuary,
a skilled face of denial and pretense,
you mock the world that mocks you.
You hide in the dark of the imaginary,
the reality bears you only non-sense,
you run from the world that runs you.
Even lotuses breathe in the mud and dust,
but they still thrive and survive the Unjust.
You don't have to wear your heart on your sleeve,
you just have to hold it tightly, lovely, and believe.
The blank place you live in will be filled someday,
and the broken wings of your heart will fly, away.
Love is just a play of lust and misery,
scars are what you live with romance,
you close the doors that open for you.
'Life' is just an ironic word in your diary,
your death is the witnessing audience,
you curse at the doors that bless you.
Even lotuses breathe in the mud and dust,
but they still thrive and survive the Unjust.
You don't have to wear your heart on your sleeve,
you just have to hold it tightly, lovely, and believe.
The blank place you live in will be filled someday,
and the broken wings of your heart will fly, away.
For nightmares do not last forever,
you'll wake up, brighter than the sun.
You are a strong, walking survivor,
fighting the odds, powerful like a gun,
You've been breathing in the mud and dust,
and now you'll thrive and survive the Unjust.
You don't have to wear your heart on your sleeve,
you just have to hold it tightly, lovely, and believe.
The blank place you live in will be filled someday,
and the broken wings of your heart will fly, away.
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In order
1. Kavish: Funnellegs - 9/10, IARB 10/10, Avg. 9.5/10 (First place)
2. Hugamari: Funnellegs & IARB - 9/10, Avg. 9/10 (Second place)
3. Midnight: Funnellegs - 9/10, IARB 8/10, Avg. 8.5/10 (Third place)
4. Nait Phoenix: Funnellegs & IARB: 8/10, Avg. 8/10
5. Kylespearsfenty: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB - 8/10, Avg. 7.5/10
5. TheSeenScene: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB - 8/10, Avg. 7.5/10
5. Doodledot: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB - 8/10 Ang. 7.5/10
8. DripDrip: Funnellegs - 8/10, IARB - 6/10 Avg. 7/10
9. AdamAL4: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 7/10 Avg. 6.5/10
9. Insidepariscloset: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 7/10 Avg. 6.5/10
9. Jack!: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 7/10, Avg. 6.5/10
12. Danny789: Funnellegs - 7/10, IARB 5/10, Avg. 6/10
13. Swiftie13: Funnellegs - 6/10, IARB - 5/10, Avg. 5.5/10
14. Mastamind: Funnellegs - 5/10, IARB - 4/10, Avg. 4.5/10
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